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Ok first love the Omen/Owen scene! Hopefully Omen goes and has a heart to heart with himself.

And is it just me or did you right the whole Sam thing in without his father giving Sam a gender. Never once did his dad say he or she him or her - ummmm chapter was called his fathers son sooooooo are we to say they are more father and son then we thought?

Ok ready for the next chapter

Yes I was in a tizzy all through out the chapter! I really enjoyed the father and son bonding time. I almost forgot about Nicoli's parents so this was a good reconnection with them. I might be weird but I kept thinking Sam was a boy...Iol. I can't wait to find out what happens with the locket and the LH symbol in the floor. Great chapter! Can't wait for the other...btw I'm in a tizzy waiting to read chapter 81! Thanks for sticking with MD! You truly make this story come alive, and of course you know I'll be with you til the end!!!!

This really was a great chapter! I loved the time Nicoli got to spend with his father. I really liked getting to see the kind of man Lance is and the kind of son Nicoli is to him. They were really great together.

I enjoyed the interlude between Omen and Nicoli. I think Nicoli might have gotten through to Omen a bit when he compared what happened with his father, who was innocent, and what happened with Omen's father, who attacked first and knew what he was up against. I think that might have really given Omen something to consider and maybe tamped down his desire for revenge substantially...at least I hope it did! ;)

I didn't really get excited about Nicoli's discovery, I think I was too sated on the sweetness of the whole chapter to get worked up. LOL! I do think it's the first heart that he found though, and I really had no idea that the museum would be playing any role whatsoever! I think the next chapter is going to get pretty exciting.

I have a feeling that Dimitri has just been sitting back and watching, waiting for them to find the heart, so he can steal it away with no work or effort on his own behalf to find it.

WoW!!! Just found this story, have read almost half, OMG it's sooo exiting! Keep writing please, It's simply wonderful and superb witing. :D

Well, I am officially in a tizzy. Awesome chapter. And by the way...YAY!!!!!!! Andre lives. Just had to add that in there. Still very thrilled about it. I figured that when Nicoli went to the museum he'd end up stumbling into some kind of trouble because, well he just seems to find trouble everywhere, but I did not suspect it to be anything quite as important as what I'm thinking it is. And hopefully Nicoli's talk will help Omen come to the good side. I really want to like him but he is not cooperating with me and I just can't be buddy buddy with someone who is threatening the clan and Nicoli. Or Amelia. Or any of the other wonderful people in this story that I'm so fond of. Yeah, he definitely needs to behave himself. Can't wait for more.

Wow that was unexpected!!!! I never would have thought the museum to be important!!!! Mabye I didn' t get something but should I know what LH means? I really can't wait for the next part!!!!! Hope to see you soon!!

OH MY GOD!!!! -feels like running around in circles- Definitely worthy of readers going into tizzies... At first I had thought that little moment with Omen was what you had been talking about... but then.. oh my God... Totally.. Hadn't... been expecting THAT. My computer had broken down again. You should have seen the look on my face when I managed to fix it, logged on, and saw another update. AND... you would have laughed seeing my face at the end of the chapter. Epic. I can't wait for the next one.. This one totally made my day...

I NEED TO STOP CHECKING MY EMAIL BEFORE I DO MY HOMEWORK!

You did it again! lol

Nicoli has awesome parents. My mom and I used to play hooky all the time for my school too. It was fun.

And no, I really didn't expect the museum to play a big part!

Awwww, Ethan didn't even have a chance for a "Don't taze me bro!" with Omen. Omen's a dick. lol

And in the last chapter, I didn't really expect Omen and Andre's relationship to be any more complicated than it already is. Really, I didn't.

Ahhhh!! Dont stop there hahahahaaha ohhh i wanna know what happens!!! :D im so excited for next time! The father son moment was soooo cute made me smile :) Hope Owen straightens out!! Thank you!! Ah cant wait!!

AH!!! omg, thanks for continuin to update on time! I hope you can keep on cranking these chapters out weekly since only one of my fave authors have done it thus far and so you may be the 2nd! Anyway, oh God, I hate to admit this especially if you're expecting me to know but I have NO CLUE what LH means!! LOL am I supposed to? It's been So Damn Loooooong since I've actually reread the previous chapters so I probly forgot some important plot points D: My bad! I'll probly have to go bacc sometime to reread certain parts so no worries. AWESOME work again, dearest!

I noticed there were some errors. I'm 2 lazy to point them out now but you did mix up the "There" when it should have been "Their"... I think LOL, and you did "your" somewhere when it should have been "you're" an I recall you put "its" when it should've been "it's." Yeah just lettin you know in case you wanna fix it! I'm glad Omen felt bad/guilty bout the dad. It's great he apologized to Lance! Truly hope he listened/remembered what Nic told him regardin Andre! OMG! So the first heart is under the fucking museum! Sweet Jesus. Doubt anyone would've guessed it, me included hahaha! I am happy you are a motivated author again! SInce you're Live journal name is Darkness80, were you born in 1980? LOL, I've been wondering if you were THAT old. hehehe Please update asap!!