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June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i just stumbled upon this story and i already can't put it down long enough; it's too intriguing!!! currently i'm at chapter 9 and there's something i'm really curious about and consequantly can't set my mind to peace. it's been on my mind from the beginning.
if Nacy's father comes from this town, could it be that he's some sort of monster, too? thus, could Nacy have some monster blood running in his veins without him being aware of it? but luckily i still have many chapters ahaed of me to uncover this mistery. =)
if Nacy's father comes from this town, could it be that he's some sort of monster, too? thus, could Nacy have some monster blood running in his veins without him being aware of it? but luckily i still have many chapters ahaed of me to uncover this mistery. =)
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June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aghsjkl?dslkj DIMITRI
I really have an unhealthy love for Dimitri and his clan, especially Seth <3 I always get so happy when they show up! (Not as happy as when Owen shows up, but hey, Owen = Awesome.)
SPEAKING OF WHICH
I didn't review for the last couple of chapters, but I'm actually upset enough to flip a table that Andre used Owen as a replacement for someone else! Of course, I know Andre loves Owen in his own way, BUT STILL. MAKES ME A LITTLE UPSET. And is it Gavin that Andre loves? I have a hunch that that's who it is.
Is Owen gonna come back to fight for the Heart too? Or make a nuiscance? Or just appear in anywil way shape or form? I hope so <3
I really have an unhealthy love for Dimitri and his clan, especially Seth <3 I always get so happy when they show up! (Not as happy as when Owen shows up, but hey, Owen = Awesome.)
SPEAKING OF WHICH
I didn't review for the last couple of chapters, but I'm actually upset enough to flip a table that Andre used Owen as a replacement for someone else! Of course, I know Andre loves Owen in his own way, BUT STILL. MAKES ME A LITTLE UPSET. And is it Gavin that Andre loves? I have a hunch that that's who it is.
Is Owen gonna come back to fight for the Heart too? Or make a nuiscance? Or just appear in anywil way shape or form? I hope so <3
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June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nicoli got to meet Katerina! I wonder if he will get to meet the other 2 vampires...hmmm...well it was all going well but then Dimitri had to ruin the moment! I can't wait to see how they get out of this mess because if Dimitri is around he must have his backup with him. Ooooooh now let's see who walks out with the heart. At least Preston was smart enough to make that box so no one but one of the good guys can open it. I'm definitely in a DIZZY FRENZY TIZZY!!!!!! Exciting and great chapter! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG SOOO COOL!! And the speech Conrad said my heart melted. Ahhh cant they have a break haha but i like it im so excited to know what happens :D I hope Felix is ok. And i hope everyone lives through the fight that takes place AH and that he dosent get the heart ohhh tension!!! Looking forward to the next one!!
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June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was just wonderful!!!! I would never have expected that the three vampires are still alive!!!! But Dimitri just had to pop up when everything was so good:( Well I hope the next fight will not give dimitri the heart because then nicoli gets real problems if he can't keep his promis!!!! I'm really happy that you update so fast!!!! See you again soon!!!!
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June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I was wondering when he'd show up. just goes to show they shoulda listened to that song lyric 'you don't ever count your money (or in this case, shiny hearts in a box)when your sitting at the table...' wanna celebrate? Save it for a safe location. :P
*makes note to keep my new secret weapon, the EPoD (evil pout of death) on hand for future use.
Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan, I hope they gotta crap ton of protections on that box. Can anyone use the shiny heart of shiny now or just the kid?
*makes note to keep my new secret weapon, the EPoD (evil pout of death) on hand for future use.
Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan, I hope they gotta crap ton of protections on that box. Can anyone use the shiny heart of shiny now or just the kid?
