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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh this is good. More soon please. That Lord Orin is icky though.
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
While the story is entertaining, I am confused. Remas' personality switches from a slave owner, to a man with deep passion. Now, normally this would be fine in a BDSM story. But the way you do it is quite, well, awful. To be honest. You have him be kind to his slave, and yet completely brutal as well. It doesn't fit. Either he is a cruel slave owner, or a kind one, who only does the punishing because of propriety.
You see, you have him pleasuring her as if he cared about it, and then a second or so later, he is causing her physical pain.
You see, you have him pleasuring her as if he cared about it, and then a second or so later, he is causing her physical pain.
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating it can't wait for more soon..
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update this soon missing it....
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very very good stoy
keep going and post soon
bye bye
keep going and post soon
bye bye
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You teaser...more please.....
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November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dam good story,keep up the good work and please write more
as soon as you can,I love the twist and the father is a real
bitch please upload more as soon as you can.
as soon as you can,I love the twist and the father is a real
bitch please upload more as soon as you can.
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November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please don't keep us on the edge post more soon...
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what the Hell that bastard........
Keep those chapters coming....
Keep those chapters coming....
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November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi MissJ just wanted to let you know that this is a FANTASTIC story.!!!!
Can't wait for more....
Can't wait for more....