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Such a WAFF chapter and even though nothing much happened it was still good. Nicoli and Amelia are funny together and those parts in the story are always enjoyable. Zorro huh? I always thought he was sexy but inapropriatly dressed because it always looked hot where ever he was, lol. I wonder what Amelia is going as... Well keep up the good work and please update soon.
Peace ^_^

Nicoli and Amelia are so cute together. Their chemistry feels like they have known each other forever. I love those two together, friends forever is the picture I get when I think of them.
Now something has been crossing my mind. I am beginning to wonder why Nicoli's parents moved back to his father's home town. I think it might have more to do then this job. Or maybe the job is more than what it appears to be. I could be off but there is a lot of mystery surrounding it.
I can't wait for the next chapter at the Halloween party. Maybe Ethan will show up...here's hoping...that vampire is super sexy.
Thanks for the update, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Oh and thanks for responding to my review...it made me feel special ;)

P.S. I tried the burrito and pickles...delicious! If you are looking for something else for Amelia to try, I know for a fact that carrots dipped in mustard is pretty delicious (to me, but my roommates found it gross)

Wow Another great chapter! More foreshadowing I see.... I can't wait till Nicoli's secret is uncovered cause I'm sure that will be great. The relationship between Ethan and Felix is something I can't really figure out and Revenge? Hmm I'll have to wait and pass judgement on that later. I think Amelia is a witch or something that is looking over the stones or knows something about them because how else did she know that info? Oh and that thing she did with the locker? I can't wait to find out about that too. I've heard the Cock Robin poem before and yeah it is pretty morbid but cool at the same time so I wouldn't mind seeing it again.
Oh and I'm glad my review bought you smiles cause your story definately brings me smiles and intrigue, lol. I will no doubt be a regular reader from now on and I'll have plenty more reviews for ya. ^_^ Well Please update soon and keep up the great work.
Peace ^_^

P.S.
Sex scenes are overrated so don't feel pressured when the story calls for it then put it in because otherwise it will seem rushed or seen as just another random sex scene which happens alot on this site. Not to say that I won't be looking forward to alot of smutty happenings between Ethan and Nicoli in the future, lol. Well I'm done rambling. Bye

I just started reading your story a couple of days ago when you updated it, I have to say I am quite impressed. It is very intriguing. I love how you drop little pockets of info to your readers and always leaving them wanting and wondering more. I am captivated by Nicoli and his past (exactly what is he hiding?) I have a feeling, his sudden pain, his lapse in memory, and the "it" his parents where referring to, has something to do with the whole "Vampire Hearts" thing, although I could be wrong.
What's up with Ethan and Felix. There is more to them that meets the eye. Maybe they aren't in it for the good of man/vampire kind. Maybe they are. I don't know. And I get the feeling even Felix is hiding something from Ethan. I am also wondering about their relationship. At first I thought they were past lovers but now for some reason I get more of a brotherly feeling coming from them. Again I could be wrong but these are just my thoughts. Also wondering, if Ethan and Nicoli will become more than allies, possibly lovers? And Amelia is so adorable. I have a feeling she is either a witch or a fairy. I'm not quite sure. She does seem to have some type of magic. Her food choices are interesting to say the least. Although the burrito and pickles sound kind of good. I will have to try that. I have often thought about combining the two.
Well anywho, enough of my ramblings...Thanks for sharing this story. I am enjoying it. I can't wait for your next update. I hope it is soon. Oh and by the way, I love your art work. I visited the webpage for them and it gave life to these characters. Thanks again!

o_O Revenge??? OOh, plot twist! Me likey. I love this whole story. For a bit there it seemed a little stagnant, but now things are really picking up. I can't wait to see where it goes next. Every time I'm on this site, this is one of the stories that I make sure to check for updates. :)

I like your story so much; it's addicting. Poor Nicoli, throwing up is just nasty and painful. At least he didn't have to sit there afterwards and dry-heave. I wonder does the gap in his memory have something to do with the pain in his eye? And I forget what do his parents do for a living again?

What?! That's it?! That can't be it!! I refuse for it to be done! I'm gonna close my eyes, count to three, and when I open them again, there will be an update! *closes eyes* One...two...three...DARN IT! Update!! *bursts into tears* You can't leave me like this!!!

I am in love with this story. The characters draw me in like a moth to a flame, I like them all. I mean a vampire, a human and a ghost... the trio is unimaginable but great. Amelia is a riot, Ethan is your bright but broody vamp, Felix is a lovable ass and Nicoli is bold, curious and well Nicoli. I like the little undertones of forshadowing and mystery. I like that there is a healthy mix of dialogue and description. I also like that it isn't just one big sex scene the entire time, lol. I could gush for hours about this story I swear but I'm sure you're tired of hearing my endless rambling. So please please update soon cause I must know what happens next. Keep up the more than awesome work.
Peace ^_^

the pics are absolutely cute. and the story is going great.

oo another long chapter! Well i can't wait for more and tomorrow is my last day of finals and right now it's 3:22am and i'm taking a 'break' from my finals to read your chapter. Funny how you update when i have finals... anyways. Can't wait.

m i l k x ness