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Ok. Wow... You just made a really good day get a whole lot better. First off, Poor Nicoli! How could you do that to him! And having Omen come from nowhere and (hopefully) save him? So the evil Van Helsing dude has a heart after all?
Ira being killed by Faith, thats so freaking sad... I love how Faith tried to avoid the fight till the end, until she had no choice but to fight back.
And oddly enough, Dimitris death is kinda sad... I want to know if hes telling the truth! Did he kill Issac or no? And how did Ethan betray Evan? Grrrr. I want to know! This story is absoultly addicting, I can't wait until you post more

This was a very intense chapter, but not nearly long enough to suit me! I want to know what happens to Nicoli and I want to see the entire clan's reaction to his injury. Is he so far gone that they will have to make him a vampire too?

YAY! Omen did good! I KNEW there was good in him! I'm so happy that he was there to help Nicoli! ^^

Another chapter needs to be posted ASAP...like yesterday! LOL!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! Not Nicoli! You can't have him. Stubborn, silly boy why'd you have to go beat him in the head with a pipe. That was just wrong. On so so so many levels. *sniff* You update soon, k. Like now. *taps foot* I don't see an update. PLEASE. I'm willing to beg, to bribe, to do one nefarious deed of your choosing absolutely free. Just let me know what happens. I'm waiting.

As the old saying goes, the battle may be over but the war will go on. Seth is still out there and i hope Nicoli will get better soon.

Oh my God!!!!! I nearly dropped my laptop just then.. >.< Sooooooo insanely excited.. And freaking.. And spazzing... Oh my god... So many extreme events.... AH! I hope whatever Omen had worked. It SUCKS! My friend arrived just as I was reading.. Aaaannndd... I kinda ignored him until I was finished. He watched me read nearly the entire chapter... When Omen appeared.. I apparently did something.. He just kinda glanced at me and said, 'I take it something happened?' I threw something at him.. but still.. Oh my gosh.. I wonder if he really was telling the truth... So sad... If he was... So much death... I wouldda been happier to see Seth go, but that would make things too easy for the heroes. I can't wait to see the next chapter. Please update soon!!!

HAHAHA "fucked up shit" indeed! This was ultra intense! Now I don't know if Dimitri was telling Conrad the truth or what but I wouldn't be surprised if he just wanted to set up Conrad and his clan with his very last breath. (That's if he is really dead...Seth did take him off before that last breath) I guess I'll just have to wait and see how this new information is going to play out with this group. And poor Nicoli! He's always risking his life for this clan...he is truly a great friend to them and I hope they appreciate him! Omen is trying to gain some redeeming qualities, I might have to start giving him the benefit of doubt. I am in such a FRENZY that I can't explain it! I'm so TIZZY that I think I'm DIZZY! Great chapter! And of course can't wait until the next.

I just wanted to mention that I think you write the best sex seens out there. I must have reread those chaps about 4 time now an ive been following this story from almost the beginning. So you better keep up the good work. ;P

