rate_review Reviews

That was so great!!!! I really hope Amelia and the clan will work together to get Nicoli back!!!!And then Nicoli will finally learn that Amelia is a witch and finally she can help them with the book!!!! That would probably a bit too easy but well I can keep dreaming!!!! I think there are two possibilitys for Dimitrys behavior. One possibility is that he hasn't acctually killed his brother and everything was a great missunderstanding and he is a nice guy in reality. The other possibility is it is just an act. Well we probably will see soon!!!! I really hope that Nicoli is going to be allright!!!! Hope to see you soon and thanks again for the update!!!!

NicoliDmitri! Yum. Hmm, it must sound like I have a one-track mind. Ah well. Brilliant chapter, if I do say myself. I think, when you finish the whole thing (which hopefully won't happen any time soon; I'm enjoying it too much) you should do a Moonlight Denial one-shot where there is an ENORMOUS ORGY with Nicoli at the centre. Maybe something like NicoliEthanAndreDmitriGavinetc. You know? -cheshire grin-

Love,

Marsel

Lol! I would love to see Nicoli as a little princess.. and Ethan as Prince Charming riding in on the white horse ^^ So Amelia finally meets the rest of the clan, and know Conrad knows that Nicoli is friends with a witch. I guess that means Nicoli will find out soon enough, if he can escape from Dimitri. =) I find it amusing that Dimitri is being all nice-nice and gentelmanly to Nicoli while Conrad practically hates his guts. Although, he did seem to care a little in this chapter =) I can't waiittttt to see what happens with this mess. lol.

Woo! Fast update. Go Darky! I think I've had my fair share of "Amelia Moments" during high school. I was constantly reading while walking home from school, and I'd be tripping over stuff, walking right off the path, running into stuff, etc. I almost got hit by a car once. x.x So be careful, Amelia! Reading and walking is dangerous! A valiant effort by Amelia to save Nicoli. She must feel really bad that she failed, though. I know I would. Poor Amelia. And I can kinda, sorta tell now that she's one of those "Shoot first, ask questions later" kind of girl, what with the way she zapped Ethan across the room before anyone could say a word. ~.~; I cringed when he went flying. And he was in such a panic, too. He was probably really disoriented after that. I found it interesting that the mind link is strong enough now that Ethan can feel Nicoli's emotions so strongly. And at the moment, it's a very good thing. Very good, or else no one in the clan would have any idea that something was wrong. I wonder if Ethan can still feel Nicoli's emotions through the link with that crummy collar on even if he can't hear his thoughts..? So, we finally REALLY met Dimitri. All I have to say is "It's the nice, quiet guys you gotta watch out for." xD Although, I'd definitely be wary of Seth, too. Holy pie, is he creepy looking! Well, Nicoli's baseball skills almost paid off again. Too bad Dimitri's not human. ._. Ethan, get your pretty ass over there and help your boy before Seth eats him! Or molests him! o.o; Guwaaaah! Update quick again please~! PLEASE!!

More i need more, i loved how Amelia went all bad ass uber witch! And poor Nicoli i don't know who he should be more worried about Dimitri or Seth? Something tells me Seth though, he seems more sadistic.

Darkness! How could you! You don't end chapters like that. Laugh. Evil.

Wow, not this was a really nice chapter. Amelia totally rocks, a tear dropped for poor Ethan who must be feeling pretty bad, Gavin actually got aggressive and poor Nicoli (I think I'm finally starting to get a hang of his name) is in for so much troubble. How will his parents react to him just disappearing? It's not like Amelia can just say "Hey, your son got kidnapped by vampires, but don't worry, I'm a witch and have some vampy connections of my own. I'll have him back in a spell." I also like the fact that Dimitri (I had a gym teacher who had that name. He came from Greece), hurm, where was I. I like the fact that he seems nice. Those characters are always the worst, or have more layers. >:3 Mesa lika. Sooo... update soon yes? Yes.
Oh, and have you noticed that in the last chapter you've written "tsk, tsk, poor, poor Nicoli". Admit it, you like to see him squirm ;P

First off Amelia was awesome and totally was a badass for going against the clan...i totally love her!!!!! as far as dimitri, i have to say this is even worse then being down right evil. he's the worse kind of bad. you actually are drawn to him and he shows affection and kindness...he just uses them the wrong way. i've always thought that a great story has a bad guy that even the reader can relate to, just a little bit. he has charism and he uses it...it's totally creepy and it so works. i love it...i can't wait for the next chapter...i wonder if ethan even heard ethan trying to call out. i hope so. great work! i love it!!!

oh nooooo! who has nicoli? i don't think i like this cliffie but it was a really good one! can't wait to see what happens next. who will save nicoli? ethan better get his ass in gear!

I'ma put my money on that creepy lady that hired Owen in the first place? And I thought I was the only one who called them a 'tizzy' XD YAY!