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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Life's Movie is really beautiful so far.
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like it!!
i've read another story before where a man begins to fall in love with a man who is in a coma (whom he'd never met before) and by the time they had interacted for a few days he was totally in love with him. and i'm interested to see where this story will be taken because it is just so different from that other story.
we've seen Patrick and gotten a bit of a grasp of his character but because of what has happened, throughout the piece his emotions will be changing him fundamentally and i hope your able to grasp that well in your writing.
till next time
i've read another story before where a man begins to fall in love with a man who is in a coma (whom he'd never met before) and by the time they had interacted for a few days he was totally in love with him. and i'm interested to see where this story will be taken because it is just so different from that other story.
we've seen Patrick and gotten a bit of a grasp of his character but because of what has happened, throughout the piece his emotions will be changing him fundamentally and i hope your able to grasp that well in your writing.
till next time
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok i'm hooked. please update!!
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow interesting.
i hope we wont wait too long for him to wake up and to interact....
great idea.
i hope we wont wait too long for him to wake up and to interact....
great idea.
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh wow i love it! so glad i found it.
its great so far. great story line. good plots are hide to find. ^_^
cant wait for the update! just hope i dont miss it.
(if you want you can email me a link to any updates you do because i think i'll be very interested in this story)
its great so far. great story line. good plots are hide to find. ^_^
cant wait for the update! just hope i dont miss it.
(if you want you can email me a link to any updates you do because i think i'll be very interested in this story)
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November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is this a dagger I see before me? Wait, no, sorry...wrong line. *coughcough* *grandly* Is this a new fic I see before me?
I am on tenterhooks after that first chapter. I have to say that I've never seen a precisely similar premise to this before and I am v v intruiged to see where this will go, how it will develop etc. You set a good background for Patrick in this chapter and now everything lays before us and I am quite excitited. I absolutely LOVE the idea of him filming everything for when he comes out of the coma, that is such a good idea and many possibilities!
I am on tenterhooks after that first chapter. I have to say that I've never seen a precisely similar premise to this before and I am v v intruiged to see where this will go, how it will develop etc. You set a good background for Patrick in this chapter and now everything lays before us and I am quite excitited. I absolutely LOVE the idea of him filming everything for when he comes out of the coma, that is such a good idea and many possibilities!
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November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry that I was expecting this to be a sad excuse and stereotypical "community service for the guy you hurt" fic (and I find it really odd that there IS one of those stereotypes ahaha), BUT! I am NOT sorry that I decided to check it out anyway. What an absolutely awesome unique plot! Usually I dislike first person, but it's super great when it is important to the story.
Very cool, what an interesting, creative mind he has. (: Keep up the awesome work. And continue to come up with unique formatting! Ahah. <33 (:
Very cool, what an interesting, creative mind he has. (: Keep up the awesome work. And continue to come up with unique formatting! Ahah. <33 (:
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November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooohhh, this sounds interesting. Then again, all of your stories have been interesting! I'll definitely keep my eye on this one (as well as Cultured Spirit; seems to be my current fave especially when I'm having a bad day... like every day this week, haha). Hope to see an update soon. :D
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November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lik eit
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November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, new fic! Looks interesting so far, I like the idea and the voice of your character. I'm looking forward to seeing how it plays out, especially after I saw who the author was. Keep it up please!