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July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ch 23: we finally meet the vamp family!! interesting new cast. i couldn't help but think of that one scene in the twilight movie where the vamps meet the wolf people (sorry, I really really hate twilight), and it made me cringe. but still, i really enjoyed nicoli's reaction to the little girl. i hope ethan gets a good ass whoopin' for keeping nicoli in the dark to his family XD nice descriptions!
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July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ch 24: i loved how the characters got introduced!! new characters to squeal over is always a plus. hopefully they can vouch for nicoli if conrad ever gets around to snuffing his life out (i don't want nicoli to die!). awesome chapter!!!
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July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ch25: dimitri sounds like a delicious character. in fact, dimitri and nicoli are both names that fit one another nicely ;)
Nah just kidding. Nicoli and Ethan forever!!!!
i liked the sweet cutesy fluffiness of this chapter!
Nah just kidding. Nicoli and Ethan forever!!!!
i liked the sweet cutesy fluffiness of this chapter!
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July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ch 26: this chapter has me really excited. when nicoli sung that strange song again it really gave me the willies. just the way you described it from his mother's perspective made it seem so much more sinister and dangerous than i'd ever imagine. if this were a horror story i'd be hiding behind a pillow or something. wow!
and LOL at nicoli's reaction to ceclia(sp?)!!! that was cute.
and LOL at nicoli's reaction to ceclia(sp?)!!! that was cute.
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July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ch 27: the nicoli and amelia interaction was sweet to read about. can't wait to see what happens when the aunt steps in! i'm thinking she's the witch version of conrad. great chapter!
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July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ch 28: more info about nicoli's mysterious past...ooOooo....i just can't wait until we find out what it all means! gah. the suspense is killing my mind! and omen omen omen, you dickhead. get a life! get a girl! he really needs to stop obsessing over vampires. he has a really serious problem called stupidity.
that little girl was cute.
that little girl was cute.
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July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ch 29: poor nicoli. burned to a crisp. someone sooth his wounds!
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July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ch 30: in stories pertaining to vampires, only two things exist in flasks: 1) alcohol or 2) holy water. I bet they're testing to see if their son has turned dark!! that's just my guess though. but wow, laura needs to take a chill pill. well she doesn't actually , because her fear really makes me feel the gravity of nicoli's mysterious ailment. and ethan and nicoli! they need to get it on already!! *perverted mind* Lol. great chapter!
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July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey. i found your story thru someone's rec list. i finished ch 2 and i just wanted to say how well paced your writing is. i like the intro to nicol(?)'s not-so-humdrum little life.
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July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ch 3: this just gets jucier and jucier