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May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's taken me three weeks to read this, and i love it! Lord Darcia is the most sexy creature alive and i want him! You had me crying like a baby at the end of this.....i need to know what happens next so on to Lord of the West!
Five stars!
Annie
Five stars!
Annie
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June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please tell me your thinking about getting this published because if your not your a fool
I have never read a more tantalizing story in so long and thats means actual novels too ive been stuck on this story for the past 5 days and i have to tell you thats a lot of reading for me , this is because i would normally finish a story with 50 chapters and finish within 2 days <33 you even got me out of my writers block because ive started my own story <33 no doubt it wont be compared to yours in the least but yeah cant wait to start up on the sequel
I have never read a more tantalizing story in so long and thats means actual novels too ive been stuck on this story for the past 5 days and i have to tell you thats a lot of reading for me , this is because i would normally finish a story with 50 chapters and finish within 2 days <33 you even got me out of my writers block because ive started my own story <33 no doubt it wont be compared to yours in the least but yeah cant wait to start up on the sequel
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that is a long story. I could not stop reading it my eyeballs are actuly bleeding! your style developes through the story. And I'm in love with lord Darcia and Veione. I like how no one just jumps in to a relationship, i can't wait for the next instalmet. This is truly epic, have you thought of geting it published?
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April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Review chapters 38 and 39
Okaaaaayyyy.... I really almost had a heart attack. The way you said you were going to "end it" I thought you meant the whole story. But I am clam now, so..
I didn't think Leoff was going to get a bad demon in his sword, maybe a difficult one, but not - want to destroy everyone - kind of demon. But I'm sure Leoff will give it a fight, just not to the end - OK. Also, that tart, Seiena, just can't let go. Man, I would kind of like to see her meat Loke, but that would most likely be worse for Leoff.
I hope you know how great your writing is, I was completely hooked from the first sentence I read and I look forward to read the next part of this wonderfull story. See you in part 2.
Okaaaaayyyy.... I really almost had a heart attack. The way you said you were going to "end it" I thought you meant the whole story. But I am clam now, so..
I didn't think Leoff was going to get a bad demon in his sword, maybe a difficult one, but not - want to destroy everyone - kind of demon. But I'm sure Leoff will give it a fight, just not to the end - OK. Also, that tart, Seiena, just can't let go. Man, I would kind of like to see her meat Loke, but that would most likely be worse for Leoff.
I hope you know how great your writing is, I was completely hooked from the first sentence I read and I look forward to read the next part of this wonderfull story. See you in part 2.
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, i love this story. I love the twist's and turns, and i love how daen and darcia dont just jump in to things. I kept hoping that leoff and Vas get togther even through i'm not usualy intrested in slash fiction. I'm definatly looking forward to seeing how it goes in the next part. I'm litraly staying up to read this it's so good!
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, awesome! You ended it at a great point. It's not really closure, but it is. It closes this chapter of Dean's life, yet opens another entirely. It makes your readers want to read more! I love you, Di! *bounces off to profile to see if there's another story up yet. LOL
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*punches the air* Oho! Loke is a "Don't fuck with me" kinda blade! I love it, but I gotta say, I do hope Leoff manages to keep him at least semi under control! Oh this is incredible. And Awww! Vas got a cuddle out of it! LOL Keep up the awesome work, Di and please update soon!
And tankies for the link! I hope the LOTRers take a look!
Love Luinil
And tankies for the link! I hope the LOTRers take a look!
Love Luinil
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March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic as ever... but at least I finished the housework today first!
I sent an email... let me know.
I sent an email... let me know.
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Review chapters 36 and 37
OH MY GOD!!! WOW!!! That was GREAT!!!!
Ok the easy one - Alwen now being part of Darcia new recruits is great. He really deserves it, but during the battle I hope he will not have to fight his own brothers. This is one of those cruel things that you like to do to me, but you're right it's for the plot and you make it great.
Now Leoff and Daen. It seems their time apart has hurt their brother/sister relationship. He seemed so much like a man - a little dismissing the way he talk about her "womanly emotions". But then he was her little brother again when he grab her skirt and beg her to stay. When he asked if she loved Darcia more then him, my heart broke. I am glad that Leoff now knows about Terent's attack on Daen, now he just need to realize that Gaius is also bad. I will admit I was completely disappointed in Daen when she wouldn't tell Leoff the sword's name or help him break out (thank god for Veoine and Timor). However, with the torture she suffered form Darica I was proud, impressed, and happy that now she has done something for Leoff.
Then Darcia and Daen. Wow, I really didn't think he would have been that mad. I also didn't know he had that bad of a DARK side. I didn't think she would have the courage to leave the room, but I am glad she did. He did need time to think. Yet, with all the hurt and misunderstandings between them, they still had a great good-bye. A kiss and his promise to return, I was in tears.
Ok the lose ends - WHAT! Cousins on his father side, but they don't have the same last name. Oh - and the priestess is ANOTHER relative on daddy's side, they called her Auntie. Exactly how many kids did Darcia grandfather have? Ok, I can not begin to tell you how great I think your writing is, just know that it is. Also, I know you must be cruel, just don't make me cry or at least try not to.
I know I must wait, but please update soon.
OH MY GOD!!! WOW!!! That was GREAT!!!!
Ok the easy one - Alwen now being part of Darcia new recruits is great. He really deserves it, but during the battle I hope he will not have to fight his own brothers. This is one of those cruel things that you like to do to me, but you're right it's for the plot and you make it great.
Now Leoff and Daen. It seems their time apart has hurt their brother/sister relationship. He seemed so much like a man - a little dismissing the way he talk about her "womanly emotions". But then he was her little brother again when he grab her skirt and beg her to stay. When he asked if she loved Darcia more then him, my heart broke. I am glad that Leoff now knows about Terent's attack on Daen, now he just need to realize that Gaius is also bad. I will admit I was completely disappointed in Daen when she wouldn't tell Leoff the sword's name or help him break out (thank god for Veoine and Timor). However, with the torture she suffered form Darica I was proud, impressed, and happy that now she has done something for Leoff.
Then Darcia and Daen. Wow, I really didn't think he would have been that mad. I also didn't know he had that bad of a DARK side. I didn't think she would have the courage to leave the room, but I am glad she did. He did need time to think. Yet, with all the hurt and misunderstandings between them, they still had a great good-bye. A kiss and his promise to return, I was in tears.
Ok the lose ends - WHAT! Cousins on his father side, but they don't have the same last name. Oh - and the priestess is ANOTHER relative on daddy's side, they called her Auntie. Exactly how many kids did Darcia grandfather have? Ok, I can not begin to tell you how great I think your writing is, just know that it is. Also, I know you must be cruel, just don't make me cry or at least try not to.
I know I must wait, but please update soon.
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm what a pretty darkly written chapter. There was desire, passion, despair, pain, grief and anger all collected in one tasty mix.
Good writing dear :) can't wait to read what happens next. I fear somewhat for Darcia and I am heartbroken for Daen. I love their couplings.
Good writing dear :) can't wait to read what happens next. I fear somewhat for Darcia and I am heartbroken for Daen. I love their couplings.