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April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know you think that I forgot about you, but I haven't, I promise. My computer completely died on me and I have been forced to sneak my reading in at work. Unfortunately I usually get booted out of the room before I can review, but this chapter absolutely required one. Why did you do this to me? Why? What did we do to deserve this? PLEASE PLEASE Update soon. I'm going to go crazy if you don't. Now go you have writing to do. And I promise I will continue to be a faithful reader. Bye.
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April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ah your such a tease.I want more.I was like yes finally.and then u ended it.i could cry.Thats just horrible.Please no interruptions let them do it.your story is great.XD kudos to u
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April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Man, i had almost forgot about this story. When you when on a mini hiatus i paused it till you came back. Its been a while. Totally teasing the hell out of your readers with chap 32's ending. But with Nicoli's FLS its bound to be one bad ass chapter. As for the long wait, i actually like that you postponed the whole smut till way later, all these secrets between the characters makes it all the more better. Early smut could of ruined it. Plus now it makes all the more sense for Nicoli to want it now.
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April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
... you are truly evil. *glares* The dog interupts... right? *sighs* I can never predict what is going to happen next when it comes to you. *pouts* That chapter was just chuck full of information. I never thought about the sleeping thing; that was very clever. ... You know, all Owen did was flip the 'w' upside-down. *mew*
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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this was pure evil to stop right at this moment...but as you said you have your reasons...evil genius...that's ok...i guess i can forgive you...thanks for the update...and yes i loved every minute of it...it was that nice chapter of just talking and seeking comfort between nic and ethan that was amazing...well thanks again for the update and of course i look forward to the next...and hey if nic gets cold feet, send ethan over to me...lol
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April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL, looks like, once I jumped back on your bandwagon, you're stuck with me :D That means I can write all the nice things I want and all you can do is bear with me and blush :]
Oh yeah, I've re-read it and plan on doing it at least one more time. Though knowing me and my MO when it comes to stories I like I'll do it more than once :P So, if you're thinking about turning the story into paper and some covers - do it! I'll be more than happy to get a copy for myself :D (even if the shipping costs will eat me ^^')
The chapter. You evil thing XD You had us all believing Nicoli was in serious danger when in fact you had Omen playing mind games with him! Clever :P And well, well, well. I knew some vampire had to fuck him up in one way or another, but I never expected it to be Andre. I never even considered one of Ethan's family, not even Conrad (Omen/Owen would be long dead if that was the case >_>). We still don't know what really happened and Andre seems to be regretting it, whatever it was, but you never really know with vampires ^^'. And yeah, as much as I like Ethan I wouldn't bet my left arm that in the end he won't betray Nicoli if that's what Conrad whans him to do. I'm not saying he won't do a lot to save his life, but the story, being told mostly from Nicoli's point of view, never really gave us an insight into Ethan's head. The fact that he was so depressed after Conrad made him agree to disposing of Nicoli when the business with the book and the hearts is over works in his favor, though. As I said, I like him. I'd really hate it if he turned out to be a bastard ^^''''.
Btw, I'm almost as giddy waiting for the next chapter as I was waiting for this one. That's because I really, really have a thing for aftermaths :P And it looks like that's what it will be like for Nicoli and Ethan. Yeah, Ethan, thumbs up for staying from me :> I know he can be a smooth operator, but I seriously believe he stayed out of genuine concern.
I couldn't forget about Felix, either. His ratings went up a few nice points after what he said to Conrad. Andre's too. Nicoli really doesn't need an angry Conrad to worry about to add to his problems, and the boy is some neat power magnet for them.
As for Nicoli being a guy and behaving like one... he'll hate me XD Why? Because I drew a fanart of him, to congratulate you for all the achievements you and your story have earned. And I totally destroyed his image by drawing him way too feminine ^^' Hey, I tried to male him up. He wouldn't budge ^^' So it's his own fault, right?