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June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
O my gosh I am so sorry! Its been like months since the last time I reviewed for you. Please forgive me! But on to the story. Haha I'm pretty sure the last chapter I reviewed was way back when they rescued nicoli. I feel so ashamed):! Anyways I loved the chapters after it was a nice wind down after all the action. ah nicoli and amelia, all your skeletons out of the closet. I think you did a great job on showing their thoughts n feelings four one another. I didn't seem corny or over the top. The thanksgiving chapter was nice and set the story back into a little lighter sense. Poor felix, the kid can't get a break, after all the bad he finds something good and bam it all goes down the rabbit hole with evan. Can I just say that evan/meier is the most annoying character. You did a great job of creating him. Hmm nicoli and the hearts floating in the air. Interesting fore telling of events. Vampire vs witch? Go conrad you'd the man! Ha they found the first heart after 83 chapters woo!just kidding, this makes things a lot more interesting. I wonder why katerina wanted their existence hidden?? I think I've asked you this evrytime but when will shadow dude show up???? Darn you, you keep drawing out the suspense! Oh well uts your story I can only be honored to read it.
P.S. Yay demetri is back! I love you demetri! That reminds me do we get to find out were Seth was teleported? Can't wait to see both of them again!
Keep up the amazing writing and I'm glad you got over your writers block I really missed ya! Good luck and always have fun
P.S.S. I will try to review more often
P.S. Yay demetri is back! I love you demetri! That reminds me do we get to find out were Seth was teleported? Can't wait to see both of them again!
Keep up the amazing writing and I'm glad you got over your writers block I really missed ya! Good luck and always have fun
P.S.S. I will try to review more often
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June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I need to review a lot of chapters. o.o Half of them today and half tomorrow. Sorry I didn’t review for such a long time and I’m very happy you’re writing again. ^-^ Now the reviews:
Chapter 76
I said that I missed Ethan bitting Nicoli in the previous chapter. I am so very happy that you wrote the morning scene in this chapter. ^-^ The way they were sneaking so they could take a shower together was great too. So very daring since Nicoli’s parents were at home. Running naked in Nicoli’s house. That was great! XD
I am also very curious how will Conrad react when he finds out what Ethan wants to do whit the hearts. Although somehow I really doubt that’s gonna be an issue later in the future… with that oncoming war from Cecile’s vision.
Chapter 77
You know, I thought that Nicoli’s going to give Cecile a lot more grief for hiring Omen. He didn’t even yell. D:
I liked the fight scene. I’m happy it wasn’t all that long since I’m not too fond of fighting scenes. If a fic has too many of them I grumble quite a bit since I think they should be in a movie rather than books but that’s probably only my inability to properly picture them in my mind with the proper speed so that they make sense. XD Fights with magic are okay. ^-^ I can picture them quite nicely so Conrad’s and Cecile’s fight was okay. ^-^ Swords… hm… it must be a scene really well written. ;)
Deloris’ reaction on Conrad winning was also very nice. ^-^ I loved her pouting like that. And the way Deloris deals with Conrad is also something that I’m always looking forward to seeing. ;)
I loved the bet between Cora, Ethan and Andre. That made me grin for quite a while.
Chapter 78
I like the locket. ^-^ And when it vanished in the later chapter I was sad. XD but more of that later. I was rereading the chapter so that I could say a few words about it and when I read this: “Unless it tells us where to go I don’t see it being of any use.” I chuckled for quite a while and when I stopped I grinned another minute. XD
And when those bad vampires showed up and was actually scared for Nicoli and the rest although I was scared the most about Nicoli. O.O I hope that you won’t let Dimitri put his hands on Nicoli again (but at the same time I’m actually curious if that ever happens what scenes you’d think of XD and that makes me actually wanting Nicoli to get kidnapped again. Does that makes me bad? ;P).
When Omen activated the barrier the only thing I could think about was “How the hell did he get his hands on that? Shouldn’t it be something that a witch makes?” And all following implications from that thought. Ughr…. My poor head. XD
When Omen broke Amelia’s broom I thought “What a jerk!” I really though that he was only set on the vampires and he’ll leave Nicoli and Amelia alone. Guess I was wrong. I liked him but you really make it very hard to do right now.
