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August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You must update as soon as possible! I can't wait to see what happens when Seth and Dimitri meet Nicoli face to face! And quick question, now this is a bit out there but, is it possible for Felix to posses someone? if so maybe Nicoli will be willing to have a ghostly menage a tros.
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August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this chapter rocked! i was excited to read about your vampires and how they are made...and the nice little bonus conversation with conrad and gavin was icing on the cake.
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August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Hope that this story is updated soon..
I'm anxious to see what happens!!!
It's torture to know that there will be many many chapters to come before my questions are answered, but ..
ToT
I hope that they come fastly!
I'm anxious to see what happens!!!
It's torture to know that there will be many many chapters to come before my questions are answered, but ..
ToT
I hope that they come fastly!
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August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
interesting chapter. can't wait to see how this new vampire is going to screw with the family! and i wonder how the witches are going to take it all.
and gavin. he is such a mystery, i bet, because he wants to be mysterious. a mysterious man. what am i saying? ok. can't wait to see what rolls into their lives next!
and gavin. he is such a mystery, i bet, because he wants to be mysterious. a mysterious man. what am i saying? ok. can't wait to see what rolls into their lives next!
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August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Le-gasp!! I’ve missed so many chapter! xS I knew I was missing out on something. The story is progressing splendidly. Gavin is a big softy, I finnaly get to know a little about Nicoli’s past (I’ve been and still am dying to find out more) and now the relatives are coming. Yay *throwing confetti* This is awesome, you are awesome. Huggies and lickies!
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August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
I knew Gavin left for something important because of the widening of his eyes just before.
I thought he left because Conrad was calling him though, I didn't even consider that something in the paper had upset him.
I like the spin you put on making a new vamp with the DNA being injected through their fangs. That's not something I've ever heard before. Bravo! That was well thought out.
Nicoli was very adamant that he didn't want to be a vamp, but I wonder what Ethan would do if he was mortally injured? Ethan obviously loves him deeply even though he tries to hide it, so would he turn Nicoli because his love won't allow him to sit back and watch the boy die? Or would he let him die and suffer losing his love? Come to think of it, Gavin seems to care a great deal about Nicoli as well...would HE let him die or turn him?
What do you think about that?
I'm very curious to learn more about Seth. I hope he turns out to be a misunderstood guy instead of a bad guy!
Please post the next chapter quickly! I can't wait to know what happens next...oh and some more Ethan/Nicoli sex would be great too. Maybe Nicoli will top this time? Huh...huh???? Hint! Hint! HeHe...
I knew Gavin left for something important because of the widening of his eyes just before.
I thought he left because Conrad was calling him though, I didn't even consider that something in the paper had upset him.
I like the spin you put on making a new vamp with the DNA being injected through their fangs. That's not something I've ever heard before. Bravo! That was well thought out.
Nicoli was very adamant that he didn't want to be a vamp, but I wonder what Ethan would do if he was mortally injured? Ethan obviously loves him deeply even though he tries to hide it, so would he turn Nicoli because his love won't allow him to sit back and watch the boy die? Or would he let him die and suffer losing his love? Come to think of it, Gavin seems to care a great deal about Nicoli as well...would HE let him die or turn him?
What do you think about that?
I'm very curious to learn more about Seth. I hope he turns out to be a misunderstood guy instead of a bad guy!
Please post the next chapter quickly! I can't wait to know what happens next...oh and some more Ethan/Nicoli sex would be great too. Maybe Nicoli will top this time? Huh...huh???? Hint! Hint! HeHe...
