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June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
...the scene with Conrad and Deloris had me smiling like a fool. I clapped my hands in glee.
You evil, evil woman.
It kind of made me wish Deloris wasn't dead too. I don't think Conrad sex would be weird then. Really.
And the plot thickens. I have a feeling that Nicoli is going to be the only one that is going to be able to use the hearts. Though it's just a feeling.
And I reread the chapter with the painting. Nicoli is going to get turned into a vampire at some point, isn't he? That whole part about him not looking older, but looking more experienced makes me think that. Maybe.
Lol all you get is my rambling thoughts.
...I was totally planning on doing my homework. Early this time. But I was still gonna do it.
You. Are. Psychic.
You evil, evil woman.
It kind of made me wish Deloris wasn't dead too. I don't think Conrad sex would be weird then. Really.
And the plot thickens. I have a feeling that Nicoli is going to be the only one that is going to be able to use the hearts. Though it's just a feeling.
And I reread the chapter with the painting. Nicoli is going to get turned into a vampire at some point, isn't he? That whole part about him not looking older, but looking more experienced makes me think that. Maybe.
Lol all you get is my rambling thoughts.
...I was totally planning on doing my homework. Early this time. But I was still gonna do it.
You. Are. Psychic.
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June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Hope Nic is ok. This makes me wonder...if he is really hurt, in which case this is highly likely since he's fucking unconscious, no one else can go past the barrier to try to help him right??? B/c he's the only one that could pass through. Or maybe they can all go to help him now, idk, i'll probly have to reread it to see if the barrier is still up. It would suck if they all have to wait for him to wake up. and hahahaaa, sure we all knew that it couldn't be ALL that easy for Nicoli. I knew something bad was to happen 2 him SO glad the first heart is here. FINALLY. Cant wait till they find all three hearts but wouldn't that be the end of the story?? Sad to see the story end when its time. This has been a FUN and GREAT ride so far. I may get emotional when it ends *cries. Anyway, AMAZING CHAPPIE! Was THRILLED you managed to update so soon after all...i was saddened to not see an update yesterday, but you managed to do it FAST again! Please update soon :D
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June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
U should join the slash pile forumz! u can talk slash and chat with others. i just joined. it's k u s g dot com!!! HOPE U DO u dont have 2 though!:D
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June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
My face definitely was priceless last chapter, but even more so this one. Best part... I was talking to a friend at the time,and was making undignified noises.... I made squee sounds the entire time. Around halfway I jumped up and down, yelling, 'There's gonna be a cliffhanger, I know it!!' Aaaaaand... At the end I nearly fell off my bed going, 'Noooooooo evil cliffhangerssss...' My friend was laughing so hard at me... Don't care.. Good story... hilarious reactions... Though I must say.. The chapter really did make my day. I can't wait for the next one. :)
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June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was absoloutly bloody fantastic!!!! Way the best chappie yet!!!! And I so can't wait for more!!!! The conrad and Doloris action was really sweet to bad they can't be together they are good for eachother!!! And Now the heat!!! Really didn't expect that!!! really hope Nicoli will be ok!!! Is the heat this heavy? Kind of had the impression!!!! Hope you update soon!!!!
P.S Thanks for the explanation of LH really didn't connect it with last hope^
P.S Thanks for the explanation of LH really didn't connect it with last hope^
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June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG TORTURE!!!! HAHAH i wanna know what happens AHHHHHHHHHHHHH And the part with Conrad sooo cute!! :D man im gonna just crave to know what happens!!! Excited for the next update! This is like a movie i can so picture it! Hope you update soon! :D
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June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ten bucks says he has some kind of vision.
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June 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Just read chapter 81. Need more, please!!! This story has become an obsession of mine - in the best possible way. I smile at work just thinking about it. I just can't wait to know what will happen next and about Nicoli's mysterious past.
You are the best! Keep it up!
You are the best! Keep it up!
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May 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hello again, Darky!! Another chapter out on time~! I think you're on a roll! So I was out all day on Thurs., but I knew, I just knew, you were gonna post the new chapter. So I checked it on my mobile. xDD Sure enough, there was an update, so I skimmed it throughout the day, right there on my mobile. Oh, the wonders of technology~! Haha! Of course, I had to reread the whole chapter then, because I always miss stuff when I skim, but I've been so busy this weekend, today's (Monday) the earliest I could get to it. Go figure. My sister had her baby on Thurs. evening, so pretty much my whole family was at the hospital on Friday. xD And then on Sat., I was at a festival (my feet still hurt from walking all day) and some friends and I went out for drinks afterward, so I pretty much crashed when I got home that night. Then Sun., well... I just wanted to sleep. xDD I was soooo laaaazy on Sun. And today was Memorial Day, so my family did the picnic thing, despite it being almost 100 degrees outside... -_- I was not a happy camper. Anyway! On to the chapter review!!
