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Wow I'm going to have to ignore this story until you finish because every single time you leave me hanging like this it drives me nuts. You have no --idea-- how much this story fascinates and draws me in. The story line is just so amazing!

Yay! Edwin's finally going to wake up, huh? Then the real fun will start, haha. Wonder how forgiving Edwin will be... hmm, guess I'll just have to wait and see!

love the story XD
u write really well .. with a fab original story line
so glad i found this
update real soon plz :D xX

This chapter makes this fic have a touch of 'A Wonderful Life' but in a good way. It's interesting how some people are affected directly by the coma and with good reason - Emily - and others just use the incident to grab onto for their own fun. Also, I liked the touch of first kiss, a good way to build Edwin's character while he's still unconcious. I am seriously enjoying this fic.

Ah, yes. Someone to break the norm of high-school-centric fics on this site. I'd been starting to believe that the integrity of aff's slash section was starting to dwindle. Apparently I was wrong; there's one good, worth-it author out here.

This is an amazing concept. And hey, shit like this really does happen. Whatever inspired you to write this, whether it was personal or something distant, must have been amazing. I'm amazed.

I have a personal attachment to this story. Nothing to do with drunks, nothing to do with car crashes or underage drinking binges. We all have that mistake, that life-changing moment that makes us stop and re-educate ourselves about... ourself. I will be following this story. And with each new chapter, I'll be thanking you for reminding me that I, you, them, all of us. We're human.

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Beautiful story! Something I've realized about your writing is that you always manage to move me (and not just in this story). I can't point if it's because your characters are so real to me ir because the dialog's is written to make my heart clench... Probably both! And of course,that it seems there's always something tragic in the characters and situations you write about.

Please update soon.

you are so cruel to me.
makingme wait so long for this chapter.
but i loved it.
worth the wait.
hey,update o.k no matter how much time is between chapt. but keep updating.
i'll burst into tear now because mixed tape,just acting,elephant,starfire and doesn't others aren't updated and probably never will be.
so you be good and update,finsih your story.

It's worth the wait for these chapters, because they're really *good*. I can see all the people in it and its two chapters in and I feel I know their backgrounds and what their home and school lives were like. I've vested an interest in them now because of that and I'm dying to see what happens next.

And I'm still so enamoured of the filming your life plan, effective as a plot device and also, a really cool idea!

T___T That was so sad...And yet at the end, it was really sweet!
I totally LOVED the update! It was great and I'm glad Patrick got to have a new friend at a time like this! Or else he would of gone nuts! ><

I also wonder when Edwin's going to wake up? And how things will be then?? humm... I can't wait to see what u've planned next!
Plz update again soon! 'cause I want to read more! LOL
Thanks for the awesome story! It's great! *hugs*

Hello Blindfolded!

That story is really warm. The idea is kinda fresh and the way you describe and write the story is not cliché and sappy. So I encourage you to keep writing because I think there is a great potential in here! :-)

Greetings
Nathaniel