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My computer decided to be an ass, so I wasn't able to get online for awhile... But It's not all bad, since I got two new chapters at once ^^ I love Nicoli's mom, she seems so real... And of course, Amelia had the perrrfeect chance to tell Nicoli about being a witch, and she let it go! But yet she expects Nicoli to confide in her... I can't wait to read more of this, and find out about Nicoli's past and what happened.. and if they're ever going to open that stupid book! Update soon, pleeeassee =)

loved it! missed amelia so i was happy she made an appearance in this chapter...i don't think she buys nic's story. she believes it for the most part but i think she kinda knows he might not be telling her the whole truth. but she seems to leave it alone for right now. i was kinda surprised nic admitted to sleeping with ethan to her. oh these two are such good friends, i love it when they are together. hopefully neither will end up with colds...but who knows after all they were playing in the mud and rain for a bit, nic a lot longer then amelia. maybe if he gets sick, ethan can come and be his sexy nurse...hint hint...just kidding. ;) or am i...lol.

Nope, no panty shots: "Nicoli blinked open his eyes and was met with a deep red canopy of an umbrella, and leaning over him was a girl with hair just as red dressed in a sleek dark green rain coat with matching leggings underneath a black skirt." lol You're right, it is in Yami no Matsui... but it really depends on where the devils/demons originate, though, how they mark/contract a human. Western devils like the irony of the human seeing there sin, even while their eyes are closed, if they do mark on the body it's for easy access to their mind or for easy possesion. European and Central demons and devils accept a sacrafice of anything of the humans choosing, so long as it is the proper price. And Eastern demons mark on visible flesh so the they can recognize the human soul when they reincarnate (either to exact revenge or pay them back for their kindness). That was a very relaxing chapter to read, and rose no new questions. *thanks all that is holy* Oh, and I forgot to say last time: Porno Nicholi~! *spontanious conbustion*

Oh man, have I missed Amelia. You had me giggling throughout their mud-play. Lol. It was very funny :3 I also think Nicoli is little dense. With knowing that vampires and werewolves and ghosts exists, one could think he would get a liiittle more suspicious when Amelia talks with a sparkle and than the dog turns up where she said it would, by the fairy rings. I can kind of picture him putting his hands to his ears, singing loudly, just so he won't have to find out even MORE magical creatures exist. The poor guy. His life used to be so normal, laugh.
If I keep wishing for a happily ever after with Andre and Omen, will you give it to me *please please please*? Not that I'm pushing or anything *please please please*. I would never do that *pretty please*. You know, I am kind of pondering Ander's feelings. I know he still feels guilt about Omen, and that he has some bitter sweet memories. But is he still in love with the man? I just can't tell what he's feeling xS It's driving me crazy. Omen still feels something beyond all that hatred one could tell from the chapter when the two met. But what weighs more? Isn't it proof that Ander didn't just use him that he gave Omen his eye? What does Omen really think? Man, lol, those two are driving ME crazy x3

This was great!!! Finally we see Amelia again!!! That was quite necessary afer all the vampire thing!!! Not that I don't love my vamps!!!! Cause I do *cuddels them all close*!!!!! But a bit wiching houre in betweet is quite a nice change!!!!! Thank you so much!!! Hope to hear something about the skeletons in their closet and the eye soon!!!!! See you!!!!

That was such a funny chapter! I laughed out loud when I was reading about Nicoli and Beethoven playing in the yard before Amelia showed up.

Speaking of which...what an awesome girl Amelia is, not only can she wrestle in the mud with the best of them and not bitch about getting dirty, but she can also threaten to put her best friend's lover six feet under with a serious straight face! I love it!

Nicoli, Nicoli, Nicoli, everyone knows the best lies are mixed with the truth! It took you long enough to figure it out boy! LOL!

Thanks for the great chapter! *hugs you*

How dare you make me feel... feel... PITY for Conrad! *Gag* I still don't like him though *huff* I've got a feeling that pity wasn't the only thing Nicholi was feeling, maybe a little guilt lingering from the dream he doesn't remember. Oh, and that was sooo uber creepy Congrats~! XD I can so picture the eerie black figure tormenting Nicholi. Using your blood for ink is kind of creepy though (in regards to Dimitri). But it's a cheap source I suppose. Ah, so then you already know that most higher level devils prefer to make contracts on one of the eyes of thier prey? How can you make it so that I can't grab any more info from the answers!? How?! T-T Sorry for not reviewing for a long time, I got distraced with all the Cosplaying, Request Arts, and Family Vacations/Parties.

Oooh, I like Faith so much. I always think about Interview with the vampire when I read about her and I compare her to the very big difference of the little vampire girl in that story. Claudia is all sadness and frustration and coldness. Faith seems to have found happiness with her life, what she is and her family. I am very curious as to why she was made.
And Andre is very hot. He he he he *evil chuckle*. I must say I highly enjoyed the kissing scene. <3 I still hope high and low that he and Owen will find their way back to each other D': I am still a bit confused about those two. I know that Andre feel a whole lot about Owen, a lot of that being guilt. But is he still in love with Owen, or is it all just regret and bittersweet memories? Argh, I want my happily ever after to include them xS
And I did the test you mentioned :3 None of my characters were too Mary-Sue. But that would probably be difficult since Mary-Sues make me puke. But then I started agonising about falling into the trap of making all my characters the same. I mean, if I have two different character-types and then have those two in every story, that would be just as bad as Mary-Sue D: Like some form of Avernion-Sue Hmmm >-> I hope I'm just overreacting. I do that you know.

Hmm, that's weird... It didn't swallow the ending of me review, but things in the middle. It swallowed like half of everything I said... What stands now doesn't make any sence at all... *Grumble grubmle grumble*
Short version. Like Faith. Ander hot. Should get a happy ending with Owen. Took the test you mentiond. It was fun. :3 Ahhhh, a very short version...

Andre/Nicoli, Rawr!!!!!!!!!! PS. I had that Cock Robin poem in my head for simply AGES thanks to you :P Nicoli/Andre!!!!! More! More!