And I hate Seth. Am I to assure that you know the name Seth is the name of an Egyptian god, a bad one? The name suits that twisted vampire. When he captured Nicoli and was afraid again (and at the same time my sadistic-perverted mind thought of what a scene between the two of them would look like. >.< Man, what cruel tendencies I have!) that he’ll hurt him. And when he bit Nicoli… I’m curious what circumstances you’ll create for Dimitri’s clan to find out about Nicoli’s FLS. Hmm… Now I wonder if you even planned that to happen. XD
The scene at the fairy ring… now that is something I’d like to see on tv! It would have been one of my favorite movie scenes, right after the one where everyone including Aragorn kneels in front of Frodo (and Sam if my memory serves me right) after the ring was destroyed in The Lord of the Rings. ^-^ How the fairies helped and how the kids pushed Seth into a ring, that was just great! Hmm… “Lord of the Rings” and Fairy Rings… it looks like I have a thing for rings. XD I wonder where he ended and when he’ll be back to take his revenge on Nicoli. *sighs* But knowing you, I’ll just need to wait and see for myself, right? ;P
I also waited for a scene where Amelia finds out about the mind link and you gave me that scene. Thank you! *bows*
I didn’t think you killed Andre. I remembered the tale when (I forgot his name!) Conrad’s oldest brother died. Andre and (forgot her name too! :( his sister knew that he was dead so if Andre was killed then Cora would have known… right? Well, that was what I was thinking after reading this chapter.
Three down, three to go. And if you’re planning to post the next chapter tomorrow then four. XD I’m so behind on reviewing! But I love every chapter and I don’t think I’ll ever stop. ^-^
Chapter 76
I said that I missed Ethan bitting Nicoli in the previous chapter. I am so very happy that you wrote the morning scene in this chapter. ^-^ The way they were sneaking so they could take a shower together was great too. So very daring since Nicoli’s parents were at home. Running naked in Nicoli’s house. That was great! XD
I am also very curious how will Conrad react when he finds out what Ethan wants to do whit the hearts. Although somehow I really doubt that’s gonna be an issue later in the future… with that oncoming war from Cecile’s vision.
Chapter 77
You know, I thought that Nicoli’s going to give Cecile a lot more grief for hiring Omen. He didn’t even yell. D:
I liked the fight scene. I’m happy it wasn’t all that long since I’m not too fond of fighting scenes. If a fic has too many of them I grumble quite a bit since I think they should be in a movie rather than books but that’s probably only my inability to properly picture them in my mind with the proper speed so that they make sense. XD Fights with magic are okay. ^-^ I can picture them quite nicely so Conrad’s and Cecile’s fight was okay. ^-^ Swords… hm… it must be a scene really well written. ;)
Deloris’ reaction on Conrad winning was also very nice. ^-^ I loved her pouting like that. And the way Deloris deals with Conrad is also something that I’m always looking forward to seeing. ;)
I loved the bet between Cora, Ethan and Andre. That made me grin for quite a while.
Chapter 78
I like the locket. ^-^ And when it vanished in the later chapter I was sad. XD but more of that later. I was rereading the chapter so that I could say a few words about it and when I read this: “Unless it tells us where to go I don’t see it being of any use.” I chuckled for quite a while and when I stopped I grinned another minute. XD
And when those bad vampires showed up and was actually scared for Nicoli and the rest although I was scared the most about Nicoli. O.O I hope that you won’t let Dimitri put his hands on Nicoli again (but at the same time I’m actually curious if that ever happens what scenes you’d think of XD and that makes me actually wanting Nicoli to get kidnapped again. Does that makes me bad? ;P).
When Omen activated the barrier the only thing I could think about was “How the hell did he get his hands on that? Shouldn’t it be something that a witch makes?” And all following implications from that thought. Ughr…. My poor head. XD
When Omen broke Amelia’s broom I thought “What a jerk!” I really though that he was only set on the vampires and he’ll leave Nicoli and Amelia alone. Guess I was wrong. I liked him but you really make it very hard to do right now.
