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schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good! Please write another chapter as soon as possible ^^
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooo more please!! Update quickly!!
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was great! Please write another chapter as soon as possible. :0
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was so cool
it is writen really well please continue soon!
i'm dying to know what happens next....XD
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi Darkness,
I liked it, very good start. He won't die, I hope :)
person Celtic Witch
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG what a good start to a great story. Will the unknown vampire (yet to be introduced) save Nicoli from a certain death and stop the Hunter? I can't wait to find out that and the events that led up to this cliff hanger. Please update next chapter soon.
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cliffhanger! Litterally, I look forward to seeing where this is going and hope you update soon!