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June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*Sigh* Forget what I stated here in my last review: "I also wanna know why Katerina doesn't want Nic to inform the clan he met her and stuff?" I just reread part of the chapter, and really forgotten she already said it's because she doesn't want anyone else knowing they're alive. I think I meant to ask why doesn't want everyone else knowing they're still alive. Hope you'll let us know.
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June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yeah.. It probably would be.. Especially on the chapters with cliffhangers. I know ~I~ freak when there is. I can't imagine how funny it would be for someone else to watch. I dare you.. make friends with one of your readers and have them either film their reaction and put it on youtube, or cam their reaction on skype. xD I would so watch it if I could.. Speaking of which... It's summer, I should start writing again. x3 Then again.. new job.. ugh! Lol. Everything gets in the waaaay... Love the new chapter. And... Seeing the vampire was a nice little twist. It added to the story. I hope they kick Dimitri's ass next chapter.
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June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can you explain what you meant b: "It appears all the cRaCK couples I’m making just for fun are turning themselves into canon." I did look up "canon" but don't rlly understand what you meant. What is canon rlly? LOL I'm sorry if annoying you ;D.
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June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
(Started reviewing this chapter last night. Got two lines done and fell asleep. xDD I must've been damn tired without realizing it.)
-stares at computer screen in shock- ...NoOoOoOoOo!!!!!!1!! Oh, Darky, that was a horrible spot for a cliffhanger!! (Actually, it was a perfect spot for a cliffhanger, but I certainly won't admit it, no sir.) Oh man. I'm dead. You killed me with your horribly (perfectly) placed cliffhanger. There's no way I can wait till Thurs. to find out what happened. It's another three days away! T______T -is in hysterics- Niiicooliii... (I bet it isn't even a big deal... It's probably some defense mechanism of the Heart to verify that Nicoli is worthy of taking it. But either way, I bet Ethan's freaking out. XDD) -deep breathes- Okay. I'm fairly calm now... So I'm gonna review the chapter.
First off, I had this funny blooper reel (like for movies) going on in my head while Nicoli was running out of the museum. xD Him getting hit by the door as it swung back, him tripping on the stairs, him tripping on the sidewalk, him falling into the bushes (which is kinda did, but only cuz Ethan pulled him). It was very entertaining. Haha. Aww. There was another cute Ethan/Nicoli moment. -squee-
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“Something tells me you better zip it before they eat you,” (Andre! ;D) AHAHA!! Conrad snores! Oh, that is priceless! I love it! XDD Yay for cool witchy enchantments~! I wish I could soundproof my room sometimes. Then Dad wouldn't come barging in in the middle of the night when I should be in bed and tell me to go to bed because he heard my music or something. I swear to Dog, my dad has super hearing. XDD Felix and Nicoli are collaborating again~! Lol. Of course Ethan knew they were making fun of him. Ooh, so Cecile even commissioned the museum. Hmm. It's like Amelia says, it all makes perfect sense. All the pieces are falling into place! Yaaaay~!
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This part of the chapter knocked my socks off. They make such a cute couple~! (Despite one of them being incorporeal.) And it absolutely endeared Deloris to me even more. She was such a doll! She really shone in this chapter. She was witty (like she usually is), charming, devilish, and so funny. Best line ever: “God, I wish I wasn’t dead so I could have actually felt that,” XDD And she punctuated it with a foot stomp. Like a little kid throwing a tantrum. Oh, I love Deloris!