And I hate Seth. Am I to assure that you know the name Seth is the name of an Egyptian god, a bad one? The name suits that twisted vampire. When he captured Nicoli and was afraid again (and at the same time my sadistic-perverted mind thought of what a scene between the two of them would look like. >.< Man, what cruel tendencies I have!) that he’ll hurt him. And when he bit Nicoli… I’m curious what circumstances you’ll create for Dimitri’s clan to find out about Nicoli’s FLS. Hmm… Now I wonder if you even planned that to happen. XD
The scene at the fairy ring… now that is something I’d like to see on tv! It would have been one of my favorite movie scenes, right after the one where everyone including Aragorn kneels in front of Frodo (and Sam if my memory serves me right) after the ring was destroyed in The Lord of the Rings. ^-^ How the fairies helped and how the kids pushed Seth into a ring, that was just great! Hmm… “Lord of the Rings” and Fairy Rings… it looks like I have a thing for rings. XD I wonder where he ended and when he’ll be back to take his revenge on Nicoli. *sighs* But knowing you, I’ll just need to wait and see for myself, right? ;P
I also waited for a scene where Amelia finds out about the mind link and you gave me that scene. Thank you! *bows*
I didn’t think you killed Andre. I remembered the tale when (I forgot his name!) Conrad’s oldest brother died. Andre and (forgot her name too! :( his sister knew that he was dead so if Andre was killed then Cora would have known… right? Well, that was what I was thinking after reading this chapter.
Three down, three to go. And if you’re planning to post the next chapter tomorrow then four. XD I’m so behind on reviewing! But I love every chapter and I don’t think I’ll ever stop. ^-^
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June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Next part of my rambling. XD
Chapter 79
I wanted the same thing as Nicoli – him helping Andre get better. ;) And no, not in a pervy way. XD
I got annoyed that Seth’s so powerful for no apparent reason. =_= But that makes him unique just like the rest of your characters. Um… I’m a bit confused… Gavin said that he shares with Nicoli the fate of being pursued by Seth, right? What did Gavin do? And am I even interpreting this right? O.o
I liked the scene with Andre and Cora and absolutely loved the scene with Gavin. You let the reader know a bit more about them and I’m wondering what Gavin feels for Andre and if he likes him, why won’t he do something about it. Well, now when Andre in so infatuated with Owen there’s little use for Gavin to act on any romantic feelings but I wish he would. Unfortunately I don’t see anything like that happening in the near future. :( I’m imagining how would it be possible for Andre to be with Gavin but I don’t see it happening as long as Owen lives. I don’t want Owen dead but that would make sense, somehow. O.O XD I was thinking of while Owen’s dying he talks with Andre, wants him to take his eye back. Owen dying in Andre’s arms would make Andre hurt so much but Gavin would have been there for him. Maybe then Gavin would let himself love Andre. I’m curious if he’s aware of Andre’s feeling for him. And that kiss… what does Gavin feel for Andre? Their possible romance is one of my favorite topics of thinking when I’m thinking about MD. ^-^
Will we meet that Mylo guy? I’m not sure I want to meet him. If Gavin really acts the way Andre said he does then I don’t want to see that. I like Gavin to much for him to act so degraded.
Chapter 80
This chapter makes me smile. It gives us a little break and at the same time moves the plot along. It’s just perfect, like in real life, if you know what I mean, when you sometimes stumbles upon something useful while doing something that you’re not supposed to be doing at that moment. ;)
Sam. Since English is my second language I don’t know if it’s a girl’s name. I always thought it’s a boy’s name but I also thought that Jesse’s a girl’s name. XD It could be a short version of another girl’s name but I somehow doubt that. And Lance was saying “Sam” all the time. Maybe I’m seeing to much in that but my guess is that Sam’s a boy and that Lance is bisexual. The saying “Like father, like son.” fits here nicely, I think. ;)
Omen was a not so welcome episode but you made him act a little less like a jerk this time and maybe this time Nicoli got through to him. Time will tell, I’d say. ^-^
After reading this chapter I was sure the heart was there under the museum but for quite some time I was wondering “What the hell is LH?” XD Last Hope, or something like that, right? I remembered after a bit of effort. XD The way the locket pulled Nicoli to the heart is one of the reasons that I like it so much. That and the thing that Nicoli can’t get if of and the way it got around the boy’s neck. :) Can you like a locket like a character? o.o I think I actually liked it that way. XD
Now on to the last chapter.