(Lol! Andre groped Nicoli. xDD Did Nicoli punch him?) I can totally relate to this chapter. I used to play hooky ALL THE TIME. Especially in high school. I'd hang out with my dad at his furniture store; napping on the beds, running around like a maniac, playing hide-and-seek in the warehouse (yes, while I was in high school. I'm still a kid at heart, despite being 22 years old), watching movies (because there was totally a TV and VCR player at the store for customer's children). I always had a lot of fun there. Playing hooky was fun. Once, after my sister graduated (she was two years ahead of me in school) and had moved in with her fiance, she yanked me out of class right in the morning, told the office there was a family emergency, and we took a daytrip to Baltimore, MD. xDD Our parents were so mad when they found out, but it was so fun, so we didn't care. (We were rebels. ;D) I'm sorry. I'm really hyper, despite it being 2am (at the moment, anyway), so I'm rambling about completely unrelated stuff. I'll try and stay on track. xD MMM! That sounds like such an amazing breakfast, I'm so gonna have to try that sometime. Lol. Nicki's dad is an architect, right? (My memory sucks. T_T) I hate the color orange... XD BTW, I agree with Nicki about Lance's birth story... Soooo didn't need to know that. xDD (The offhand comment about a grizzly murder story on the news caught my attention. Could it be Seth..?) Hmm. I might be over thinking this, but throughout the whole story of Sam, Lance never once called Sam 'she' or 'her'. Was that intentional and Sam's actually a guy and Lance doesn't want Nicoli to know, or am I really just thinking too much into it? 'Cause I do that quite often.
OMFG, it's Omen!! This part of the chapter seemed to surreal. Omen and Nicoli, actually having a decent conversation without Omen trying to kill anyone. Shocker! Lol. Omen's stealing food. (Mmm. BLT... *drools*) That bastard! He tasered poor Ethan! That was a pretty smooth move, Nic, bringing up Andre. It looks like it got the guilt train going a little. (Wth, then he tries to steal Nicoli's food. xDD) I hope Nicoli's speech got through to Omen. I'm kind of thinking it did, at least a little. Although, I don't think he's gonna switch sides just like that... *sigh* Poor, bitter, misguided Omen. *hackles raised* That bastard not only tasered Ethan, but he threw him in the garbage, too!! What. An. Asshole!
I love museums. Always have. And actually, when I was younger, I wanted to be an archaeologist and work in a museum when I wasn't on digs. My mom said I wanted to be an archaeologist before I even really knew what it was. I was always digging up stuff in the yard. But as I got older, I realized how much history and science was involved in archaeology, and they really aren't my best subjects... I love history (science, too, though not as much, and I despise math with a passion...), but history doesn't love me. Or rather, my memory span doesn't love history. xD My memory span sucks so bad! Haha. This sounds like a really beautiful museum. I wish I could see it. T_T Lol. Lance and Lloyd are such children. xP When Lloyd said about Nicoli being able to check out the west wing, I yelled "No way! But the west wing is always forbidden!" Out loud. XD No lie. We were driving home from the hospital, and my mom looked at me from the drivers seat, and she was like "What are you going on about?" Luckily, she's pretty used to outbursts like that from me, so she's not too alarmed by them. Haha! My dad, however, is a completely different story. I get some preeeetty strange looks from him sometimes. He probably thinks his daughter is insane. But it's not that I'm insane. I just think my brain-to-mouth filter is broken. xDD Oh noes! The locket's going haywire! It's a good thing Nick's dad didn't come with him. No way... The locket leads directly to the Heart..? And it's been right there this entire time? (Museums are always important!! But no, I wasn't expecting the museum to play a significant role... Even though I should have... Because museums are always important! xD) What a lucky break!! Holy shit! I never thought they'd find one of the Hearts so soon! (If it is actually a Heart... Darky, you better not be playing tricks on us.) Psst... Stupid question... What does LH stand for? I thought and thought and thought some more, but all I could come up with is Living Hearts, and that didn't sound right. And I was too lazy to sift back through the story again. Sorry!
You were right. This chapter is definitely tizzy-worthy! They found a Heart!! Ahhhhh! *is in a tizzy* Wonderful chapter, as usual. I believe MD has hit a climactic point (one of many, I'm sure), and it can only get better from here. :) I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter, and I hope, hope, HOPE it comes out soon. I'll be anxiously awaiting it! Tootles~! *uber death huggles* Kissy out!