Short chapter is short... T_T Unless I just read it really fast (which is very possible. I was so anxious to read this that I actually checked for an update before I went to bed Wed. night, even though I was positive that it wouldn't be there. xD) Well, I was (kinda sorta) right about the blacking out/passing out not being such a big deal. I mean... if Katerina had decided to trap him in limbo with her, it would've been a very big deal. -nervous laughter- But she didn't, so it's all good! :DD So, Nicoli gets to meet Katerina! Is that cool or what? The way that I'm picturing her hair... is ridiculously awesome. xD I almost wish I had long hair again so that I could do something like that. Haha. Katerina seems pretty quirky herself. I'm glad that most of the women in MD are fairly (or very... xD) strong-willed. Oftentimes in M/M stories, supporting female characters are weak. Or they're bitches. xD But Katerina seems pretty cool. I feel really bad for her and the other two vampires that are stuck in 'limbo'. That really, REALLY sucks... Lol, Nicoli... "You told me what your lover wants-" "Please stop calling him that." xD I could just picture the smirk she probably had on her face as she continued her question. Haha. Good answer, Nicoli. Very good answer. :) I got more warm fuzzies when lil' Nickel said about how much he cared about the clan and that he didn't want them to go through any more pain because of the Hearts. -hearts and sparkles all around- Nicoli IS pretty amazing... ;D Whoa. Scary Katerina. xD She must have split personalities to pull a 180 like that. Haha! I think that it's gonna be pretty hard to hide the fact that he met Katerina from Ethan because of the mind link. I wonder if Ethan will ever accidentally find out? Ahaha! We all know Nickel's too cute to resist!! ;DD
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Owchies. Why'd Katerina have to throw him? xD Hope he doesn't have a concussion. Wouldn't that be lovely? (Not.) -huge fangirl smile- CUTE MOMENT IS CUTE!!! I was totally expecting them to kiss, though. Or for Ethan to peck Nicoli on the forhead or something. D: But oh well. It was still cute. And Nicoli is totally falling for Ethan. Muhaha! I'd love to see someone with teal eyes (yea right!). I bet that would be a real treat. Teal's such a pretty color. (Btw, I found a really cute concept picture for Ethan and Nicoli, so I'll probably start working on that drawing I've been promising you soon. But I work so slow, so I wouldn't expect it till the end of summer... -sweatdrop- Sorry. Haha.) Wow. Cave in. Totally should've seen that coming. XD It figures. They get the Heart, they celebrate for a little bit, then they have to run for their lives. Gotta let them breath, Darky! Lol! I kept thinking of Cirque du Freak again while everyone was rushing out of the cavern under the museum, when Crepsley first flits with Darren on his back to the hospital, and Darren doubles over, gasping after they stop. Mr. Crepsley's all like "Didn't I tell you to hold your breath? -Darren shakes his head no- Oh. Sorry. -walks away-" XDD Poor Felix... I hope he's okay. I mean, I'm sure he'll be fine with a little rest, but it's still a little worrying. If anything else were to happen where he has to use his power, he could go poof, right? Motivational speech from Conrad... ruined. By. Dimitri. -pulls hair- AHHH!!! Why?! Why does this always happen?! T___T And if Dimitri's there, the rest of his clan is bound to be close by as well... Including Seth... -shivers- Unless he never came back from where ever he got teleported... :D Happy thought! Eeee! You've left them in another predicament, Darky, and then left us hanging! (This is becoming a habit, I can tell... ._.) I will be sure to check for updates AFTER 3pm on Thurs., like you told me. Because I am forever loyal and will do whatever you tell me... Pfft! xD I think I've had too much sugar (vanilla ice cream, crushed Chips Ahoy cookies, and chocolate syrup drizzled on top with whipped cream sundae! My own concoction, not nearly as unusual as Amelia's would be). I'm spouting some weird stuff. Bloody hell! It's 2:30am. Blast! I should totally be asleep by now. T_T Why do these reviews always take so long? ...oh yea. Because I ramble. -sigh- Well, looking forward to the next chappie, as always! And thank you for another glorious installment! It made my otherwise uneventful Thursday a wonderful day. :D -huggies and lickies- See you next time!

Oh yea. And I forgot that I wanted to add "OMFG! Dimitri!! How the fuck did he find out?! They were so careful!! OMFGWTFBBQ!!!1!!" ...xD Okay. Spaz attack is over. Haha.

Oh hell no!! I just KNEW it was too good to be true! Okay, there were three major things I hadn't expected at ALL in this chapter. One, Nicoli meeting Katerina! I was like (insert shocked face here). And man, that sucks for her! Having your own little purgatory, nothingness... I can't even imagine what that would have been like! I was so surprised she even acted SANE while talking to Nicoli. Wouldn't most people go mad in that kind of environment??? I certainly would! lol Second, I hadn't expected the floor to cave in! It was like something out of an Indiana Jones movie! LOL I'm glad they made it out though :D Go Felix! Being the ghostly hero and whatnot! :) Thirdly, I really, positively, ABSOLUTELY did NOT expect Dimitri to show up! I mean, I though maybe Omen or idk, someone else, but not him! Damn. He's such a stalker! And what the hell? Was he serious when he said, "Hand over the heart," ???? Um, *cough* did he not see how much at a disadvantage he is in? I mean, each clan has six members, but with Amelia and Preston, I think our guys have a better chance of kicking the bad guy's asses! :D I think Dimitri shouldn't underestimate the two magic-loaded kids. Hopefully the clan will come out unharmed, Nicoli especially! Being human and all. :) Thank you for another wonderful chapter!! *gives cookies that look like MD characters* Can't wait for the next update!