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May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Baww T.T It was just so sad to read! I really hope Owen and Andre work things out somehow, I would love to see them happy together again (though I'm sure it would cause a lot of drama in the family I would still love to see it lol xP) I actually figured Owen was about 28 or so- late twenties it seems I wasn't that far off. And I don't know this chapter just made me like him more, his attempts at humor while that woman was attacking him just seemed adorable.
I quite like reading a lot of talking, I enjoy seeing how character interact. Oh man I cant wait for the next chapter ^^ And good luck with finals and graduation it's driving me crazy too!
Luff~
-Zel
I quite like reading a lot of talking, I enjoy seeing how character interact. Oh man I cant wait for the next chapter ^^ And good luck with finals and graduation it's driving me crazy too!
Luff~
-Zel
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May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH! IM SORRY !!! Seriously my reviewing just seems to get later and later AND LATER!! I'm sorry (again :|) Yeah my exam went really REALLY well, I got near top marks which was pretty awesome BUT now I've started all my major ones and during the next three weeks I'll be taking 19 exams and these exams pretty much determin my life for the future soo I'm slightly kookoo at the moment .... >.>
ANYWAYS LOL .... off rambling there ... AGAIN!!!
YES YES IT IS!! REALLY IM NOT JOKING MD really IS just that freaking thrilling, when I notice you have updated I can hardly keep a grin off my face, I'm totally happy for the rest off the day! AWWW hehe, not a problem, its really nice to get such a long response after reviewing because you know some people are just like hmm thanks for reviewing ... so its nice to actually hold a conversation :D!
HAAHAHAHAH yeah it was really Awkward my brother and mother ran in and looked around wildly like WHATS WRONG?! and I was like ... eehehehehe false alarm .... the chapter ended on a cliffie ... I thought they were going to kill me C:
Hahahah after this new chapter ... you can have as many of my chocolate eggs as you want !!!
speaking of the next chapter AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
IT WAS TOTALLY AWESOME !! I was like >o< seriously I CANT EVEN EXPLAIN WHAT I FREAKING MEAN! I'm reading it again now and I still can't explain !!! Its just like WOOOOOOOW ! me= speechless.
there were so many hot parts, funny parts, sweet parts, tehee parts, waff parts ... I was like OMG *explodes* hahha sure you dont think im insane yet ??
Sorry my grammar seems to be getting worse and worse as i write this but i just get so excited talking about it that my fingers are dancing across the keyboard before i can think of making sure im using proper english and everything.
ANYWAYS! Yeah and the whole Conrad Ethan thingy ... Ethan is soooooooooOOOOOooooo sweet! To go up against *coughcoughbigscarypowerfulcoughcough* Conrad. Dimitri? For some reason the mention of someone else betraying actually rings a bell .... I swear I read about it in an early chapter but now i just dont remember I think I'm going to have to read from the begining :D:D and still I havent decided if i like Conrad better or worse after his chapter because he was a big meanie but at the same time he was lovely by saying goodbye hmmmmmmm ....
AND AND AND i cannot get this Nicoli eye thingy out of my mind ... I sense a REALLY REALLY GOOD story behind that one ... maybe thats why he was random singing that creepy nursery rhyme ... haha i remember it always used to creep me out when i was little :| GOSH IM SO EXCITED!! I am EAGERLY awaiting the next chapter ... IM SURE ITS GOING TO BLOW MY MIND YET AGAIN !!! :)
ANYWAYS LOL .... off rambling there ... AGAIN!!!
YES YES IT IS!! REALLY IM NOT JOKING MD really IS just that freaking thrilling, when I notice you have updated I can hardly keep a grin off my face, I'm totally happy for the rest off the day! AWWW hehe, not a problem, its really nice to get such a long response after reviewing because you know some people are just like hmm thanks for reviewing ... so its nice to actually hold a conversation :D!
HAAHAHAHAH yeah it was really Awkward my brother and mother ran in and looked around wildly like WHATS WRONG?! and I was like ... eehehehehe false alarm .... the chapter ended on a cliffie ... I thought they were going to kill me C:
Hahahah after this new chapter ... you can have as many of my chocolate eggs as you want !!!
speaking of the next chapter AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
IT WAS TOTALLY AWESOME !! I was like >o< seriously I CANT EVEN EXPLAIN WHAT I FREAKING MEAN! I'm reading it again now and I still can't explain !!! Its just like WOOOOOOOW ! me= speechless.
there were so many hot parts, funny parts, sweet parts, tehee parts, waff parts ... I was like OMG *explodes* hahha sure you dont think im insane yet ??
Sorry my grammar seems to be getting worse and worse as i write this but i just get so excited talking about it that my fingers are dancing across the keyboard before i can think of making sure im using proper english and everything.
