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ok i absolutely loved reading about the training...i kinda imagined myself doing some of the visualization for a moment. this made me want to start mediating so i think i'm gonna take that up for a while and see if i can get my mind and body relaxed. anywho gavin is sweet (sometimes). i'm starting to like his character more and more. awww poor little nicole is just plain worn out. this was a fun chapter to read. i can't wait to they start more of the training. i wonder what all will be unlocked in nicoli's mind...maybe just maybe we can get a glimpse of these "secrets" he seems not to be fully aware of...great chapter only down side is i have to wait for the next one. just kidding...i'll wait (somewhat patiently...lol) oh by the way tried a new food combination...watermelon sprinkled with a little salt, with a dill pickle on the side. Definitely one of my favorite snacks of the summer.

OMG! Aw Gavin is such a sweetie! Augh, I cant wait to read more about him. Damn it woman you make me fall in love with all of your characters, stop it! The training was interesting, I liked the idea of visualization I ahd wondered how you were going to pull it off, very well done in my opinion.

Also: Slashing Gavin and Nicoli now. Ohho 83

I really like Gavin. He was tough, but kind. I loved the way he took care of Nicoli at the end of their session.

I'm glad he was hard on Ethan too. I'm really angry that Ethan's thoughtless actions have put Nicoli in so much danger. It was very selfish of him to do this for his own gains without thought to Nicoli's health.

I thought the "meatbag" sandwich in the beginning was too cute. Hmm...could that bode well for a 3-way with Andre, Ethan and Nicoli in the near future??? Please, please, please!!!!!

So you thought Nicoli topping Ethan was a good idea? I hope it's something you can write in to your premise! It would be awesome!

Aww your right stupid AFF cut of the chappie at the point where Nicoli waits for Eathen to return with the lube!!!!! Thats so not fair!!!! I absoloutly love the smutt!!!!! And Conrad is not going to kill Nicoli I think I start to love Conrad he can be so sweet!!!!!!!!!!! Now on tho the next chappie!!!!! It is absoloutly fantastic!!!!!!!!!! Garvin is so sweet!!!! I love him!!!!!!!!! And I love their lessons!!!!! I can't wait for the next lesson!!!!!! But it was not nice hurting them so much (I know it was necessary but still not nice!!!!) And I really want to know whats with his eye!!!! Mentioning it again and not explaining it is not fair!!!!!!! I really love this story and I need my next fix soon!!!!! I have gone through withdrawls since the last chappie!!!!! Espacially since I thought it to be a cliffy thanks to AFF!!!!!! I really want to see more!!! See you next chappie!!!!!!

I absolutely loved this chapter. I love all of them, of course, but this one is immensely sweet. Within a few sentences Gavin just became my favourite character. I wanted he and Nicoli to end up cuddling, as weird as that sounds. Aw, I am now mush XD

Gavin is so cool. He is like the chuck noris of vampires.

I . AM . SO . SORRY !!
Okay seriously get ready for the biggest spaz attack of reviewing, I have a lot of making up to do!! I'm back now though, Exams completely over, Holiday in america for three weeks also completely over. IM HERE SO ILL START REVIEWING AGAIN, IM SORRY!!
Okay sooo I start from chapter 35 I believe since 34 was the last I read, this could take a while, sorry!

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I think that Nicoli is freaking brave and crazy sweet, to risk being snuffed out by Conrad just to save his parents, that bit at the start really made me feel emotional haha. It was cute seeing Amelia and Nicoli having a friendship moment too, their personalities just fit together so well together and I can just tell they are guna be really close friends in this. hehe 'Why are you limping' trust Amelia to ask him that, I almost choked all over my laptop screen :). Ninja Nicoli, now I would pay to see that and I am actually in love with Andre! HE'S SO AWESOMELY AWESOME !! Sooo enlightening to FINALLY learn about Omen er ... Owen, it was really interesting. I can truthfully say that I really wasn't expecting Andre and him to have been in love. Thats really morbid ... tearing out an eye *shivers* but its really kinda sweet in a strange way, I LOVE ANDRE! I kinda hope that Owen and Him get to have a moment of understanding, I just hope that its before one of them gets killed :S. Owen/Omen is REALLLY growing on me, when he was being thrown around I started to get reaaaally angry!

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Conrad ... hmm I'm not sure what I'm thinking over this buster! I have a feeling of not liking him and yet ... I can kinda see where he is coming from. I guess something deep deep deep DEEEEEEP deep inside hes a good person, just a little rough around the edges/ has problems showing it. I actually found myself all watery eyed over Felix telling Ethan he wanted him to be happy. It was so sweet and un-seemingly-Felix-like I just wanted to grab his ghostly self and squeeze the undeadness out of him, HES SOOO ADORABLE!

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Ahh Gavin hehe, such a party pooper, I kinda like him too, the strong, dark, silent type hehe yumm, he kinda reminds me of one of the Queen's guards, I'd love to see his reaction if someone started pulling funny faces at him, he'd probably cock an eyebrow or something teeheehee! Cora is such a niice vampy (I so almost wrote person then :| ) I sense fun times, Gavin teaching Nicoli hehe, Another enlightening explaination about how they're all connected, it does help understand how they all react together. Goodness was that ever an exciting ending !!

