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December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very very interesting premise,
i would love to know what happens next
please update soon!
i would love to know what happens next
please update soon!
schedule
November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I really liked this!!!
Please don't just leave it like a side project... I want more!
Please don't just leave it like a side project... I want more!
schedule
November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i liked it i hope you continue
schedule
November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a great start, it certainly had me captured from line one. I hope you'll keep on updating this story!
schedule
November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was a really awesome start!! I can't wait for more from you! Update soon and keep up the good work writing!
-Mistaken
-Mistaken
schedule
November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting..........
i'd like to see where this is going to go.
very well written.
i'd like to see where this is going to go.
very well written.
schedule
October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it...i like it i like it i like it! I SOOOOOO hope that you'll keep writing more!
schedule
October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohhh the anticipation.. please post soon!
schedule
October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. I absolutely love your writinig style. I loved the open ending, The characters, everyting. pleasepleaseplease keep writing this. <3
schedule
October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm hooked. Please keep writing this.