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person KitKat
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello? Can I say freakn' amazing? I was baking cupcakes at the same I was reading the new chapter and I burnt the cupcakes. Whatever. They're still amazing. But really, I don't reviwer a lot for this story...or at all for that matter. But I must say I love, just ADORE this story. I mean Andre cracks me up and Galvin makes me think of a teddy bear. For some bizarre twisted reason. I find it really intersting of where you are taking the story and I will always continue to read it!
Until next time <3
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely loved the info about cora and gavin...i am even more interested and invested in those characters now that nicoli has gotten to spend some time with them and got to know a little more about them. i really like the dialogue characters, i like the action heavy ones too...they both move the story along so you aren't missing anything when you write them...all in all great job and i can't wait for the next chapter. thanks for the update.
person Avernion
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I loved this chapter. At first i didn't think much of Gavin, other than him being an annoying Conrad-Shadow. Now I like him lots and want to know more about him. Grauwr! More of Mighty Gavin! And I completely adore Cora. I mean, I’ve always liked her, but she is much more interesting now. I liked the whole piece with the werewolf-thing. Very interesting. I laughed so much when reading some of the parts in this chapter that my family told me to shut up. They have no understanding none at all. Why do I spend my Sundays with them, I will never know. Oh, right, now I remember. It’s for the food!
I’m really impressed with how you write. It’s always very interesting and emotionally truth-worthy. (can you even say that o_O ??? )
Aaaaa--- I can’t take my mind from Gavin… An ancient youthful all-powerfully few-worded chunk of history… I would so let him drink my blood… Not all, but some… Over candlelight and under star shine…
person smint45
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the email!!! As you can see I'm now reading you newest work!! I really love this story already although I'm still in chappie 17!! It probably will take me a few more days to finish this story and then you will get a real review when I'm finished!! I just wanted to say that you made me very happy with your email and that I so love this and all of your storys!!! (the ones I haven't read jet I will read after I finished Moonlight Denial!!!)Till this point I can say I love your charakters, expecialy Felix and Ethan (did I write him right?)!!!! And this FLS thing is so hot!!! I hope I will see more of it in the chappies I still have to read!!! This story is so exciting I allways keep reading till 4am and am totaly tired in the morning!! But I simply can't stop!!!! Again thanks for the email and for this wonderful story!! Now I really want to continue reading!! See you when I'm finished!!!
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww....you're right that was a sweet short ass chappy!! LOL! I loved it, but I'm very curious what the relationship was between Ethan and Felix before Felix died. Were they brothers? Lovers? Friends? I get the impression from Conrad's look at Felix on the stairs that Felix is the one Ethan became attached to and suffered over his death. Was Ethan somehow responsible for Felix dying?

So many questions! Inquiring minds wanna know...so hurry and update love!!! *hugs*
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay you're back and so is my honey bunny ethan...yes i've claimed him as mine, lol...so yeah i'm really extremely intrigued about the relationship between ethan and felix now...i wonder about their past...great chapter and i love forward to parts 2 and 3 of this chapter. thanks for the update!
person Avernion
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Argh. Ethan and Felix, well, they frustrate me xS I think it’s because I want Nici to be the most important one to Ethan, but he just isn’t. It’s just so frustratingly obvious just who holds the most of our vampire’s heart. Sometimes I just wish that little ghost could move on and release Ethan from the past. How can one move on from past tragedies if the ghost of them keeps hunting you? Laugh, sorry man. I know you love your little ghost, but he frustrates me to no end. And at the same time I feel really bad for Felix. I mean, what can he get from life when he’s dead? I think my frustration would end if Ethan would just make his intentions clear, what kind of relationship does he want with Nic, and what does he want with little ghosty, then stick to it. It’s probably just my girly heart that gets hurt on Nici’s behalf. I don’t take these ‘we may flirt and fuck but I could just throw you away if someone more important to me asked it of me’- relationships all that well.
Now that I think about it, the one I’m most annoyed with, is probably Ethan.
Poor poor Nicole, and poor poor Felix. Sigh. Ethan may have a big heart, but he’s being a dork.
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome! i can't wait for the next chapter! Will we learn any more about Nicoli being touched by evil?
person Avernion
schedule May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww... You're having so much trouble whit the material stuff, honey. Why? Why oh why. it's just not fair.

And about the last chapter, I hope that Mr Vampire and Mr Slayer will have some more sweet memories in the future... With huuuggings, and kissings and looooovings. He he he he...
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I had a lot of chapters to read...from 21 - 35, but I loved them all.

I can't wait to read more.

I hope you'll update again soon please.