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Wow, what a great, if not disturbing story! lol These three chapters were so well-written! :)

I guess I want to find out why Gabe seduced, molested,(whatever you want to call it,)his little brother. The kid's twelve for God's sakes! Although I would have thought younger, since twelve year olds are usually in 7th grade. Well, 12-13 year olds. Anyway, no matter, despite the disturbing story line, it was a great story! I'm really curious to know why Gabe was meeting w/the principal of Dyne's (cool name, btw)school and how he got the principal to agree to get everyone in one spot. What's up with that?

I'm sorry to hear that was the end to the story. You did a great job, but left many questions! lol

Ha, I was reading through your reviews when I realized you started this story three years ago!!!!! lol

And then I noticed THAT I REVIEWED THIS STORY A YEAR AND A HALF AGO! I found that so funny! lol Anyway, it was an awesome story and I'm sorry it's over. Great job! :)

I really like this, it's seriously well written and hot! Your authors note, with info about ur characters was really helpful in imagining the characters n building their character, but would of perhaps been more suited at the start of the story.
Loved Gabes collectedness and how it sorta dismantles when he's in the throes of passion, for lack of a better word lol. Love that these feelings he has for his brother seem real as apposed to a game as he makes it out to be.
Really dissapointed that there's only three chapters, would have loved to read more of u as I think ur brilliant. If u do continue or write something else alng the same line, can u please email me? My add is lil.miss.gg@hotmail.com

I don't normally read stories about incest (it's NOT a game the whole family can play) Hahahaha Anyway.....I got so caught up in your excellent writing that I couldn't stop if I wanted to! You write so beautifully, your descriptions and emotions just jump out through your words. (Does that make sense?) Excellent story. I noticed you started this two years ago, I hope it won't take another two years for chapter 3 ????????

I'm so glad you added another chapter to this story. I loved it from the moment I read it; the storyline looks promising. Keep writing please.

Good story. Very funny.Dyne and Gabe ahave a very good chemistry going.

Niice dude! Hope you update soon yeah?

This was a beautiful story and a must read.
I had enjoyed every second of this.
Bravo!

>> Fuhrer: Andy Worden

I've alway commended you on your writing skills simply based on the reviews that I've received from you, but I now know for an absolute fact what a fantastic writer you are. I am in awe by your use of descriptions, both physical and mental, because a lot of the time in sexual pieces we often miss a sense of what's going on in the participant's head and to me that's pretty disappointing because in my opinion the thought process during sex can be one of the most erotic things to read about. I could only hope to do anywhere near as well as you for my story. It was also believable the way your wrote the narrator's attitude towards the situation, considering his lack of experience and it was great to read how he was so obviously new to the situation and yet eager to participate as well. Oh, and yeah, did I mention this was fucking hot? No seriously, really hot? Incredibly HOT? Well, I've mentioned it now. I've always had a weakness for incest, and homosexual incest is one of my favorite guilty pleasures. You writing is superb and I wish that there were more writers like you so I wouldn't have to rummage through a bunch of junk just to find a good piece. You have become one of my favorite people on this site, not only for your incredible reviews but your incredible writing as well. I wish I could give you a poetic review like you deserve, but I am afraid this heartfelt review is the best I can do. Thank you, and I urge you to write more soon.

TillThatTime

I hope there is more of this coming our way... ne?