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schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe your going to be gone for an entire month...!!?? What shall I do for entertainment? I will suffocate on the lack of things to read. *sigh* I suppose that if I don't die before you come back that I will be expecting one hell of chapter when you return. It seems only fair...

Ummm I'm just kidding of course and I know it can't be helped that you have to leave. I can't wait for your return and the next chapter and I hope the month treats you well. ^_^ I'm sorry to hear about the fires I don't watch the news that often so I don't know that much of anything about it. Stay safe! Now on to the actual review. lol

I absolutely love 'Dracula Dead and Loving it" I just haven't seen the film in such a long time. Renfield had to be one of my fav characters. I know what you mean about liking all of the characters in a story you write because I usually like all of mine by the time they are all developed. Now if I could only finish a story that I start... lol.

*glomps* Awesome new chapter by the way. Hmm Ethan had to make friends with Righty.... LMAO Fun times lol. Moving right along. Amelia trying to intimidate Ethan now thats something I wasn't expecting, it was very cool. I also liked that she light weight believed him. Guess Ethan just has that kind of face. *shrugs* Preston was the ultimate cool in this chapter. Oh and what was all that creepy stuff about Nicoli? I definately wasn't expecting all that, it intrigues me and I can't wait to figure out what it's all about. Well I suppose that's all I have to say about the story. Great work as usual. Well I guess I'll see you after the first of August.

Peace Out ^_^



schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First of all, I'm sad to see you go but I await your return! *opens a bottle of wine and pours a glass for you* It will be hard but August 2 will rock and I know there will be a lot more on the way...I'll even keep a weird food journal, in case I come up on something Amelia might enjoy. *smiles*
Hey if Ethan ever needs relief again, he doesn't have to think about "mr. righty" he can just come to my place and believe me I won't turn him down. *glares suggestively at Ethan*
And this just brought up more questions about Nicoli. I can't wait to dig into his past.
Oh i just love Amelia. Nicoli doesn't know how lucky he his to have a friend like her. I wonder if Ethan will tell Nicoli about Amelia. I guess we shall wait and see.
Maybe, just maybe Ethan can feed from Nicoli again. That would be hottttt!
person CMJ101087
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! **Bursts into tears** You can't leave! I'll miss you far too much. *wipes at face* Fine...If I have no choice *sniff* I'll be patiently waiting for your return. Please don't forget us!!!
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapters. Creepy Aunt Hailey... yea she can go away, lol. I mean sure Nicoli hangs out with a vampire but I'm still of the belief that Ethan isn't a bad guy. I like her uncle and her cousin Preston I think he is adorable. Oh and hot and heavy scene between Nicoli and Ethan. I give kudos to Nicoli for being able to break that kiss at all I don't think I would have wanted to, lol. I hope Amelia isn't too upset with Nicoli and I can't wait to find out what she's up to. Please update soon and keep up the great work.
Peace ^_^
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"caressed every inch of his mind" ohhh that sounds delicious. I bet it would be a creepy yet interesting all wrapped up in sensual goodness. I want Ethan to caress my mind *wink*. I wonder how it would feel to do mind speak. It sounds cool.

Oh, Nicoli turning the tables on Ethan...Me likey! These 2 are so going to be fighting over who's gonna run who. Nicoli just might win ; )...Oh I think Ethan might fall for this guy. Nicoli would definitely keep him on his toes. Felix and Nicoli kinda remind me of each other. It's funny...I guess that is why they pretend to not like each other but really get along very well when it comes to the two of them. (I don't know if that made any since. I am drinking mojitos : )

I wonder if that was the Omen spying on them (what Ethan heard while he and Nicoli were making out) or was it Amelia...

I can't wait for the next chapter. How will Nicoli ever explain being gone for so long. I guess he could always say he wondered about the maze and ended up getting lost in there. It would be sorta true.

Oh and it can be sliced pickles or a whole pickles, either way you sprinkle koolaid on it. It was quite tangy and delicious. If you do a whole pickle, you would have to keep adding the koolaid every time you took a bite. The sliced ones might be neater and easier to do.

Thanks for another wonderful chapter. I can't wait for Part 3 of the Halloween Party!

person CMJ101087
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAAGGHHH!!! How can you play with my emotions like that?! I still love the story. I wonder how the Flying Monkey is going to feel about all of this going on...
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh pretty please update with part 2 of the halloween party...pretty please with pickles with strawberry koolaid sprinkled on top! (by the way...that's something else that i have found enjoyable...you should try it but make sure the pickle is a sour one!)
person CMJ101087
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. It is one of my favorites and I can not wait until the next chapter is up. I love the costumes! :) Can't wait for more Ethan/Nic lovin'. Keep up the awesome work.
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So cemeteries huh? I wonder if that has anything to do with his past. I kind of want him to go into one just to observe and see what exactly happens (how cruel of me...heehee)
Preston, I kind of like him. Weird feeling but I think Amelia might be trying to hook him and Nicoli up. Wonder if Nicoli likes him. But then where would that leave our sexy vampire whom I adore (sexually of course...*grins and smirks*)
Amelia's family seems to have that weird vibe going on, but I think that is because they are all holding some kind of family secret. Haley might sense Nicoli's involvement with Ethan, and that could be what's turning her off to Nicoli, the fact that he is involve with a vampire. Or and this is a big if...Haley, Amelia and the other women in the family could be the guardians of "The Heart" that Ethan and Felix are trying to discover.
Oh how I like it when you keep us on our toes, giving us just a little bit to keep us coming back for more. Well I'll be back, don't worry about that. I can't wait for the next chapter.
person SeriouslyJoking
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Two Chapters! All for me?! *opens a bag and pulls out Ethan and Nicoli dolls* See what I made?! Aren't they so CUTE?!*makes dolls pretend kiss* Awwww!!! They like each other! Okay...perhaps I've gone slightly insane. But that's okay...because you lurve your reviewers and you won't make them wait long and have to resort to making a Felix and Ameilia doll, too! You wouldn't do that, right?! Right?! *Takes a DEEP breath* I'm fine. I'm just slightly obsessed with a story, is all. I'll be fine...*wanders off, still clutching the dolls*