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August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was good. Any more to the story?
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December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Love the story. The only thing I can tell you to do to make it better is to italicize the flashbacks, or put a divider in them or something, so that's it's more clear to the reader what it is. Other than that, keep writing!