Chapter 81
Sometimes I stuns me how realistic you make some scenes seem. The scene with the vampire finding out about Nicoli’s assumptions was just so good, I was actually thinking that this might have happened in reality. XD
Actually I suspected that Deloris likes Conrad but I never would have thought that we would reciprocate those feelings. Or act on them. That kiss was so sweet. Conrad so rarely shows his soft side that when he does I just love him for it. ^-^
I think you did a great job with that box. I wish I had such a thing. I’d make good use of it. ;)
The way they found the heart was also very nice. You know, I think I’m reading way too much stories where everything’s complicated and when I read about how they found the heart I thought “That is so simple, so easy.” That’s a plus. Too much complications makes the story only seem too much out of this world and that spoils the mood for me.
Nicoli touched the heart. Now I have a theory what happened, two actually although only one is my favorite. Here you have it: The heart or rather Katerina wanted to talk with Nicoli, tell her story or something else very important. *shrugs* I don’t know and I’ curious to find out what it really is. That also makes me wonder about another matter. Preston made a box for the hearts but my imagination is running wild with me and I’m wondering if they’ll really gonna need it. I was thinking about Nicoli snapping his fingers and the heart appears. XD He snaps his fingers again and the heart is gone (nested inside him?). But that’s just my imagination.
The second theory is connected with an issue that I have. The second (stupid) theory is that phantom that possessed Nicoli having something to do with the way the heart made Nicoli unconscious. O.o And about that mysterious spook (damn! I don’t know how to name whatever’s after Nicoli ), I thought that we’ll be meeting “it” before they find the heart, and that we’ll be seeing the clan trying to fight “it” and get Nicoli out of his clutches. Now I know the order will be different. Although I’m concerned. If Nicoli’s going to be connected to the hearts in some weird way (and they gonna hear and do what he says – I don’t even know if that’s true but I still can imagine, right? XD) then if Nicoli’s going to end up in that “things” clutches then will “it” be able to make Nicoli use the heart in any way to “it’s own benefits? Or maybe you’ll need all three heart before you can properly use them?
YAY! I managed to end reviewing today, just like I wanted! Now I can wait for the next chapter with an open heart. ;P
Chapter 79
I wanted the same thing as Nicoli – him helping Andre get better. ;) And no, not in a pervy way. XD
I got annoyed that Seth’s so powerful for no apparent reason. =_= But that makes him unique just like the rest of your characters. Um… I’m a bit confused… Gavin said that he shares with Nicoli the fate of being pursued by Seth, right? What did Gavin do? And am I even interpreting this right? O.o
I liked the scene with Andre and Cora and absolutely loved the scene with Gavin. You let the reader know a bit more about them and I’m wondering what Gavin feels for Andre and if he likes him, why won’t he do something about it. Well, now when Andre in so infatuated with Owen there’s little use for Gavin to act on any romantic feelings but I wish he would. Unfortunately I don’t see anything like that happening in the near future. :( I’m imagining how would it be possible for Andre to be with Gavin but I don’t see it happening as long as Owen lives. I don’t want Owen dead but that would make sense, somehow. O.O XD I was thinking of while Owen’s dying he talks with Andre, wants him to take his eye back. Owen dying in Andre’s arms would make Andre hurt so much but Gavin would have been there for him. Maybe then Gavin would let himself love Andre. I’m curious if he’s aware of Andre’s feeling for him. And that kiss… what does Gavin feel for Andre? Their possible romance is one of my favorite topics of thinking when I’m thinking about MD. ^-^
Will we meet that Mylo guy? I’m not sure I want to meet him. If Gavin really acts the way Andre said he does then I don’t want to see that. I like Gavin to much for him to act so degraded.
