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I am like uber liking it but the thing with Nicoli is driving me nuts...I want to know what it is.....

Yay! Amelia's back and she brought her mom...wow she sounds gorgeous. I can't wait to know more about Nicoli's condition and wonder if any of the vampires or witches will notice something about him that will provide the readers with more of a clue about it. His parents are so protective of him that I can only imagine that it is something big. Great job on this chapter and of course I am looking forward to the next. Thanks!

Sorry I haven't reviewed for a while. TT-TT I was just sooooo mad at Ethan. I was like: *walks up the Ethan all huffy* "How dare you do that to Nicholi~! I should stab you in the heart!" *slaps him hard across the face and runs away with Nicoli kicking and screaming* But then I remembered about the dark aura, and I got to thinking that maybe that will save him in the end...

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!! My computer died for a while and then I get it back and what do I find?! UPDATES!! HE HE HE! *Bounces around the room* Okay, deep breaths, I'm calm now. Giggle. Great chapters. I enjoyed very much. I wonder how long it's going to take Ethan to break down and ask the little witch for help. And oooh, good Ethan & Nicoli kisses. I think that they are getting just a teeny bit attached to each other don't you. Ethan wont be able to hurt him. I'm sure of it. Okay, rambling done. I'm so glad you are back! Can't wait for more. Bye!

I'm sooooo happy that updates are regular now. Yay~! Gavin just doesn't seem as oppressive as he did when he was first introduced, which I'm very relieved about. He kinda... scared me. xD And I'm starting to think that Andre is a bit of a skank, forgive me for saying so. *bows in apology* But then again, I don't really blame him, for who could resist cute, little Nicoli? I loved when Ethan get all possessive and nearly threw Andre off the bed. It was very endearing. And hilarious. The bathroom scene was very cute, as well, and I'm sure I enjoyed that better than I would've had they argued, even if Nicoli's potty mouth is so amusing.
Hmm... a spell on the book. I guess I was sort of expecting that. I mean, they certainly couldn't make it so that anyone could just open the book. I was, however, a bit startled when Nicoli got burned as well. Cora's so nice. ^_^ Conrad's being a tightass, as usual... I sympathize with him, though. The betryal of his own brother must've cut him pretty deeply, and it certainly explains why he has a hard time trusting people.
For some reason all through this chapter, I kept thinking of that double aura surounding Nicoli's own aura. It's been bothering me for a while. And that led me to thinking about that gap in the kid's memory. They haven't popped up in the story in a while, and it's making me anxious. T_T
*is in shock* Nicoli initiated intimacy with Ethan AGAIN! He was probably drunk on sleep waves or something... But I bet that Ethan will take advantage of the "attention only when nearly passed out from exhaustion" comment eventually, if not soon. Not that I mind or anything. *wink* Another cutesy moment between our main men! I about squealed when I read the ending of the chapter but figured I'd better not since my dad was sleeping. His room is right next to mine. DX Very much looking forward to the next update, pray it be soon. Oh btw, I'm taking a creative writing course as well. Fun fun! Go creative writing! Have fun in class. ^_^ Keep up the awwwwwwwesome work! *huggles*

You were right, this chapter did make me happy. Oh Ethan and Nicoli...love, love...I like them being nice to each other every once in a while. I think now that we know that Conrad wants him "taken care of" it provided Ethan with a little more torment now that Nicoli is being sweet to him. I think I might see something very good developing between Ethan and Nicoli. I can't wait until the next chapter. Everything there is an update I get giddy...well good luck in school...I know the feeling of starting back up again, this is my last year in grad school...well I look forward to reading more!

Congrats on being 21. Such a sweet age.

Now I don't remember her name... Cara? I like her a lot! And the pervy vamp too ^^ I was very surprised to find out that Conrad wasn't the strongest in the group. Is it only on a mental level? Or is it physical too? Then why haven't they left to form families of their own? And Ethan's cousin, is he Conrad's dead brother's child then? Ha ha. All the names are slipping from my mind right now ^^ I was curious as to why there was a cousin in the group.

It’s a great story! And I love it :3

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WOW... a lot happened in this chapter. i thought its only just the snuggle part at the bathroom but at the end... Man! that's hot! i never knew nicoli could be like that when he kissed ethan so shocking really and he's so sweet i didn't know that.

sorry i don't wrote a review last chapter... don't worry i read the story when you posted it. im just busy with my studies. The professors gave me a lost of assignments and projects its so hard to write a review even in deviantart i rarely visit it...
but after i read this chapter i think i want to draw the part when ethan hugged nicoli at the bathroom. :D

Wow! Wow, wow and wow. You sure have cornered our two darlings now haven't you. How will you save him from certain death??? >.< I love the new people and everything is very exciting .

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