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for Laptop

by AnaisWannabe

schedule September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I giggled like mad through this.
person cueball2
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Quite unusual.
person jeazard
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD Absolutely brilliant!
...I feel a completely new kind of empathy for my laptop. Am I too rough with his touchpad? Should I inject the mic and headphone cables with more care? *lol*
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I aim to write at least half as well as you do someday. I love this story :D
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's funny how I can't seem to figure out exactly what to call this story...it is, nonetheless, brilliant. And it gave me an idea, which I am now off to write. Ta!
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting how you make a laptop into a erotically tortured creature. I will not be able to look at mine the same way after this. Thank God I am never able to hook it up to a printer... nyah! ^.^ Maybe that's why its video card died... nyah! it lacked excitement...
person Niiro
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know...I happen to be on a laptop when I read this... I glanced at the USB port more than once...and had to take OUT the printer's USB plug, because naughty thoughts kept coming to my mind whenever I saw it shoved in the USB port of the laptop, squeezing in right on top of the USB plug of the modem...

0.o See what you do?

I'll never see any USB cord the same again!

Damn my imagination!!! Anais-sama...I applaud thee. No one could have written this better than you.
person delmaqua
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh...my...god, That was so wrong. I'm never going to look at a laptop the same way. It was lovely and wonderfully creative and smutty but the _images_ ahh i feel like my computer is glaring at me right now...oh dear i wonder how long it takes to get use to such torture.
person tgecko
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor (d)Ell!

Great story, as always. :)
person womo
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woah....this is the most strangest yet well written...uh...slash? fic i've ever read. er...very unique.