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August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
To chapter 40: The lesson was great! I thought so that Ethan would turn out to be a slacker when it comes to studying. XD He looks like the type. ;) I really enjoyed the part when he realized that Nicoli could die if something goes wrong. That was great! And Andre and Ethan gluing themselves to Nicoli was great too! Will you write a threesome in the future? I’m still getting used to threesomes, but AndrexNicolixEthan is something I’ll happily imagine and would read gladly. ;) And Gavin’s just fantastic! Strict when needed and caring and loving when there’s an opportunity to loosen up. :) I just like him more and more. Nicoli was so eager to study and Gavin was so pleased with the lesson. That was great! I like the way the barrier were made and strengthened, the way they practiced. It was all so entertaining and fun to read. Well, the whole story is fun to read. ;)
About the visualization. Some time ago I was interested in magic and I read that visualization is a way to perform magic or make changes in you surroundings. You need to “see it in your mind” before you can do it in reality, so the way you wrote it is just perfect. Magic is all about will and visualizing something is also about will and imagination.
To chapter 41: The dream was so… I was scared for Nicoli. Now I’m waiting for that monster to come to the town Nicoli is now and cause trouble. I have a theory, I don’t know if it’s true, but this is what I think: Before Nicoli was practically raised by his grandmother, his parents didn’t have time for him and when she dies Nicoli though that he didn’t have anybody who loved him and cared for him anymore (he was very depressed right?). His friends were in love with each other and didn’t need him too. Was that way that monster possessed him? And now the vampires ‘use’ Nicoli for their purposes. Parents even if love Nicoli now and care for him- that can be easily overthrown because before they didn’t care (or so it seemed, if I’m right here, that is), friends are a couple and don’t need Nicoli either. I wonder if I’m right, if only a little bit. ;) I still didn’t figure out the connection between Nicoli’s eye and the monster, but I’ll wait and read what you have to say about it. :) Coma… riiiight… Good excuse. I’m curious what Nicoli did then. He was influenced by that monster right? And he doesn’t remember anything. Poor Nicoli. Or lucky Nicoli. I don’t think there would be a gap when Nicoli was in a coma. Coma is a state when we sleep, right? Ethan would see all the other occasions when Nicoli slept if that was the case, like every night? Am I right? Hmm… I’m wondering when vampire blood will be not enough for Nicoli’s eye. That monster has a cure or is his presence helping with the pain? I’m very curious and can’t wait for you to continue this story line.
To chapter 42: Faith will have a Nicoli doll to play with? *grins* That’s so nice! *grins more* Is this a self-fulfilling prophecy? Faith made a Nicoli-doll, Nicoli becomes a member of their family. Not the normal way to go, it should be reversed, right? But possible, right? The idea with the Blood Rage is great too! And the DNA transfer, too! It makes sense when you look at Ethan and Faith calling Conrad their Father. You provided me with new information’s that I can use when imagining Nicoli becoming Gavin’s fledgling. XD And I wonder how long was Gavin in the Blood Rage or if he was in it at all… It’s just a thought. The explanation how the vampires communicate was great too. Why do I feel like I will highly dislike that Seth figure? You made the whole story more complicated with the last part of this chapter, but I have not enough information to play “Sherlock Holmes”, although the real Sherlock would know already even with so little informations. ;) Knowing Nicoli and his luck meeting strange and dangerous people, he will be the one to run into that vampire… Well, I’ll wait and see if I’m right. ;)
Thanks for writing these wonderful chapters! And one more thing. Recently I watched a movie “Hocus Pocus” I don’t know if you know it, but the beginning is similar to your stories beginning. There is a boy who doesn’t believe in witches and he moves into town which history has some evil witches and he end’s up fighting them when he ‘accidentally’ revives them. I don’t know if you watched it, but when I watched it recently, your story came to mind. :)
Sorry about all the questions and the long review. You don’t need to answer the questions. It’s just that I feel better when I write them and send them as a comment. I don’t really like knowing something beforehand, but I like speculating and then finding out if I was right or wrong.
About the visualization. Some time ago I was interested in magic and I read that visualization is a way to perform magic or make changes in you surroundings. You need to “see it in your mind” before you can do it in reality, so the way you wrote it is just perfect. Magic is all about will and visualizing something is also about will and imagination.