I hope at least YOU will like it :) Here's the link:
http://kashka.deviantart.com/art/Moonlight-Denial-Nicoli-119902051
Regards,
kashka
Oh yeah, I've re-read it and plan on doing it at least one more time. Though knowing me and my MO when it comes to stories I like I'll do it more than once :P So, if you're thinking about turning the story into paper and some covers - do it! I'll be more than happy to get a copy for myself :D (even if the shipping costs will eat me ^^')
The chapter. You evil thing XD You had us all believing Nicoli was in serious danger when in fact you had Omen playing mind games with him! Clever :P And well, well, well. I knew some vampire had to fuck him up in one way or another, but I never expected it to be Andre. I never even considered one of Ethan's family, not even Conrad (Omen/Owen would be long dead if that was the case >_>). We still don't know what really happened and Andre seems to be regretting it, whatever it was, but you never really know with vampires ^^'. And yeah, as much as I like Ethan I wouldn't bet my left arm that in the end he won't betray Nicoli if that's what Conrad whans him to do. I'm not saying he won't do a lot to save his life, but the story, being told mostly from Nicoli's point of view, never really gave us an insight into Ethan's head. The fact that he was so depressed after Conrad made him agree to disposing of Nicoli when the business with the book and the hearts is over works in his favor, though. As I said, I like him. I'd really hate it if he turned out to be a bastard ^^''''.
Btw, I'm almost as giddy waiting for the next chapter as I was waiting for this one. That's because I really, really have a thing for aftermaths :P And it looks like that's what it will be like for Nicoli and Ethan. Yeah, Ethan, thumbs up for staying from me :> I know he can be a smooth operator, but I seriously believe he stayed out of genuine concern.
I couldn't forget about Felix, either. His ratings went up a few nice points after what he said to Conrad. Andre's too. Nicoli really doesn't need an angry Conrad to worry about to add to his problems, and the boy is some neat power magnet for them.
As for Nicoli being a guy and behaving like one... he'll hate me XD Why? Because I drew a fanart of him, to congratulate you for all the achievements you and your story have earned. And I totally destroyed his image by drawing him way too feminine ^^' Hey, I tried to male him up. He wouldn't budge ^^' So it's his own fault, right?
I hope at least YOU will like it :) Here's the link:
http://kashka.deviantart.com/art/Moonlight-Denial-Nicoli-119902051
Regards,
kashka
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April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GAHHH!! So much to comment on .... so little time to do it!!
Okay let's start from the begining :)
The starting the chapter just made me have another almost heart attack! I was like O.O Nicoli is still falling .. whose guna save him ... who is free to save him???!!! When Felix popped up I was like ...okay I really wasn't expecting that... but he is sooo adorable I refuse to believe that he doesn't in some way care for the little 'meatbag' hahah I love that.
Now I'm still not sure if I like Omen or not ... still something a little iffy about him hmm, but I have to say when he went soaring off the hill, hit the deck and Felix and Nicoli were all like 'Ooowww' I snorted so loud I woke my brother up, whose room is next door to mine (we have a wall between our rooms that the last owners put up wrong it is so thin that if we are loud enough we can hear each other ...)
When Omen went off on his ...you wouldn't be able to understand speech ... I was like wow, this guy has obviously seen one too many vampires in his lifetime ... then I kind of felt really sorry for him ... Serious Andre .... *drools* that was hot!
Omen holding up the gun to Andre almost killed me! As he finally put it down I was like PHEEEEWWW that was a close one ...
hmmmm skeletons indeed!
Mann I felt my eyes well up with tears as Nicoli did! It was all emotional and cute and the family hug URGH! don't even get me started I freaking LOVE Lance!
Awwww Nicoli is just soo cute, man if he were real I would totally jump on him and glomp him to death! Getting all upset and mopey ... awww! Ethan and the others are just totally awesome and supportive! Man i wish i had friends (vampire or no ;]) like them!
Conrad seriously freaks me out! Is he always going to be a big meanie? Or does he eventually warm up? Maaa ... so many questions that only future chapters will tell the answers!
I'm still curious over this thing that Nicoli, has/had .. every time I read a new chapter I'm like hmmm whats going on here, will it be mentioned?!
I wonder how Felix died hmmmm?!
I also have this reeeeeeeeeeally bad feeling that something bad is going to happen soon but I just cannot put my finger on what it could be!
MAAAAAAAAAAAAA ...!! IM SO EXCITED!
So did it meet my expectations .... YES IT FREAKING DID !!!
Was I sitting on the edge of my seat .. bed even ... YES I WAS!
