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hi!

nice to hear that your relatives got out all right. going into the mountains is so dangerous.

anyway, yay! new characters! for some reason dimitri reminds me of lord voldemort - maybe that's just because i've been reading too much hp fanfiction, but anyway, evil beware!!! and i wonder how nicoli's boogeyman will play into the story. won't he protect nicoli so he can corrupt him all to himself? or not. XD

i enjoyed reading the chapter! have a nice day!

I've been reading this story for the last two days straight, I am so hooked right now it's not even funny. W hen I reached the end of this chapter I actually yelled no, luckily the house is empty and I didn't procure any strange looks. I love Nicoli, and I think Ethan is amusing. I'm curious about the dream Nicoli had and what that might mean...very curious. I can't wait for the next chapter, I may die of depression if it takes too long.

Wow, I have just spent the last couple of days reading Moonlight Denial, Brilliant chickie, absolutely brilliant. Hehe I think I'm in love. Can I take your brain out on a date? ... ok so that was a horrifying image *shudder*. Rewind, try again.

I loved it and am so excited to read more. Dimitri facinates me, Hmmm I wonder if Dimitri is actually just misunderstood, as no-one actually knows what went on with Issac, Stephen and Aria for sure, all they know is that they died. No witnesses, no proof that Dimitri actually did the deed, or if he did was it on purpose or was it an accident or was he forced to kill them? hmmmmmmmmmm interesting, I did catch that Seth called Aria and Stephen 'traitors that you had put down' to Dimitri, does this mean traitors to Dimitri for siding with Issac? or does it mean that Aria and Stephen were doing something that could be 'traitorous' to all of vampire kind? LOL such a complex situation. Also, Dimitri did withdraw to make his own clan rather than continue the in-house fighting when Dimitri and Issac argued about how the clan was run and afterwards there was peace. LOL me thinks I just want to see the good in everybody. Im such a softie! *rolleyes*

The character that I absolutely adore is Andre, LOL hes just such a suave, naughty, nice vamp *looks sideways at sentence* does that make any sense at all??? LOL. He's such a adorable flirt yet really cares about everyone, it was so heartwrenching to see him so upset about the whole Omen/Owen thing *cries* seriously i nearly did. On a lighter note that kiss between Andre and Nicoli!! Omg *melts* It actually surprised me that Nicoli was overwhelmed so quickly... well i guess it shouldnt hes been suggesting for a while that he wouldnt mind a bit of Andre.

Just so you know im such a vampire novel fiend, I would ingest them if i could (no seriously *looks serious*) and this one is really good! My favs being Laurell K Hamlton and Sherrilyn Kenyon of course. I have no idea how many different vampire novels I've read but your Blood Rage spin was great, there has been suggestions in other novels about how when vamp's are first turned they get a bit out of control but your Blood Rage takes it too another level. Also the DNA substance injection is not one ive come across yet. They are fan-freakin-tastic, I love it.

Ok ok I will shut up now. *sigh* I swear I'm sometimes uncontrolable. Can't wait for the next chapters!!!! (lulz gotta love those exclamation marks) Anywayz just one question: how long do you think this is going to be? You've probably been asked this before but because I just started the story i kinda skipped the intros.. lol I was too eager to get to the next chapter.

Well TTFN, you will probably see more of me in the future. *kiss kiss*

Now I’m curious about Faith’s past life. Well, you write this story in such a way that make me curious about nearly everything. Keep going! XD
Poor, poor Felix. He changed so much. Too bad there isn’t a way to make him happy. Hm… Actually, I was wondering. How come Felix remind in this realm? Was is something like unfinished business? Was Ethan his unfinished business? He didn’t want to leave him alone? Normally when you die you don’t come back as a ghost. Felix did. Why? How come? Ehehe... You don't have to answer. I just like ask questions. XD
Andre is a mystery to me. I want him to ravish Nicoli with all his might! But I don’t know if he would really do it. Would he? Would? *puppy eyes* He doesn’t know about Nicoli’s FLS, right? What would he do when he finds out about that? XD Hehe. Next stop for my imagination is Nicoli with Andre. XD Too bad the chances of a threesome is slim, but I still can wish (and imagine), right? ;) One more thing about that. I think that Andre would be more pushy than Ethan in bed, right? With Ethan Nicoli has the upper hand, but I don’t think he would have that with Andre, judging from his reaction to Andre’s kiss… Nicoli would be totally dominated. XD
Nicoli will be in trouble again soon, right? Dimitri wants to meet him? That’ll be bad. Well, everything that comes from Conrad’s brother will be bad. I’ll wait and see what that monster has planned. A really bad thought crossed my mind when I imagined Nicoli’s encounter with Dimitri. Is Conrad’s family strong enough to help Nicoli if Dimitri or Seth got him? Will they he fast enough? I was wondering and this crossed my mind: Nicoli being rescued from the bad vampires clutches by that thing that possessed him in the past. That would be just something for that monster to feed Nicoli with. “Nobody wanted to save you. Nobody cares about you, but me. And so on, and so on.”

