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schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*whimpers* This is why I don't read WIPs! I've been checking EVERYday and *crys*...LOL Don't mind me
person Tamura
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i was half expecting him to bite him right there, morals bedamned. i wouldn't be surprised if that is what happened next chapter though. i really like this story. the fact that nicoli still wakes up and tries to convince himself it was a dream and then gets the rude awakening is great and ethan trying so valiantly to at least keep some secrets to himself despite the fact that the supernatural world seems to rather like nicoli makes it interesting.
person Em
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O...M...G...I love this story soo much! Thank you for finally having some Ethan/Nicoli action, I can't wait for more. Agian, love this story, keep up the great work.
-Em

P.S. You should post a link to the picture.
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*crys*! I did it again. I start stupid WIP and then I get attached to them and then I go crazy waiting for stupid updates! LOL. I'm sorry, thats my usual rant when I'm stupid to read something new.

ANYWAYS I just have to say I love love love Felix. He's the best. Nicoli, I really don't think he knows what he got himself into when he talked to Ethan that first time in the Library! Hmm Crystal Hearts? Sounds interesting. Very interesting. Oh before I forget, please tell me this is gonna be Nicoli/Ethan? I'm sure, but then that little conversation with Felix...yes. Eek! I can't believe I started this! I love this so far, and I love what you've done with the vampire/ghosts est. Your own version to it. I always love reading vampire stories to see what people come up with, if they go for the traditional vamp story or do there own twist. Very nice indeed. Well its 7am and I have work in a few hours. Please update soon! oh, and could you email me once you update? I'm horrible with remembering to check on updated fiction. (silverphoenix69 at gmail dot com) Thanks ever so much for the story!
person AiYOLiLY
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, thanks for the welcome! ^-^
& the vampire itch is almost gone but nowwwww, I have an itch to find out what happens next! Ah! >_<"
Lol, I was a bit surprised when Nicoli said "do the nasty". What a shy little boy! XD
Does Felix like writing or literature? He must've really liked them when he was alive.
Oh, poor Felix. T_T Now I'm really curious about Felix too.
Hmmm, I guess I have to wait to find out more about him.
The smut scene!! (>o<) Ahh! THAT WAS HAPPINESS! I didn't expect it in this chapter but weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee; ecstasy with chocolate and strawberriessssssssssssssssssssss and LOL FLS; I hope I have that. ;)
Ah, I felt embarassed for Nicoli when he was uhm.. free and had to put it back. ^-^
I do like your word usage. Little Nicoli, do the nasty; it's pretty innocent but it sends me into a laughing fit. ^-^
SO YAY YAY YAY, ADD THE LINK OF THE IMAGE! ^-^
person AiYOLiLY
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, my review got cut off. T___T
Lol, I was a bit surprised when Nicoli said "do the nasty". What a shy little boy! XD
Does Felix like writing or literature? He must've really liked them when he was alive. Oh, poor Felix, I'm afraid to find out how his life was like. T___T
BUT!
The smut scene!! (>o<) Ahh! THAT WAS HAPPINESS! I didn't expect it in this chapter but weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee; ecstasy with chocolate and strawberriessssssssssssssssssssss and LOL FLS; I hope I have that. ;)
Ah, I felt embarassed for Nicoli when he was uhm.. free and had to put it back. ^-^
I do like your word usage. Little Nicoli, do the nasty; it's pretty innocent but it sends me into a laughing fit. ^-^
SO yes, yes, yes, YOU SHOULD ADD THE LINK TO THE ETHAN/NICOLI PICTUREEEEE. Though, I have to ready myself or else I might just start banging my head somewhere to get rid of images. ^-^"
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Id love a link to some pics. Oh. Poor Felix. You almost made me cry with this posting. I absolutly luurrve the feeding part though. Got me all hot. Mmmm. Please post again soon. Cant wait for the link.
person aisha
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AH!! the plot just gets deeper and deeper!!! It's so good!!!
Little story shadow?! *laughs* I like that!!! <3 And why wouldn't I be your little story shadow, you're a very talented writer!
person Anita
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes to the all hot and bothered Nicoli/Ethan smut!! I had a feeling you were referring to that in the previous chapter when you said "...the next part that I promise will make at least a few of you squee" *holds up her hand* I admit, I squeed *g* Going to read it again after this review!

1526 hits! So Yes to that picture link!

Now go away to write some more and let me have some time cuddling Felix! Big mouth and a small heart that guy. Good character!
person Sekre
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What an emotional chapter for felix! He must really admire and adore Ethan. Makes sense since they've been together so long. And yet again, pooor pooor Nicoli. He thinks everything is all said and done.