ANYWAYS! Yeah and the whole Conrad Ethan thingy ... Ethan is soooooooooOOOOOooooo sweet! To go up against *coughcoughbigscarypowerfulcoughcough* Conrad. Dimitri? For some reason the mention of someone else betraying actually rings a bell .... I swear I read about it in an early chapter but now i just dont remember I think I'm going to have to read from the begining :D:D and still I havent decided if i like Conrad better or worse after his chapter because he was a big meanie but at the same time he was lovely by saying goodbye hmmmmmmm ....
AND AND AND i cannot get this Nicoli eye thingy out of my mind ... I sense a REALLY REALLY GOOD story behind that one ... maybe thats why he was random singing that creepy nursery rhyme ... haha i remember it always used to creep me out when i was little :| GOSH IM SO EXCITED!! I am EAGERLY awaiting the next chapter ... IM SURE ITS GOING TO BLOW MY MIND YET AGAIN !!! :)
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May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hahah its me again
i was just reading over my review after i had posted it
(late lol)
and i realised that i completely messed up what i was saying and typed to the song i was listening to instead of what i wanted to say ... hahah whoops
SOOOO what I meant to say about Conrad was that I wasnt sure what i thought about him because he was a big meanie but still he did apologise (not say goodbye lmao) and act all really sorry and he did say that he only wanted the best for his family SOOOOO that shows he cant really be AS bad as he appears ... though still hmmm he can be pretty mean
ANYWAYS NO MORE RAMBLING FROM ME lol
till next time :)
i was just reading over my review after i had posted it
(late lol)
and i realised that i completely messed up what i was saying and typed to the song i was listening to instead of what i wanted to say ... hahah whoops
SOOOO what I meant to say about Conrad was that I wasnt sure what i thought about him because he was a big meanie but still he did apologise (not say goodbye lmao) and act all really sorry and he did say that he only wanted the best for his family SOOOOO that shows he cant really be AS bad as he appears ... though still hmmm he can be pretty mean
ANYWAYS NO MORE RAMBLING FROM ME lol
till next time :)
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May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O///o He's always going to have a Vampire lover, isn't he? ... And I thought I hated Conrad before. I hate people like him, so stuck in their old-fashioned, stubborn, BS preconseptions of people. ... Sorry about that... *sigh* OOOOwh~ Who can the traitor be? I wonder...
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May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY! *jumping for joy* Ethan and Nicoli finally did it and no one interrupted them...i have to say that i just knew his mom was going to find a way to interrupt and i was overjoyed that he didn't...i wonder how things will be different now...oh and i wonder how felix will react...something tells me he won't be happy about this...there is something about felix and ethan's relationship...i can't wait to find out the whole story there...anywho great chapter!!!! i can't wait for your next update...btw the sex scene was HOTTTTTTTT!
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May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey there ^^
Eh, looks like you managed to upload two chapters since my last review ^^' Which got me both ecstatic and feeling kind of bad ^^'''' I'm blaming my hectic week. Hope you still want me on your cheerleader team :>
Hey, I'm really flattered by your offer of free shipping, but I'd feel bad if it cost more than the book itself ^^''' I'm working for that exact reason - to be able to buy the stuff I want ^__^
As for you being an evil author... You proved the theory right again XD. I mean leaving your readers hanging right after Nicoli and Ethan agreed to go all naughty and sweaty... Bad, bad author, you :P But at least you delivered the conclusion of the night quick enough ^__^ And what a conclusion it was!! Mmm, sweet. I'm not sure you can put it in your resume, but boy, you sure know how to write your smut :P And after all this teasing... So worth the wait ^__^
Oh, btw, I was feeling exactly the same about Ethan taking Nicoli's doo-dah into his mouth as the boy XD When the vampire was still just using his tongue and lips I was all "Well, duh, sure he can't do mote, the fangs! That's something you can't exactly cover with your lips". I think Nicoli was only sensible to remove this action from the menu :P Maybe they can try again when Ethan is not hungry ^_~
Ok, I could write more praises for the love scene, but as I said I'm a huge fan of aftermaths and chapter 33 (or 32 according to your counter :P) was a perfect example of how an aftermath should look like. All the calmness and answers and explanations and tenderness and the general feel of slowness was needed in the story. Nicoli has been high strung for quite a while now, even if we say nothing about the Oman stunt. He needed this reassuring that Ethan provided. And it was so lovely that I read it all twice ^___^
I have to say I like how Ethan stood up against Conrad on Nicoli's behalf. I can say that he feels bad about putting Nicoli's life on line which earns him even more brownie points in my book.