Can I wait till the next chapter ... YES (nooooooo) BUT I'LL BE CHECKING FOR UPDATE EVERYDAY UNTIL YOU DO ;]
You are totally awesome! I hope you forgive me large rambling and long review ... this is definately the longest one I have ever written!
Okay let's start from the begining :)
The starting the chapter just made me have another almost heart attack! I was like O.O Nicoli is still falling .. whose guna save him ... who is free to save him???!!! When Felix popped up I was like ...okay I really wasn't expecting that... but he is sooo adorable I refuse to believe that he doesn't in some way care for the little 'meatbag' hahah I love that.
Now I'm still not sure if I like Omen or not ... still something a little iffy about him hmm, but I have to say when he went soaring off the hill, hit the deck and Felix and Nicoli were all like 'Ooowww' I snorted so loud I woke my brother up, whose room is next door to mine (we have a wall between our rooms that the last owners put up wrong it is so thin that if we are loud enough we can hear each other ...)
When Omen went off on his ...you wouldn't be able to understand speech ... I was like wow, this guy has obviously seen one too many vampires in his lifetime ... then I kind of felt really sorry for him ... Serious Andre .... *drools* that was hot!
Omen holding up the gun to Andre almost killed me! As he finally put it down I was like PHEEEEWWW that was a close one ...
hmmmm skeletons indeed!
Mann I felt my eyes well up with tears as Nicoli did! It was all emotional and cute and the family hug URGH! don't even get me started I freaking LOVE Lance!
Awwww Nicoli is just soo cute, man if he were real I would totally jump on him and glomp him to death! Getting all upset and mopey ... awww! Ethan and the others are just totally awesome and supportive! Man i wish i had friends (vampire or no ;]) like them!
Conrad seriously freaks me out! Is he always going to be a big meanie? Or does he eventually warm up? Maaa ... so many questions that only future chapters will tell the answers!
I'm still curious over this thing that Nicoli, has/had .. every time I read a new chapter I'm like hmmm whats going on here, will it be mentioned?!
I wonder how Felix died hmmmm?!
I also have this reeeeeeeeeeally bad feeling that something bad is going to happen soon but I just cannot put my finger on what it could be!
MAAAAAAAAAAAAA ...!! IM SO EXCITED!
So did it meet my expectations .... YES IT FREAKING DID !!!
Was I sitting on the edge of my seat .. bed even ... YES I WAS!
Can I wait till the next chapter ... YES (nooooooo) BUT I'LL BE CHECKING FOR UPDATE EVERYDAY UNTIL YOU DO ;]
You are totally awesome! I hope you forgive me large rambling and long review ... this is definately the longest one I have ever written!
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Can I say how much I adore every single one of your characters? Even Omen, because lets face it most antagonists need some loven too.
I love where you are taking things and I cannot wait to find out more about little Nicoli. There is much more than meets the eye. Andre is my homeboy. I'll admit, I'd kick it with him, like as a pool boy I could totally see him being a boy toy of that sort. <333
&&&& Conrad! Hello' your characters, all of them, are just freaking amazing. Their individual characterstics make them so unique that they could all have their own stories, but added into one mixing pot it is truly a great read!
Continue, I cannot wait for more!
I love where you are taking things and I cannot wait to find out more about little Nicoli. There is much more than meets the eye. Andre is my homeboy. I'll admit, I'd kick it with him, like as a pool boy I could totally see him being a boy toy of that sort. <333
&&&& Conrad! Hello' your characters, all of them, are just freaking amazing. Their individual characterstics make them so unique that they could all have their own stories, but added into one mixing pot it is truly a great read!
Continue, I cannot wait for more!
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April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great update after the amazing cliffhanger (I couldn't resist writing it!!) of the other chapter I don't think I could have taken another with as much action as that one had. Although I am happy that Nicoli and Lance are safe I have a new problem. Not only am I dying to know what happened to Nicoli in the past (please tell us soon), but now I also want to know Andre and Omen/Owen's past. I hope you update again soon.
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April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Waa waa waawaaWAA! What is UP with Omee and Ande? They sound... like... ex-lovers... *Squeeeeeel* I'm just going to picture that in my head for some time. Yessss, I'm picturing, I'm picturing... picturing... Man, that's hot. Until I know for sure, I have decided that they were lovie lovers, broken and ruined by despair. *sniff*
I'm picturing...
I'm picturing...