To chapter 41: The dream was so… I was scared for Nicoli. Now I’m waiting for that monster to come to the town Nicoli is now and cause trouble. I have a theory, I don’t know if it’s true, but this is what I think: Before Nicoli was practically raised by his grandmother, his parents didn’t have time for him and when she dies Nicoli though that he didn’t have anybody who loved him and cared for him anymore (he was very depressed right?). His friends were in love with each other and didn’t need him too. Was that way that monster possessed him? And now the vampires ‘use’ Nicoli for their purposes. Parents even if love Nicoli now and care for him- that can be easily overthrown because before they didn’t care (or so it seemed, if I’m right here, that is), friends are a couple and don’t need Nicoli either. I wonder if I’m right, if only a little bit. ;) I still didn’t figure out the connection between Nicoli’s eye and the monster, but I’ll wait and read what you have to say about it. :) Coma… riiiight… Good excuse. I’m curious what Nicoli did then. He was influenced by that monster right? And he doesn’t remember anything. Poor Nicoli. Or lucky Nicoli. I don’t think there would be a gap when Nicoli was in a coma. Coma is a state when we sleep, right? Ethan would see all the other occasions when Nicoli slept if that was the case, like every night? Am I right? Hmm… I’m wondering when vampire blood will be not enough for Nicoli’s eye. That monster has a cure or is his presence helping with the pain? I’m very curious and can’t wait for you to continue this story line.
To chapter 42: Faith will have a Nicoli doll to play with? *grins* That’s so nice! *grins more* Is this a self-fulfilling prophecy? Faith made a Nicoli-doll, Nicoli becomes a member of their family. Not the normal way to go, it should be reversed, right? But possible, right? The idea with the Blood Rage is great too! And the DNA transfer, too! It makes sense when you look at Ethan and Faith calling Conrad their Father. You provided me with new information’s that I can use when imagining Nicoli becoming Gavin’s fledgling. XD And I wonder how long was Gavin in the Blood Rage or if he was in it at all… It’s just a thought. The explanation how the vampires communicate was great too. Why do I feel like I will highly dislike that Seth figure? You made the whole story more complicated with the last part of this chapter, but I have not enough information to play “Sherlock Holmes”, although the real Sherlock would know already even with so little informations. ;) Knowing Nicoli and his luck meeting strange and dangerous people, he will be the one to run into that vampire… Well, I’ll wait and see if I’m right. ;)
Thanks for writing these wonderful chapters! And one more thing. Recently I watched a movie “Hocus Pocus” I don’t know if you know it, but the beginning is similar to your stories beginning. There is a boy who doesn’t believe in witches and he moves into town which history has some evil witches and he end’s up fighting them when he ‘accidentally’ revives them. I don’t know if you watched it, but when I watched it recently, your story came to mind. :)
Sorry about all the questions and the long review. You don’t need to answer the questions. It’s just that I feel better when I write them and send them as a comment. I don’t really like knowing something beforehand, but I like speculating and then finding out if I was right or wrong.
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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was absoloutly wonderful!!!!! I really liked this chappie!!!!! This bood rage thing sounds really bad!!!! I kind of figured that they would get problems when Gavin suddenly left!!! I really hope they will not be found!!!! And I hope that Nicoli does not do something stupid like pointing Gavins strange behavior out to Eathen or something!!!!! I really want more!!!!! See you next time!!!!
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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! Poor guys, now there under even more stress. As if trying to strengthen the mind thingy and open the book wasn't enough, now Dimitri's looking for them? Guh, I can't stop reading this story. Its awesome that you put up the new chapter before I had to leave for my vacation. ^^ MayyybbeeeI'll be treated to another chapter when I get back? Pretty please? lol.
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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol, oops I accidentally said 'fifth' book instead of 'fourth'. Sorry, it's been FOREVER since I've read that. At least a year :) Anyway, I also wanted to know if I could have a better description of Ethan as well, just incase I decide to do fanart of him too, or both together. Or if I have trouble getting Nicoli down, then I'll do him instead.
Okay, that's all, sorry again! I'm stupid :p
Okay, that's all, sorry again! I'm stupid :p