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Dude... I just got done reading chapter 30 and wow.
The sexy scenes are so hot! I could perfectly imagine
what they were doing inside my head! And thank
goodness you finally updated! I hope the next chapter
does not take a long time! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

honestly i've forgotten all about brittany and zak...so go ahead...i think it would be a good choice...not to saw i didn't like the dialogue between them, but if it will help you out i say go for it....so yay!!!!! nicoli and ethan finally got a little action...to bad nicoli's mom choice exactly the worse moment to call...but this just mean it will be even more intense when they get together like that again...oooo can't wait for that ;)....so yeah what was in that flask and what was it suppose to do...the suspicion is driving me maddddd...just kidding (not really :)...oh and by the way same goes for me...if i ever come across 2 of those cars, you will definitely be getting a little something from me...i guess we can both dream...but you never know....well great chapter as usual...and of course i can't wait until the next one...until then happy writing!

Waa waa waaa! Just this morning I was scrambling my brain-eggs trying to figure out what was going to happen next, and then a new chappy is updated. I'm dancing with joy! *Dance dance* I'm so so sooo curious about that dark spot in Nicoli's memory. What happened? I neeeed to knooow. Sigh. You are the suspense-lady. The mistress of question. The guide through wonderings. The evil wielder of the tension-wand. And I am but your humble reader-slave, smacking into wall after wall of questions and suspense that you’ve painted your world with.

One word men to describe this chapter! HOT!

>.< i miss you so much. i miss all your writings. Gah! Thank God it's already summer here. No more annoying assignments and projects and i can finally read your works. yipee!

Hi, again! Loved these last chapters, I'm loving Faith. I'm glad about Laura calming down, she worries too much. About Zac and Brittany, I'm thinking that you should leave them where they are at. In others words it makes since for Nickle to focus all of his energy with the vamps, his parnets and Amelia and her family. Its expected that he would put his old life on the back burner. It would be idea to keep them in the eariler chapters, you could make them pop up at different points in the story if Nickle needs help or when he needs to talk to 'normal' people. You can always bring them back as Nickel's lifeline or help. But it is natrual for friends from your old town to be put on the back burner but in Nickel's case its expected. So I wouldn't fret about something like that. Just let it flow, worry about that when you finish the story, and then decide. Other, than that I love this story. Chapter 30: Nickel and Ethan-shoot! Wonder how long before they finally do it? Anyway loved the little smut scene and the phone ringing- classic! Sorry 'bout not reviewing your other chapters, I've been busy making sure I don't fail any of my classes! Oh, and I have another question this has nothing to do with Moonlight Denial but what are you going to do about Reality is Insanity I actually like this story too but I read it and was going to leave a review but the power had shut-off completely in my house. So until Next Time- Peace!

I'm not even trying to pretend I know what will happen next. I have no frigging clue ^^" There's so many questions unanswered in this story and every time I think you're going to pull the veil off of the secrets a bit... it turns out there's another veil covering them up, bigger, hiding even more secrets.
There are questions asked chapters ago, ones half of the readers have, I'm sure of it, already forgotten being asked in the first place. And they're just piling and piling and piling... Well, it's also totally possible that I'm exagerating due to severe frustration here XD
Anyway, I totally love the pace of this story. I love Nicoli, his I'm-just-a-normal-teenager behavior, his oh-so-fake-but-I-will-pretend-it's-not bravado, his grudgingly warm feelings towards Ethan and his wanting to be liked by Ethan's family (if only to be sure they won't eat him for breakfast, but still :P).
So yeah, me likey :)

Hm, I wonder how would Amelia and her family react if they knew what Nicoli was really doing with Ethan (I mean things other than the occasional make-out sessions). If Omen came to them and told them who destroyed the Mary-Weather’s house. How Nicoli was working together with Vampires. I know Amelia's aunt would have a field trip with the news, but I mean the rest of them, especially Amelia herself and her mom, who seems to have taken a liking to the boy. Would she think the same of him still?
Especially since it seems like the vampiric family will need some help with opening the book. Some witchcraft-related help.
Maybe Ethan will spin a deal between a Fairbrook witch and Conrad, one which will result in Nicoli keeping his life to himself? ^^'
Have I mentioned that the secret around Nicoli's past is driving me crazy? XD

Love the story.
*bows*

I'm still very glad that you like the fanart <3 *huggles Darkness*
Simply put OMFG. I was all slack jawed reading the end. Aw poor Nicoli, he'll need Ethan to comfort him through the pain *pervy chuckle*
Great chapter :D

Moonlight Denial, the midnight drug. How I love this story! Poor poor Nicki, he is made to suffer. The mysteries are piling up. I'm wondering if the Fairbrook made that curse under the dead witch's name. That's what I would have done. Or it's a really old curse at work? Or maybe she's a ghost? Hay! Maybe she can date Felix?! That would be nice, yes? And get rid of the competition. He he he.

Dude! You finally updated! But... I still have a feeling
that it will take you a long time to update again...
Please! Update as soon as you can!

you were right...i loved this chapter...oh this delores is one tricky witch...nicoli can't win for losing...even when he is trying to help someone else out, he gets screwed with...well at least they are taking care of him...i know he hates it when his mother worries over him, but it might be nice when ethan does it...it was kinda sexy seeing ethan concern for his "friend...future lover- maybe ;)...anywho, great chapter and i can't wait for the next one!...oh and by the way if you ever have that car just hanging around, feel free to send it my way...it was absolutely beautiful and i definitely wouldn't mind having one...heeheehee.