As for Conrad he's a complete mystery to me... I don't get the man. He seems to genuinely care for his family, he wants to protect them and make sure they're happy and yet he's capable of doing things that will hurt his "kids". Like killing Nicoli is certain to hurt Ethan, and yet he's so unwilling to let the boy live... Especially since, for all he knows, Nicoli has proven his loyalty. A trait of character that seems to matter to Conrad much. What will it take to convince the vampire to trust a human? How come he deems all humans so untrustworthy anyway?? His family used to be humans too, after all. I'm starting to suspect it has something to do with Dimitri? Why would Conrad bring up his name otherwise, in his argument with Ethan? Ugh, the unknown ^^'
Anyway, sorry again for being this late. Understandably I haven't moved forward at all with my drawings during last week. And I'm not sure I'll manage to do too much in the current one. Oh well, we'll see :)
Thank you for sharing this story with us ^____^
*hugs*
kashka
Eh, looks like you managed to upload two chapters since my last review ^^' Which got me both ecstatic and feeling kind of bad ^^'''' I'm blaming my hectic week. Hope you still want me on your cheerleader team :>
Hey, I'm really flattered by your offer of free shipping, but I'd feel bad if it cost more than the book itself ^^''' I'm working for that exact reason - to be able to buy the stuff I want ^__^
As for you being an evil author... You proved the theory right again XD. I mean leaving your readers hanging right after Nicoli and Ethan agreed to go all naughty and sweaty... Bad, bad author, you :P But at least you delivered the conclusion of the night quick enough ^__^ And what a conclusion it was!! Mmm, sweet. I'm not sure you can put it in your resume, but boy, you sure know how to write your smut :P And after all this teasing... So worth the wait ^__^
Oh, btw, I was feeling exactly the same about Ethan taking Nicoli's doo-dah into his mouth as the boy XD When the vampire was still just using his tongue and lips I was all "Well, duh, sure he can't do mote, the fangs! That's something you can't exactly cover with your lips". I think Nicoli was only sensible to remove this action from the menu :P Maybe they can try again when Ethan is not hungry ^_~
Ok, I could write more praises for the love scene, but as I said I'm a huge fan of aftermaths and chapter 33 (or 32 according to your counter :P) was a perfect example of how an aftermath should look like. All the calmness and answers and explanations and tenderness and the general feel of slowness was needed in the story. Nicoli has been high strung for quite a while now, even if we say nothing about the Oman stunt. He needed this reassuring that Ethan provided. And it was so lovely that I read it all twice ^___^
I have to say I like how Ethan stood up against Conrad on Nicoli's behalf. I can say that he feels bad about putting Nicoli's life on line which earns him even more brownie points in my book.
As for Conrad he's a complete mystery to me... I don't get the man. He seems to genuinely care for his family, he wants to protect them and make sure they're happy and yet he's capable of doing things that will hurt his "kids". Like killing Nicoli is certain to hurt Ethan, and yet he's so unwilling to let the boy live... Especially since, for all he knows, Nicoli has proven his loyalty. A trait of character that seems to matter to Conrad much. What will it take to convince the vampire to trust a human? How come he deems all humans so untrustworthy anyway?? His family used to be humans too, after all. I'm starting to suspect it has something to do with Dimitri? Why would Conrad bring up his name otherwise, in his argument with Ethan? Ugh, the unknown ^^'
Anyway, sorry again for being this late. Understandably I haven't moved forward at all with my drawings during last week. And I'm not sure I'll manage to do too much in the current one. Oh well, we'll see :)
Thank you for sharing this story with us ^____^
*hugs*
kashka
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May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is fantastic. I love the mystery and the interactions between the characters. I would love to see some hot sex between Nicoli and Ethan soon and I really want to know what's in the book and who was on the phone with Omen. What is Omen anyway, and what was in that syringe? Inquiring minds want to know! LOL!
Keep up the good work and please be a fast updater!
Keep up the good work and please be a fast updater!
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May 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was so worried when Ethan began talking back to Conrad, but it turned out okay :3 *Exhales*
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May 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hell yes! Finally!! Now I can read that chapter again, as I know they will not be disturbed and I can really get into it *bg*
I am glad about the way you put things 'right' with Ethan again. Showing us he is seriously willing to go against Conrad to protect Nicoli, very good.
You know, I wonder how long it will take for Nicoli and Ethan to finally catch the clue bus and see that 'just being fuck buddies' is so not going to work *lol* At least, that's what we are all hoping for!
Keep on writing!!
I am glad about the way you put things 'right' with Ethan again. Showing us he is seriously willing to go against Conrad to protect Nicoli, very good.
You know, I wonder how long it will take for Nicoli and Ethan to finally catch the clue bus and see that 'just being fuck buddies' is so not going to work *lol* At least, that's what we are all hoping for!
Keep on writing!!