Chapter 80
This chapter makes me smile. It gives us a little break and at the same time moves the plot along. It’s just perfect, like in real life, if you know what I mean, when you sometimes stumbles upon something useful while doing something that you’re not supposed to be doing at that moment. ;)
Sam. Since English is my second language I don’t know if it’s a girl’s name. I always thought it’s a boy’s name but I also thought that Jesse’s a girl’s name. XD It could be a short version of another girl’s name but I somehow doubt that. And Lance was saying “Sam” all the time. Maybe I’m seeing to much in that but my guess is that Sam’s a boy and that Lance is bisexual. The saying “Like father, like son.” fits here nicely, I think. ;)
Omen was a not so welcome episode but you made him act a little less like a jerk this time and maybe this time Nicoli got through to him. Time will tell, I’d say. ^-^
After reading this chapter I was sure the heart was there under the museum but for quite some time I was wondering “What the hell is LH?” XD Last Hope, or something like that, right? I remembered after a bit of effort. XD The way the locket pulled Nicoli to the heart is one of the reasons that I like it so much. That and the thing that Nicoli can’t get if of and the way it got around the boy’s neck. :) Can you like a locket like a character? o.o I think I actually liked it that way. XD
Now on to the last chapter.
Chapter 81
Sometimes I stuns me how realistic you make some scenes seem. The scene with the vampire finding out about Nicoli’s assumptions was just so good, I was actually thinking that this might have happened in reality. XD
Actually I suspected that Deloris likes Conrad but I never would have thought that we would reciprocate those feelings. Or act on them. That kiss was so sweet. Conrad so rarely shows his soft side that when he does I just love him for it. ^-^
I think you did a great job with that box. I wish I had such a thing. I’d make good use of it. ;)
The way they found the heart was also very nice. You know, I think I’m reading way too much stories where everything’s complicated and when I read about how they found the heart I thought “That is so simple, so easy.” That’s a plus. Too much complications makes the story only seem too much out of this world and that spoils the mood for me.
Nicoli touched the heart. Now I have a theory what happened, two actually although only one is my favorite. Here you have it: The heart or rather Katerina wanted to talk with Nicoli, tell her story or something else very important. *shrugs* I don’t know and I’ curious to find out what it really is. That also makes me wonder about another matter. Preston made a box for the hearts but my imagination is running wild with me and I’m wondering if they’ll really gonna need it. I was thinking about Nicoli snapping his fingers and the heart appears. XD He snaps his fingers again and the heart is gone (nested inside him?). But that’s just my imagination.
The second theory is connected with an issue that I have. The second (stupid) theory is that phantom that possessed Nicoli having something to do with the way the heart made Nicoli unconscious. O.o And about that mysterious spook (damn! I don’t know how to name whatever’s after Nicoli ), I thought that we’ll be meeting “it” before they find the heart, and that we’ll be seeing the clan trying to fight “it” and get Nicoli out of his clutches. Now I know the order will be different. Although I’m concerned. If Nicoli’s going to be connected to the hearts in some weird way (and they gonna hear and do what he says – I don’t even know if that’s true but I still can imagine, right? XD) then if Nicoli’s going to end up in that “things” clutches then will “it” be able to make Nicoli use the heart in any way to “it’s own benefits? Or maybe you’ll need all three heart before you can properly use them?
YAY! I managed to end reviewing today, just like I wanted! Now I can wait for the next chapter with an open heart. ;P
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June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This chapter was epic and amazing! What else is new?! haha. WOW. I didn't expect Katerina to actually be hea. What a tru surprise! I think it's awesome and maybe lucky even for Nic that she is apparently on his side in wanting the 3 Hearts destroyed so the vamps can be set free! I wonder if the other two powerful vamps are all female 2? I also wanna know why Katerina doesn't want Nic to inform the clan he met her and stuff? Is it b/c she doesn't want the clan to know of her desire for the Hearts to be destroyed so they can all be set free from limbo or something...??? I bet it's that, and didn't she say she didn't want anyone knowing they're still alive? I think those are the main reasons. Are you EVER gonna let us know? Hopefully. Yay. The first Heart is theirs now in their possession! Wow okay the ending did surprise me because OMFG... it's Demetri, crazy fucking bastard. I'm expecting Demetri's clan to be close by. Luvin this!!! Update soon!