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And here comes the best part. The retrieving of the Heart! I can only imagine how creepy walking through a dark, deserted museum might be in the middle of the night. I know I'd be nervous. Omg. And then Preston shows up. -head/desk- When it said about a shadow moving, I was like, "No way! How could Dimitri have found out?! They were so careful!" But it turned out to be Preston. xDD What a nifty thing to have! Way to go, Preston! I now forgive you for scaring the crap out of everyone! (Btw, if Gavin had crushed your windpipe, you probably wouldn't have been able to say I think he crushed my windpipe. Lol.) When Amelia opened the door that leads to the Heart chamber beneath the museum, I kept picturing the doors from Avatar: The Last Airbender, that can only be opened by using that certain type of bending. They're really cool. My favorite is the fire bending door, where five people have to bend fire at the door, and it releases some kind of mechanism and the fire emblems on the door fall from upright to slightly off kilter. It winds up looking like one of those paper fans unfolding. It's really cool. I love A:TLA. Man, it's a good thing the pull on that necklace isn't all that strong. Nicoli could've taken a nice tumble down those steps... That would've been bad. Although, I'm sure someone would've kept him from falling. -coughethancough- YESSSSSSSSS!!! They found a Heart!!! (The way you were talking, I wasn't sure if it was actually the Heart. xDD) And you're right. 81 chapters is a long time. But it really doesn't seem like it's been three years (soon to be four... -gonk!-) since MD was born. You should seriously think about publishing this. I would so totally buy it. Although, at the rate it's going, it would probably wind up being more than one book. xDD Maybe, since there's three Hearts, there could be three books. Now there's an idea. -nods- But back to the review! Conrad smiling... :DDD Me thinks I might be overthinking this, but I think Felix volunteered to try to get the Heart first in order to protect Nicoli... :o It could be because he's worried about how Ethan would react if something were to happen to Nicoli, but I think it's more likely that he's actually worried about Nicoli. xD And I'm sure he's convinced himself that that ISN'T the reason. But anyway, poor Felix. A barrier spell that zaps energy. That sucks. It's also quite ingenious. Mhmm. And now the pull of the necklace is stronger. Pulling him straight towards that barrier. Like a moth to flame, only completely involuntary. xD Lol. There was such a tension build-up while I was reading this. I was practically biting my nails in worry, even though I was pretty sure that Nicoli would be able to pass safely through. Haha. And even though I knew, I still cheered when he made it. xDD I thought it was really clever that a piece of Heart was in the locket. That was a nice touch. Deloris really is a very clever woman. ;) Aww. Group Love Moment! The clan and Nicoli are bonding! That's so awesome! I mean, even Conrad is worried about it. It gives me warm fuzzies~ And then he passes out as soon as he tries to take the Heart. -head/desk again- I bet EVERYONE's freaking out. Not just Ethan. Ooooh!! Darky! You better update soon! (Meaning, on time. xD) I don't know how long I can take this anxiety! I don't handle stress very well!! T__T I'll be checking for updates again ALL DAY on Thurs., you hear? ...:D Bye! Love ya! -huggies and lickies-
Kissy out!
-stares at computer screen in shock- ...NoOoOoOoOo!!!!!!1!! Oh, Darky, that was a horrible spot for a cliffhanger!! (Actually, it was a perfect spot for a cliffhanger, but I certainly won't admit it, no sir.) Oh man. I'm dead. You killed me with your horribly (perfectly) placed cliffhanger. There's no way I can wait till Thurs. to find out what happened. It's another three days away! T______T -is in hysterics- Niiicooliii... (I bet it isn't even a big deal... It's probably some defense mechanism of the Heart to verify that Nicoli is worthy of taking it. But either way, I bet Ethan's freaking out. XDD) -deep breathes- Okay. I'm fairly calm now... So I'm gonna review the chapter.
First off, I had this funny blooper reel (like for movies) going on in my head while Nicoli was running out of the museum. xD Him getting hit by the door as it swung back, him tripping on the stairs, him tripping on the sidewalk, him falling into the bushes (which is kinda did, but only cuz Ethan pulled him). It was very entertaining. Haha. Aww. There was another cute Ethan/Nicoli moment. -squee-
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“Something tells me you better zip it before they eat you,” (Andre! ;D) AHAHA!! Conrad snores! Oh, that is priceless! I love it! XDD Yay for cool witchy enchantments~! I wish I could soundproof my room sometimes. Then Dad wouldn't come barging in in the middle of the night when I should be in bed and tell me to go to bed because he heard my music or something. I swear to Dog, my dad has super hearing. XDD Felix and Nicoli are collaborating again~! Lol. Of course Ethan knew they were making fun of him. Ooh, so Cecile even commissioned the museum. Hmm. It's like Amelia says, it all makes perfect sense. All the pieces are falling into place! Yaaaay~!
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This part of the chapter knocked my socks off. They make such a cute couple~! (Despite one of them being incorporeal.) And it absolutely endeared Deloris to me even more. She was such a doll! She really shone in this chapter. She was witty (like she usually is), charming, devilish, and so funny. Best line ever: “God, I wish I wasn’t dead so I could have actually felt that,” XDD And she punctuated it with a foot stomp. Like a little kid throwing a tantrum. Oh, I love Deloris!