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Once again Conrad ... maybe I'm going to reserve judgement on him, he's a funny lil er .. big powerful vampire. I still don't know what I think about his intentions buuuuuut he seems really interesting. FAITH IS SOO ADORABLE! haha I might as well just say all your characters are adorable, hahaha, I just couldn't imagine big scary Conrad getting conked on the nose by a doll hehe, I think I'd act like Faith too if I were trapped looking like a kid for the rest of time. Amelia is so spunky, I can just tell if she were real, she'd be totally cool to have on your side!

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Awww, I think I'm actually coming to love Felix Ethan moments! They actually make me feel all emotional and weepy, LOL! Go Nicoli stamp on those toes! Shoe Ethan not to mess with you, woooow creepy Ethan moment much .... O.O. Sleep!Andre AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW I wish I could be a fly on the wall, hahaha I'm a major Andre fan (as if you hadn't guessed :P ) That's really sad, Poor Nicoli he really did seem to guilty to drop Omen in it and poor Andre, its so sad!

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AWWWWWWWW, Nicoli is just too sweet, he always seems to try and make himself seem so tough but he really is just such a caring, lovely person. Ethan comforting him is really nice and not to mention cuuuute! I LOVE NICOLI seriously he is definately a close second after Andre *wink* hehe, mmm thats a new one horny Nicoli but strangely not unwelcomed. It really kinda fits for him I think, lol Porno Nic, thats interesting. Boy do I love your lemon writings! haha I feel like suuuuuch a pervert admitting that but its true! Ethan's so stubborn eheheh, Ahhh yes Andre would most definately be an iiinnnnteresting lover :)

ehehehe I JUST CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER :)
I'm so excited and I can review asap!

ps. IM SO SORRY IM LATE! I'm calm I promise I'm not freaking out or about to explode BUT SERIOUSLY SORRY!! I suck at this whole review thing but I'm trying I promise! Till next time :)

I probably have mentioned this a few times before but there are a few reasons why I like your story. One of them is the fact that it has a plot, a nice, detailed and thought out plot. But damn, sometimes it's good to read a good porn and you delivered that flawlessly ^__^=
Another 'good to see' thing was Conrad's decision. Well, up until I read your comment at the end of the chapter. Boy, do you know how to kill a high XD I started to remember Nicoli's 'mysteriousness', you know, the no-memories period, the strange aura, the pain, the parents' weird behavior... God only know what it all sums up to... May as well be uncontrolable outburst of ill-directed power.
Oh, why is Amelia's name making me cringe? That's because "amelia" is a medical term (latin) for "absence of limbs" (not sure if it applies to only inborn defects or to acquired as well, but still...). So, yeah. As for why I know stuff like this - my cousin is a med student and she shares such "useful" info with me sometimes :P
Oh, btw, this chapter proved once again that Nicoli, while foul-mouthed at times, is, in fact, a big softie. That's probably why Ethan can get away with so much s*it with him :P
On a side note: it's no longer hot here. Now I miss it. I take 30 degrees (Celcius) over pouring rains any day. And for the last couple of days I'm getting rained on on a daily basis. In fact I'm sitting at work right now (lol, slacking off a bit, but I have an excuse - can't do anything before I get some data, so I might as well use the time to write an overdue coment :P) with my jeans off. Yes, I took my pants off at work. I put on a gown, though (something similar to a doctor's gown) so I'm not flashing my co-workers ^^' But the pants were so wet I was shaking from cold :( I'm drying them by a heater at the moment.
OK, to end it on a more optimistic note - I really liked this chapter, not that it was a surprise :P
*smooches*

kashka

Ok, as a rule I hate vampire stories. Almost all of them are so stupidly cliche that it's not even worth it. But I saw this story on the main page, and decided, why not read a bit? Five hours later, I just made it to the last chapter, and I have this to say: Update this fucking story asap. This is probably the best take on a vampire story I've ever read. I love the way you portray the characters, they're not just names on paper, they're people with emotions and personallity. You are quite a talented author.

I really loved this chapter! You're right...slutty manipulative Nicoli is a love! I just think he's got the best personality of any of the bottom characters I've come across. He's definitely a controlling bottom...he's probably a versatile bottom as well! Hmm...now there's an idea...Ethan on the receiving end for a change. I love couples who switch up every now and then, they make things more interesting.

I'm glad Conrad gave in about killing Nicoli. Go Faith!!!! Now let's hope Nicoli doesn't do anything that could be misunderstood. Conrad was rather sweet in his discomfort in admitting he may have been rash in deciding Nicoli's fate after all. I thought Ethan was adorable as well when he got so excited that he hugged Conrad up off the ground and then kissed him all over his face...with a few extra mouth kisses thrown in for good measure! That boy is way too cute!

I read the last update as well and I thought I responded with my comments, but maybe I forgot or got distracted. Anyway, I wanted to say that the last chapter was awesome as well and that I thank you for adding the link to the emails. That has made things so much easier. I wish everyone here sent out email notices with links. Thank you for doing that for all of us! *hugs you*