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I really love this chappie!!!! Wow the end was hot!!!! You really got a nasty cliffy here!!! So not fair!!!! I really hope to see the smutt in the next chappie!!!! And I want to see Nicolies lessons!!! I hope you will update soon!!! See you next chappie!!!!!

*wipes drool off the keyboard*

Me likes 'slutty' Nicoli! *bg* Does that boy know how to talk dirty or what? Woot! And of course Ethan being pulled in hook, line and sinker! They are well matched for each other and I wonder just how it's going to play out when they realize they have become more than fuck-buddies.

And you know, Conrad isn't too bad either....like Uther ;) I have seen the first season of Merlin and Uther comes across as a very 2 dimensional character the first few episodes. But there are always reasons for someones behaviour. They will be explored later on ;)

Keep on writing!

ps: love the little comic with Faith and Preston!

that was HOTTTT! i do so love nicoli and his sexiness. an aggressive controlling bottom is always fun to read about...yay conrad might be coming around. he won't kill nicoli (unless nicoli does something stupid) and the next thing you know he might even protect nicoli and come around to maybe even liking him...or maybe not...lol. great update and can't wait for the next one!

Ethan seems to be a 'one-task'-kind of man :3 When he sets his mind to something he seems to forget everything else. Promises. Pfffff. He's horny. That just got to take president. Lol. During the whole thing I kept thinking "what will Felix think", and "he won't pull out." Now, Felix is one of the characters that I don't really like. He is competition, even if Nicolie-with-the-impossible-name-to-spell continues this ramp that he'll never fall for Ethan. Anyway, I feel this little sting in my heart for the ghosty ghost. Ethan said he wouldn't, he promised. And right the same day he goes and sex the guy up, the competition. Now, this is why I don't like Felix hanging around. It's got to hurt so enormously to not be able to be with the one you love. I mean, the dude's dead. That makes everything twisted and painful. I think I'm ranting now...

Lol, and Conrad is kind of cute, staking Ethan like that. Hi hi

Oh, and I HATE Arthur’s dad. I’ve seen the entire first season. I keep hoping the old man would just die. He is a egotistic, eccentric, stubborn, blind, one-minded, one-way, I-am-King-and-you-shall-obey-me-or-burn mean killer, that would gladly chop the head off a small child if it healed a bumblebee with magic. It would be for the greater good, for the future of their kingdom, for the side of right. The ass. *shakes fist*

My key-word today is "saluted Stancil". Like, what the heck? Would that be your draft? ;P

I read the story in three goes. ;) The last go was after Nicoli and Ethan ending in bed together. XD I just couldn't stop before I came to the place where they have sex. :) After that I took a break and started again when you posted the 39. chapter. I like the story as it is and the more chapters the better. XD I can enjoy myself by reading and rereading them. Well, I don't pity Omen (Owen, I would, but if he wants to be Omen then I won't). The rest is negotiable. XD
Oh, I enjoyed it! Very much! Nicoli was so sluty. I enjoyed the sex scene very much! You're very good! XD Poor Ethan (I'm doing it again!). He didn't know what he was getting himself into when he fucked Nicoli the first time. XD
I can't wait to see the lesson! :) I'll be waiting for it patiently (or maybe not so much ;)
Hmm... I was concerned about Andre, but if Ethan thinks that he won't hate Nicoli than I'll give it a rest (for now) and wait for them to meet again.
One more thing! After I read the previous chapter I was entertaining myself, while waiting for the next chapter, by thinking about what would happen and how much fun it would be if Nicoli ended as Gavin's fledling (somewhere at the end of the story or something)!!!!! XD The idea won't go out of my head. XD I think he would be a very loving Father. :) He's strict and doesn't show his emotions much, but I think they would be good for each other. And since Gavin doesn't have a child, it's just too much fun thinking about Gavin-Nicoli Sire-Fledling relationship.
Okay, I'll wait for the next chapter. I'm very curious what you'll come up next with. :)

Ethan and Nicoli are so totally going to fall for one another. It's all physical now, but sooner or later it will happen. And will owen and Andre ever get together again? Andre seems to really love him, it's a shame Omen wants him dead.

Hey there, the prodigal daughter comes back to comment on the newest chapter :P
First I have to say this: Nicoli! You damn softie! You were supposed to tear Ethan a new one! Damn, but the guy can charm his way out of all the trouble he gets himself into... Seriously, in short the scene was like:
Nicoli: Ethan! You held back information that could cost me my life! I'm mad at you!
Ethan: *sparkle sparkle*
Nicoli: ...Ok, let's make out.
Ok, I exaggerated (obviously), but still... As much as I love Ethan he gets away with way too much :P
He's lucky he said all those things about Nicoli before (to Faith), so he's excused this time :>
But I still get to see a pissed off Amelia (the name still makes me cringe a bit ^^') when she finds out she was lied to by Nicoli and... someone else from her family (I'm still lobbying the "Cecile is the guardian" theory). Yeah, I'm being mean now. It's the temperature. It's too hot to be legal...
Wow, to hear Conrad (sort of) praising Nicoli (though he wouldn't be himself if he couldn't pick at him in the process of telling the story XD)... I wonder what it means for the boy's "sentence". I wonder if it means anything at all. It was never about him anyway... ^^'
And ah, Omen strikes back (even if he wasn't even in the scene). Is he even still in the city? Poor Andre... Looks like Conrad has his hands fool with his wards...

Ok, no more to say. All there's left is a salute, a bow and a declaration of unending love for this story (and its author, of course :P)
*does all what was mentioned above*

Kashka

ha i'm all about trying some of amelia's food...i live close to a hospital, just in case...lol. great chapter as usual. i don't know how you keep all of these secrets in your head and then who knows what secret and who doesn't, it would so confuse me but when you write it, it all makes sense me and the rest of your readers. i guess that's what counts. i wonder what nicoli had to talk about with ethan. i'm actually looking forward to gavin's training of nicoli. i wonder if it will unlock some other things in nicoli's mind, maybe give us a hint about his past and stuff. well thanks again for updating!

Awwww :'O Poor Andre! He is one of my favourites you know (do I say that about everyone? o-O)His feelings are so sad and lonesome. I would so love to see the two of them make up. You know, my thoughts keep drifting back to them, the last time was just two days ago. They are so sad. But I wonder, If by some miracle, Omen forgives Andre, I still can't see him changing his ways. He is a very headstrong and stubborn character T-T The fangirl in me wants to think that Omen still loves Ander and that's why his hate is still so strong. That's what I would like to think T-T And he couldn't really kill Andre even when the vampire told him to. T-T
Honey, why did you have to make so many miserable couples? I'm dying here. T-T
On a side note, cookies to Conrad. He is really trying :3 It’s good he got Faith to help him see things in different lights. Lords knows, we all need those persons in our lives! ^-^

That was really interseting!!!! I really didn't expect Conrad to praise him!!!1 Well I can't wait to see what happens next!!! See you next chappie!!!