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person womo
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ch13: i'm betting that zorro quote thing was from the Princess Bride. I think. i love that movie.

yup. amelia definitely sounds like she has witch connections. i hope it doesn't strain their relationship. great chapter, again!
person womo
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ch 15: whew. kinda figured nicoli was a closet bi. that explantion at the end secured in my pervert mind that ultimately he's going to get some man lovin' in the future. thanks!

person womo
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ch 16: i just realized that the majority of this chapter centered around their make-out session. you're awesome.
person womo
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ch 17: wow. nicoli, what is he exactly??? I love love LOVE the mystery!!! This aura thing is making me anxious. really really anxious. i kinda feel he's in danger and it makes me squirm in anticipation (thank goodness there are like 23 chapters left for me to read!!!). nicoli's eye, his missing memory, the dual auras, the fear of cemeteries....what does it all mean??? this chapter was really wonderful to read!
person womo
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ch 18: tailsman breaking. wonderful. omen reminds me of hagrid from hp for some reason, except for the personality. must be his bulkiness?
person womo
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ch 19: should've guessed from the title. nice action scenes!!! i enjoyed reading them.
person womo
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ch 20: omen. he needs to be turned into an omlette! what an annoying fucktard. doesn't he realized they could've finished him off if they wanted him off their trail? he's all brawn and no brain. geez. nice antagonist character there, he really annoys me. XD
person womo
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ch21: the eye again. gah! can't wait to see ethan's family!
person womo
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ch 22: aahhh..sweet fluffy ethanXnicoli smootching. cute.
person Audrik
schedule July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, Im so very glad I was able to brighten your day with my review. I've been looking at the site near every day to see if you've happened to update =) This really is the one vampire story I've read on here that's any good. I absoultly loved the Ethan/Gavin showdown in this chapter. "“Hey, you didn’t tell me I’d get dragged into this,” Ethan hissed." So perfectly Ethan. Its very easy to imgaine your charachters as real people (or vampires). I especially liked Gavin in this. Stern, but fair, distant but loving. He's just too cute.