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And here comes the best part. The retrieving of the Heart! I can only imagine how creepy walking through a dark, deserted museum might be in the middle of the night. I know I'd be nervous. Omg. And then Preston shows up. -head/desk- When it said about a shadow moving, I was like, "No way! How could Dimitri have found out?! They were so careful!" But it turned out to be Preston. xDD What a nifty thing to have! Way to go, Preston! I now forgive you for scaring the crap out of everyone! (Btw, if Gavin had crushed your windpipe, you probably wouldn't have been able to say I think he crushed my windpipe. Lol.) When Amelia opened the door that leads to the Heart chamber beneath the museum, I kept picturing the doors from Avatar: The Last Airbender, that can only be opened by using that certain type of bending. They're really cool. My favorite is the fire bending door, where five people have to bend fire at the door, and it releases some kind of mechanism and the fire emblems on the door fall from upright to slightly off kilter. It winds up looking like one of those paper fans unfolding. It's really cool. I love A:TLA. Man, it's a good thing the pull on that necklace isn't all that strong. Nicoli could've taken a nice tumble down those steps... That would've been bad. Although, I'm sure someone would've kept him from falling. -coughethancough- YESSSSSSSSS!!! They found a Heart!!! (The way you were talking, I wasn't sure if it was actually the Heart. xDD) And you're right. 81 chapters is a long time. But it really doesn't seem like it's been three years (soon to be four... -gonk!-) since MD was born. You should seriously think about publishing this. I would so totally buy it. Although, at the rate it's going, it would probably wind up being more than one book. xDD Maybe, since there's three Hearts, there could be three books. Now there's an idea. -nods- But back to the review! Conrad smiling... :DDD Me thinks I might be overthinking this, but I think Felix volunteered to try to get the Heart first in order to protect Nicoli... :o It could be because he's worried about how Ethan would react if something were to happen to Nicoli, but I think it's more likely that he's actually worried about Nicoli. xD And I'm sure he's convinced himself that that ISN'T the reason. But anyway, poor Felix. A barrier spell that zaps energy. That sucks. It's also quite ingenious. Mhmm. And now the pull of the necklace is stronger. Pulling him straight towards that barrier. Like a moth to flame, only completely involuntary. xD Lol. There was such a tension build-up while I was reading this. I was practically biting my nails in worry, even though I was pretty sure that Nicoli would be able to pass safely through. Haha. And even though I knew, I still cheered when he made it. xDD I thought it was really clever that a piece of Heart was in the locket. That was a nice touch. Deloris really is a very clever woman. ;) Aww. Group Love Moment! The clan and Nicoli are bonding! That's so awesome! I mean, even Conrad is worried about it. It gives me warm fuzzies~ And then he passes out as soon as he tries to take the Heart. -head/desk again- I bet EVERYONE's freaking out. Not just Ethan. Ooooh!! Darky! You better update soon! (Meaning, on time. xD) I don't know how long I can take this anxiety! I don't handle stress very well!! T__T I'll be checking for updates again ALL DAY on Thurs., you hear? ...:D Bye! Love ya! -huggies and lickies-
Kissy out!
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Post more. Now. Or I shall steal all of your cookies. (please)
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June 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a way to end this chapter! I'm am sooo happy about the Conrad and Deloris interaction. She's just want he needs...a little spice in his life. This heart sounds beautiful and very powerful. This is exciting! Of course I'm back in a tizzy and frenzy awaiting the next chapter! Thanks for the update!
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June 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You are evil! EVIL! How dare you leave us with a mean, nasty, horrible evil cliffie. RAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRGH!
*Pouts at you. The most super utter uber of all mega pouts.
*Pouts at you. The most super utter uber of all mega pouts.
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June 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! :o What just happened to Nicoli?!?!?!? I think I'm too overcome with shock to even write a good review no matter how exciting this chapter was! *shakes head sadly*
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June 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
How. Could. You. Do. That. WHY did you stop there? Did I do something wrong? Am I being punished? I'll behave I promise just give me the next chapter. PLEASE!!!!! And loved the Deloris/Conrad thing. I just knew they had the hots for each other. K. Time for you to go back to writing. I need new chapter quickly. Sheesh. First you almost kill Andre now I'm stuck worrying about Nicoli. You are going to drive me to an early grave.
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June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OH MOTHER GOOSE!!! Are you serious!?? You did NOT just leave it there! D: My heart is beating soo fast right now, I feel like I'm watching a movie, you know? XD Oh my gosh, please, please, PLEASE let Nicoli be alright! There are so many ideas that are popping into my head and not a lot of them are good! :0 I really hope he's not hurt! I mean, he can't DIE, cause Amelia saw him in that painting, right? So he can't be too badly hurt. I'm just SO freaked out now, though. I can't believe they FOUND it! I kept expecting Creepy Dimitri and his gang of horribles to suddenly come in and dash all the clans' hopes! I really hadn't expected Preston to show up, though. And his handy dandy box! :) Okay. So I'm going to go back and re-read the chapter again cause I'm obsessed like that. :D Thank you for this amazing chapter!! PLEASE let Nicoli be alright! Until next time, I guess! *gives you basket of brownies*