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this chap wa srealy cool the way Nic an Felix worked together and how Nic found that hidden door. can't wait for the next update

I was wondering... How exactly do you become a vampire in your story's world? According to all the Myths and Legends Nicoli should already be a vampire. Being bitten, having their blood combine in their veins, tasting each others blood in their mouths... those are the three ways to become a vampire. Is there another way that I missed?

I was planning on leaving you a review ever since I first read Moonlight Denial, but somehow I never got around to doing it - my bad. I usually don't stick around on the page long enough to comment on a story but I really want you to know how much I love your creation (hopefully not for the last time).
Filstly, I love the plot. I love it HAS a plot - never too many stories like that. With every chapter added your story gets better and better - it already is one of my favorite stories I'm reading and definitely one of two best vampire-oriented ones. And I love the characters. Ethan is officially the coolest vampire I have read about recently, Nicoli is totally adorable without being overly cute and cuddly and naive (and i love it how he remained somewhat sceptic even after learning that all the stories he deemed fantastic and made-up are true) and Felix is... Felix - the name totally fits him, btw :P Amelia is a great girl (and a witch!), Nicoli's parents seem OK and even Omen is kinda cool in his straightforwardness to save humanity by getting rid of vampires. So, see, what's not to like here?
I guess I would be a lousy critic - what's with me liking everything? - but I hope I, at least, make a decent reviewer :P
About last chapter's dissapearing Nicoli - a hidden room Omen has no idea about :D I wonder if it has anything to do with the singing women voices and light orbs that helped Nicoli before, when he was chased by Omen - they never really stopped bugging me, or at least what they said - who is the "he" they sang about? Ethan? I assume they were the burnt witches' spirits, less probably fairies. Would that mean they like Ethan? Or at least are not actively hating him? That they wouldn't oppose it if he got the heart? Or am I completely wrong and all this is just gibberish? ^^'
Anyway, to sum it up, great story, thanks for writing and posting it ^^

I am completely in love with this story! Vampire stories are my favorite reads.

Fantastic chapter! Your story really is a thrill to read. I'm really interested in seeing where this search takes our boys. My heart kept pounding throughout the chapter... Omen is pretty hardcore, isn't he? Yikes. Keep up the phenominal work!

Great chapter! I can't believe how mad they got for Nicoli putting Ethan at risk. I mean I can but come on, they are so putting him more at risk. I mean they're both "immortal" (well sort of). And he isn't. I'm not going to lie, I probably would have done the same things. I think he just wanted to make sure he wasn't the only one risking his life.
Anywho, great chapter, I enjoyed it! Can't wait for your update!

Keep going~! This is really good! =^-^= There are very few grammer/spelling mistakes, only about two per chapter! Usually when I come here to read anything there are so many mistakes that I just can't keep reading since it becomes so annoying. *sighs* Keep up the good work~!

I've been busy so I haven't had the time to keep up but I'm happy to get the chance to read the chapters i missed though i do have to admit... >__> for some reason I always read your stories during finals. Yes... I have summer finals right now ;__; but thank goodness after next week, I'll finally get a chance to breathe! 2 months of school and during summer too X___X yea, I had a deathwish. LOL Anyways, WOW!! I was basically squealing with fangirl glee when Ethan and Nicoli started sucking each other's lips off and was sorely disappointed when it ended there. Curse you for teasing us!! XDDD I'm very happy that my theory of Amelia was a witch came true =pats herself on the shoulder= and i'm absolutely thrilled with the story development. I'm particularly intrigued by the fact that Nicoli has two foreign auras. It makes me think of those 'gaps' in his memories that Ethan saw when their minds was linked, were somehow related. It makes me believe that maybe one of the reason Nicoli was so set up against superstitions was because of something bad that happened (from that bad aura) that was caused by some fantasy make believe monster thingy... >_> and it was so horrible that his mind blocked it out which resulted in him not believing in any super naturals. =pants= UHHH did that make ANY sense to you?

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well anyways :D can't wait for more updates and i'll go work on my finals now.

YAY Felix is back and annoying to Nicoli as ever! I've missed this story and excited that you have started writing it again!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter when they come in contact with the Omen again, Nicoli better watch out. Can't wait for your next update! BTW thanks for the links to the art. They were delicious!!!!

Is it sad that when I saw this story was updated early I almost bounced out of my chair? Another great chapter. So glad to have you back. *Does the happy dance*