P.S. What a monster... I can't believe my review got this long. I babble too much!! T_T
(Lol! Andre groped Nicoli. xDD Did Nicoli punch him?) I can totally relate to this chapter. I used to play hooky ALL THE TIME. Especially in high school. I'd hang out with my dad at his furniture store; napping on the beds, running around like a maniac, playing hide-and-seek in the warehouse (yes, while I was in high school. I'm still a kid at heart, despite being 22 years old), watching movies (because there was totally a TV and VCR player at the store for customer's children). I always had a lot of fun there. Playing hooky was fun. Once, after my sister graduated (she was two years ahead of me in school) and had moved in with her fiance, she yanked me out of class right in the morning, told the office there was a family emergency, and we took a daytrip to Baltimore, MD. xDD Our parents were so mad when they found out, but it was so fun, so we didn't care. (We were rebels. ;D) I'm sorry. I'm really hyper, despite it being 2am (at the moment, anyway), so I'm rambling about completely unrelated stuff. I'll try and stay on track. xD MMM! That sounds like such an amazing breakfast, I'm so gonna have to try that sometime. Lol. Nicki's dad is an architect, right? (My memory sucks. T_T) I hate the color orange... XD BTW, I agree with Nicki about Lance's birth story... Soooo didn't need to know that. xDD (The offhand comment about a grizzly murder story on the news caught my attention. Could it be Seth..?) Hmm. I might be over thinking this, but throughout the whole story of Sam, Lance never once called Sam 'she' or 'her'. Was that intentional and Sam's actually a guy and Lance doesn't want Nicoli to know, or am I really just thinking too much into it? 'Cause I do that quite often.
OMFG, it's Omen!! This part of the chapter seemed to surreal. Omen and Nicoli, actually having a decent conversation without Omen trying to kill anyone. Shocker! Lol. Omen's stealing food. (Mmm. BLT... *drools*) That bastard! He tasered poor Ethan! That was a pretty smooth move, Nic, bringing up Andre. It looks like it got the guilt train going a little. (Wth, then he tries to steal Nicoli's food. xDD) I hope Nicoli's speech got through to Omen. I'm kind of thinking it did, at least a little. Although, I don't think he's gonna switch sides just like that... *sigh* Poor, bitter, misguided Omen. *hackles raised* That bastard not only tasered Ethan, but he threw him in the garbage, too!! What. An. Asshole!
I love museums. Always have. And actually, when I was younger, I wanted to be an archaeologist and work in a museum when I wasn't on digs. My mom said I wanted to be an archaeologist before I even really knew what it was. I was always digging up stuff in the yard. But as I got older, I realized how much history and science was involved in archaeology, and they really aren't my best subjects... I love history (science, too, though not as much, and I despise math with a passion...), but history doesn't love me. Or rather, my memory span doesn't love history. xD My memory span sucks so bad! Haha. This sounds like a really beautiful museum. I wish I could see it. T_T Lol. Lance and Lloyd are such children. xP When Lloyd said about Nicoli being able to check out the west wing, I yelled "No way! But the west wing is always forbidden!" Out loud. XD No lie. We were driving home from the hospital, and my mom looked at me from the drivers seat, and she was like "What are you going on about?" Luckily, she's pretty used to outbursts like that from me, so she's not too alarmed by them. Haha! My dad, however, is a completely different story. I get some preeeetty strange looks from him sometimes. He probably thinks his daughter is insane. But it's not that I'm insane. I just think my brain-to-mouth filter is broken. xDD Oh noes! The locket's going haywire! It's a good thing Nick's dad didn't come with him. No way... The locket leads directly to the Heart..? And it's been right there this entire time? (Museums are always important!! But no, I wasn't expecting the museum to play a significant role... Even though I should have... Because museums are always important! xD) What a lucky break!! Holy shit! I never thought they'd find one of the Hearts so soon! (If it is actually a Heart... Darky, you better not be playing tricks on us.) Psst... Stupid question... What does LH stand for? I thought and thought and thought some more, but all I could come up with is Living Hearts, and that didn't sound right. And I was too lazy to sift back through the story again. Sorry!
You were right. This chapter is definitely tizzy-worthy! They found a Heart!! Ahhhhh! *is in a tizzy* Wonderful chapter, as usual. I believe MD has hit a climactic point (one of many, I'm sure), and it can only get better from here. :) I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter, and I hope, hope, HOPE it comes out soon. I'll be anxiously awaiting it! Tootles~! *uber death huggles* Kissy out!
P.S. What a monster... I can't believe my review got this long. I babble too much!! T_T
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May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You're the best! Wonderful characters, wonderful storyline, the suspence is killing me (in a good way). This is one of the best original fiction I've ever read! Keep up the good work! Please write more! :)