I don’t know whose that Sue character so I can’t appreciate the test. XD Sorry.
And it’s a good thing for Nicoli that his parents weren’t neglectful. ;) *sigh* I’m rather a poor Sherlock Holmes, but I’m trying! XD It’s very hard to write something that someone haven’t thought of yet. Your story and Hocus Pocus starts similar, but your went in a totally different direction. The Blood Rage is also something new to me. I haven’t seen anything like that anywhere else so congratulation! I’m really enjoying your story. ;)

Hmmm....but still no anwer to the biggest question: Why did Dimitri kill Isaak in the first place? Or have him killed? And why was Isaak already sure he was not going to return? There must be a reason...and we'll probably get it in the next chapters! *g*

And Ethan and Felix, so sweet and sad...going by Felix's bio on your deviantart page, he died just 9 years ago. No wonder Conrad reacts the way he does to Nicoli, he sees history repeating itself...

Luckily there was something to laugh about in this chapter...Andre had me in stitches when taking 'advantage' of Nicoli!

ps: just where do these antispam words come from to prove I am human? I now have 'abattoir' and 'deaths' Blegh!

You're such a tease T___T I'm glad you had a good time and that your family is alright.
AUGH MAN, I was like all wide eyed and eager to read more the entire time and augh. TEASE XD
Fucking fantastic as always Darkness, I can't wait for the next chapter.

That was a great chapter hon. We learned so much! Those tight lipped vamps got a little loose lipped today! YAY!!!

I had started to think that maybe the things that were done in Dimitri's name were done without his knowledge because of Nicoli saying that it was strange that he would kill Isaac because they were supposedly cool with each other. Dimitri's conversation with Seth blew that theory away though! *sigh* I keep trying to give the bad guys excuses so they turn out not to be bad. *shakes head* I'm hopeless.

That kiss with Andre was hot! *runs to take a cold shower* I think more than just feeling sorry for Felix being dead was going on. That may have been the case upstairs when Nicoli was talking to Faith, but when he was witnessing that intimate moment between Ethan and Felix it was plain old jealousy that was rearing it's ugly head. I would have been jealous too though. Both Ethan and Nicoli need to be honest with themselves and each other that this is NOT just a fling.

Thanks for the chapter and the notification!*hug* I hope the next one will be up soon, I'm very curious to see what happens.

This chappie was great thank you!!!!!! Now we really get to know quite some background stuff!!!! I really want to know what happend to felix and what andre meant when he said that nicoli didn't understand everything!!!! The kiss was by the way really hot!!! I want more!!!! Please update soon!!!! See you!!!!

I was happy when I saw that you updated. this time it was by notification. And don't worry, I completely understand about when you had sent it out. I actually assumed that you had sent it out the day you updated, but it just took a day for everyone to get. Sometimes emails do take awhile to receive... But I had just wanted to make sure, just incase that I wasn't on the notif. thing :)

Anyway, great chapter, again. I was a little saddened? by the scene Nicoli walked in on. We all know that Felix and Ethan have/had something going on just by what we've seen before, but this is the first time that Nicoli has really seen it. I think. The way he felt, I think, wasn't sympathy for them not being able to really be together, but of the fact that Nicoli has developed feelings for Ethan. Which brings me to a question that I hope *begs, begs!* you can answer. Are you leaning more toward a threesome type of relationship, or just something similar? Or perhaps not that at all? Cuz I know you've sort of thrown in this love triangle thing, and sometimes authors tend to leave those things solved by all parties ending up together. I honestly think if that does happen then Felix and Nicoli will seriously need some work on getting there, since they tend to fight and everything easily. But I don't know. I'd feel bad if Ethan and Nicoli ended up together in the end, but Felix was left high and dry without anyone. So far, the only person you've shown that Felix has been really close to was Ethan. So now I'm worried. I like Felix, I like Nicoli, and I like Ethan. I want them happy!! You know? I guess the only other thing I can think of to where they could all be close and together, would be if Nicoli was turned into a vampire by Ethan. But I honestly don't think that's where you're going.

Okay, I'm rambling. I'm just worried by what's going to happen with whom, and this chapter has brought those worries to the forefront. Now, onto other parts of the chapter. Seth seems EVIL. And kind of hot. Which isn't really weird for me since I tend to love villains, lol. Though I'm a lot more curious about Seth and Demitri. They seem like two really interesting people to read about, and I can't wait (and hope) we get a lot more scenes of them. The ending of this chapter has left us with some hint of something bad going down, and I'm not gonna lie. I'm impatiently waiting for that!! ;)

Anyway, its okay that you can't answer the theory questions I asked. I understand. I know I'm more leaning toward cold, but it does make it all the better to find out later on whether or not I'm right or wrong. I just get impatient easily (one of the main reasons why I don't put a book down until I reach the end) so it makes it harder to not jump to conclusions and wish/hope for answers soon, soon, and soon ;) lol. And about the fanart? I looked at the bio and everything. I can't promise that I'll draw the characters exactly like you picture them, they'll probably come out more toward what I've pictured them as, but still similar to yours. Cuz before I even saw fanart and the bio stuff, I pictured Ethan very similar to what was drawn/described. Nicoli was a little different though, but still similar in a way. I'll try and draw something up soon, but my schedule has been very chaotic so it might be quite awhile before I do. All I know is, I want to draw something ;)

Anywho, sorry for such a long review, I ramble crazily, and I guess I did it this time lol. Can't wait for the next chapter!!

first off the flavor of the convo icing is definitely cinnamon. absolutely love the chapter. i'm so interested in finding out more about felix and ethan's relationship, as well as the other characters. things are definitely getting tense and more information is coming to the surface...keep it coming!