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ch 40: did i already say that you write really good sex scenes?? coz you do.

one more chapter left!

ch 41: awww last chapter. i'm so glad it's not a cliff hanger (whew). for a moment there i saw a flash of gavin x nicoli pairing, and i thought that i didn't mind ;)

anyway, it was wonderful reading all 41 chapters (over several days!). i enjoyed it very much. you don't have to bother responding to all of them either (i've noticed that you respond to reviews chapter by chapter). that's just tooooo much work! how do you do it??? i hope that the review boost will attract more readers to this story. thank goodness i saw your fic on someone's rec list, or i would've missed it entirely. i love the characters and your talent with plot is so amazing! best plot i've read in a while! it intermixes so well, it's really well thought out. great story!

ch 31 (30?): WOW that was a really really really good cliffhanger. thank goodness there's a chapter 32 (31?) ahead. whew. wow. omen is such a cruel heartless bastard. i hope someone gets rid of him. the moron!

i hope amelia tears him a new one. she could do it splendidly...

ch 32: that confrontation with omen was awesome. and felix. awwww....how felix 'paled' when nicoli hugged him was cute. the fact that omen's name used to be owen is kinda cute too. if omen were real and i met him, i'd call him lame to his face. omen. owen. he's still a moron, even though he's got his reasons for being one (btw one of the captcha words for this review is "own"!). great chapter!

ch 33: stopped right before the sex! how could you!? j/k. that was an interesting scene. now, to get them to do this nine times a day...
just kidding!

ch 33: gah don't know if my review went through so i'm typing it again. that sex-cliff-hanger thing was cruel! j/k. interesting to see nicoli and ethan interact in the bedroom. sex sex sex! for some reason i'd thought that one of the main reasons ethan had stayed behind to 'comfort'
nicoli was to get some sort of sexual gratification from nicoli. and even though he didn't initiate it, boy is he getting it (or so we thing XD).

ch 34: 2/3rd of that chapter and more consisted of that one sex scene. awesome.

you really write those well.

ch 35: wow. we finally figure out who omen's temp boss is. is it the aunt or amelia's mother? i dunno. she sounds too calm-headed and not-angry-at-nicoli to sound like the aunt, but too harsh in her methods of hiring omen (to kill vamps and what not) to be ceclie. eeeehhh...we'll see. i only have 6 more chapters left to get caught up *tears* I wish there were more.

great chapter!

ch 36: aww ethan and felix. though, it's good felix is a ghost otherwise ethan probably never would've fallen for nicoli. i know it's a bad thing to say, but damn. ethan and nicoli ftw!!

ch 37: a history lesson and more! cora's dialogue did seem a bit heavy at times (it was almost like reading a fictional version of wikipedia? ya know what i mean?), but the information was still interesting. anyway, woo! i wonder how long it'll take them to pin the witch-i-ness of it all down to the fairbrooke family. XD