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*Glomps* Goodness you update so quickly!! I'm always like I'll check in a few days and then I find I've missed reviewing a chapter :( IM SORRY!!! Lol but I won't go on, I haaaave a lot to say review wise :) and I live in Englandd .. YAAAAAAAAAAAY :)
Ok soo lets get down to business :)
41 - I think this has be one of my favourite chapters, not quite suure why but I seriously love it! I totally agree with Ethan, being normal is SOOOOO overrated I was reading this chapter in the living room and seriously I swear as soon as I read Andre's name I apparently started smiling, my friend was just like 'why are you smiling like a lovesick puppy' wooow I've got it bad for your character ;) HE'S JUST SO AMAZING! He's so understanding and awesome and GAHHHHH!! Gotta love group hugs though :) I actually never EVER get tired of hearing 'Meatbag' it cracks me up EVERY single time no matter what mood I happen to be in.
hahaha I know Nicoli's pain I'm always walking into doors too, hmmmm, Gavin just has this silent sexiness about him, silent, secretly sweet, sexy and down right scary .... yumm I'd sign up for his fanclub ANYDAY!
Hahah Ethan getting his butt handed to him, add supremely strong to Gavin's list of awesomeness, the lesson itself is so freaking awesome, SERIOUSLY I think I screamed at anyone who interupted me while I was reading it, It is really interesting the way you wrote about the mental shields and everything, I really thought it was cool and seeing Ethan get whacked round the head by Gavin was just funny, its always funny to watch someone take eggs out of Ethan's ego basket.
Without sounding like a complete psycho I found it really fasinating to read about Nicoli's freak out that part just really stands out for me, when I first read it I went straight back and read it again. Also the tender Gavin, Nicoli bit. SOOO FREAKING CUUUUUTE!!! I think I almost had another seizure, I definately agree with Andre he is a big softie and I thought it was even more cute that he tried to hide it.

ALLLRIGHT
42- one word ... CREEEEEEEEEEPY well only the begining, I was like O.O WHHATPOEGKJO\APWHATEPOHN WHATS HAPPENING, but I've been singing that cock robin nursery rhyme like ALLL the time now *gives the evil eye* haha I'm joking, if I had a nightmare like that I swear I'd never shut my eyes again *shivers* that was freaking creepy!
THE EYYYYYYYYYYYYYE THE EYYYYYYYE FINALLY, I KNEW IT WOULD BE SLIPPED IN SOMEWHERE, I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR IT!!
and that gap in the memories MWAHAHA I was so proud I remembered all that stuff so I didn't have to go back and reread, I LOVE THIS STORY SOO FREAKING MUCH *starry eyes*
Meanie *another evil eye* you answer the billion pound question AND THEN ADD A MILLION OTHER QUESTIONS! Seriously I'm spazzing right now!! I'm so excited and WHFBA\JG\RNRGBN I can't even explain I almost wish this will NEVER EVRER EVERERERERERERE end! Haha wooow but at the same time I just know the ending will be explosive!
YOU'RE AMAZINGGG!

ch 42:

the one who i saw the rec from was Marssel

hohoho

she has a pretty cool story going on herself.

awesome 'dream'. i wonder what things the evil thing was doing to him while he was in his coma...thing. XD

:D

the mystery gets darker!

Ohhh, a look into the past, eh? Yet another wonderful chapter. I love this, it clears up some of the mystery, yet seems to open even more. I would sign up for the mailing list, but unfortuantly I never check my email, whilst I'm on here almost every day =) I can't wait to find out who the bad-guy-from-the-past is.. and see how they open that book.. and everything else =)

That was so sweet at the end when Ethan was chasing Nicoli! I had a big goofy grin on my face as I was reading it!

I was wondering...can't Ethan use the mind-link to see Nicoli's dream? I don't think Nicoli was in a coma either. I do wonder why there is a blank spot in his memories though. I know all of this has something to do with why Nicoli's mom keeps freaking out and his eye pain.

Is there some kind of demon living in his eye? Maybe it's been bound and the eye pain is it's attempts to escape? Hmmm...or I could just be nuts! LOL!!!!

I love the way you take the time to answer everyone at the beginning of each chapter. Thanks for doing that! /hug

Okay it's 5:40 AM so this probably isn't going to be the most eloquent comment forgive me lol.
That dream freaked me out, like seriously freaked me out. Hah hah I haven't been so freaked reading something in a long time so after getting through it I was like "Wtf" but it was seriously creepy as hell! I can't wait to learn more about it and what happened to Nicoli.
The moments between Nic and Ethan are cute ^^ They're like an old married couple I swear fighting and bickering but occasionally letting something sweet happen.

(by the way- You can call me whatever you want XD Zel or Kayn either is fine I'll know who you're talking too lol) (And another note: I fully approve of an AU between Nicoli and Gavin hah)

I would just like to say that I am in love with you. You are the ONLY author on my recs list with a well-written story that has a good, riveting plot line and most important of all UPDATES REGULARLY. I am so proud. I love your story and I'm ashamed that I haven't reviewed it before. To make up for this, I shall leave one hundred reviews for every new chapter. Well, perhaps not that many... XD

ok...great chapter of course...it did answer some questions, although since nicoli's memories can't really be counted as "true memories" then i guess nothing was answered. so did we get fake answers, since these memories are how nicoli remembers them. and the dream...now that just opened up a whole new ray of questions. ok so i think i just confused myself...anywho i finally see some of the dots now just waiting to connect them and see other ones. i feel like i'm speaking in metaphors...lol...well i am really enjoying figuring this out along with nicoli and the rest of the characters. can't wait for the next update!

Wow that chappie was really interesting!!!! I'm gusseing that the mysterious man form his dream is the cause of his eye pain and of the gap in his memorys and of the coma!!!! But who is he???? Probably the evil which has toucht him and tainted his aura and probably also the reason why his parents behave so strange!!!!!! I can't wait for this issu to be reveiled!!!!! Thank you for the beginning of an explanation of his eye!!!! See you next time!!!!

ch 38: faith is pretty cute. her interaction with her dolls was adorable!
only 3 chapters left *sobs*

ch 39: so we're getting closer! and nicoli's going to get some mental training! i hope it reveals more to us about his missing memories. that would be awesome. and conrad. he's such a dickhead. you'd think 'cuz he's so old he'd have a little common sense about feelings. he needs a good wifey.

anyway, 2 chapters left before i get caught up! woo!! great chapter, again!