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April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOoooooow first things first; sorry for taking so long to review I've been getting ready for my art exams which starts tomorrow AHHHHH ! lol anyways I finally have a spare moment where I'm meant to be sleeping but nevermind i just had to review! Seriously I'm sensing you have an ambition to kill me, my heart was thumping so hard!! It sounds crazy but its so exciting and thrilling and *SQUEAL*
yeah well .. anyways answering to your reply :)
I won't stick any bills on you :) I think I would have died before I reached the hospital XP. Yeah still feel a little awkward but no matter, I definately cannot keep quiet about this story I just have to talk to someone about it and who better than the writer :D. Yeah I really wasn't expecting Felix but he is just sooo lovely AWWWW hes just a big teddy bear really ... a cold ghostly teddy bear that is. Haha yeah, I found it so funny that even after I finished reading the chapter I went back just to read that bit again.
Yeah I was really convinced Omen was going to shoot him, I thought I was going to throw my laptop out the window from suspense SERIOUSLY!!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH *tackles* I'M ACTUALLY SO EXCITED!! I'VE NEVER FELT THIS WAY BEFORE SERIOUSLY ITS CRAZY!
Lol okay moving on to the new chapter >.>;
I felt soooo bad that Nicoli was feeling so sad; seriously my heart went out to him I just wanted to give him the biggest hug and a slab of chocolate to release some happy endorphins! I found my eyes watering when Ethan hugged him I just wanted join in for a group hug! It was all emotional and fluffy and AHHHH SOOOOO CUTE!
I admire Nicoli (did I mention how much I freaking love that name?!) he has such courage to actually tell Ethan how he feels instead of leaving the vamp to just read it off him. Haha Nicoli is so devious with his ideas and and and and then
YOU ENDED IT
I actually screamed at the laptop screen; I was like trembling in my seat all like YES FINALLY ITS GOING TO HAPPEN and then you go cold turkey on me!!! Lol Its good for the soul I guess but I was so gutted, at the same time im glad it didnt happen then because Nicoli is acting somewhat strange ... could it be that he really want this (well we all secretly know he does) could it be he feels he needs to compensate for getting them into trouble and almost spilling the coffee beans or could it be that he was really jealous of the thought of Ethan with someone else that he felt he had to do something before he lost interest.
AHHH SO MANY POSSIBILTIES .. lol you just keep us guessing doncha?! I FREAKING LOVE IT
till next time :))
pa. I really hope I don't sound like a crazy mad insane person ... I just ate a lindt easter egg and those things are hardcore chocolate one bite and not only do I feel sickened (YES its that rich) but i also start floating off on random tangents like a balloon
Moon
yeah well .. anyways answering to your reply :)
I won't stick any bills on you :) I think I would have died before I reached the hospital XP. Yeah still feel a little awkward but no matter, I definately cannot keep quiet about this story I just have to talk to someone about it and who better than the writer :D. Yeah I really wasn't expecting Felix but he is just sooo lovely AWWWW hes just a big teddy bear really ... a cold ghostly teddy bear that is. Haha yeah, I found it so funny that even after I finished reading the chapter I went back just to read that bit again.
Yeah I was really convinced Omen was going to shoot him, I thought I was going to throw my laptop out the window from suspense SERIOUSLY!!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH *tackles* I'M ACTUALLY SO EXCITED!! I'VE NEVER FELT THIS WAY BEFORE SERIOUSLY ITS CRAZY!
Lol okay moving on to the new chapter >.>;
I felt soooo bad that Nicoli was feeling so sad; seriously my heart went out to him I just wanted to give him the biggest hug and a slab of chocolate to release some happy endorphins! I found my eyes watering when Ethan hugged him I just wanted join in for a group hug! It was all emotional and fluffy and AHHHH SOOOOO CUTE!
I admire Nicoli (did I mention how much I freaking love that name?!) he has such courage to actually tell Ethan how he feels instead of leaving the vamp to just read it off him. Haha Nicoli is so devious with his ideas and and and and then
YOU ENDED IT
I actually screamed at the laptop screen; I was like trembling in my seat all like YES FINALLY ITS GOING TO HAPPEN and then you go cold turkey on me!!! Lol Its good for the soul I guess but I was so gutted, at the same time im glad it didnt happen then because Nicoli is acting somewhat strange ... could it be that he really want this (well we all secretly know he does) could it be he feels he needs to compensate for getting them into trouble and almost spilling the coffee beans or could it be that he was really jealous of the thought of Ethan with someone else that he felt he had to do something before he lost interest.
AHHH SO MANY POSSIBILTIES .. lol you just keep us guessing doncha?! I FREAKING LOVE IT
till next time :))
pa. I really hope I don't sound like a crazy mad insane person ... I just ate a lindt easter egg and those things are hardcore chocolate one bite and not only do I feel sickened (YES its that rich) but i also start floating off on random tangents like a balloon
Moon