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by NessaC

schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i just read your entire story and it was very interesting...i was a bit confused with it at first...i couldn't tell if it had a historical setting or if it was contemporary...you used historical things, but your language was modern...like a chick night...i thought that it was sad how the fahter killed his daughter and then how the heroine killed herslef and then her loved killed himself...i think that it is sad how he blamed his wife, she really was just a victim in the whole thing. ..she didn't ask for him to cheat on her...so anyway...nice job.

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