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what will happen next? I have to know :) please

You know, everytime I see that you've updated, it brings a spark of joy to my day. I hope they find him fast before that darn Dimitri corruptes him. I totally love this story. =)

It should be illegal to end a chapter like that. It's not okay. I'm just saying. Poor poor Nicoli T-T He really has it tuff. But with that collar. Is there someone in the group who can do magic, is there some kind of magic-market for those in need or do they have a hired help? Hm? Hmm? Hmmmmmm?
And I’m also wondering… If the collar zaps Nicoli when that part of the brain activates, shouldn’t he get zapped when Ethan tries to contact him? I mean, he touches that part of Nicoli’s brain right? Lol, you might have to explain this a bit more for me. ^^
So Dimitri thinks Seth is a turn-on? That just makes him all the more scary, Dimitri, I think. Wow. Interesting.

That was so great!!! And again we see a bit wichcraft!!! Really nice!!! And poor Amelia is shocked to see that Nicoli knew the whole time!!! And now again a hint to Nicolis eye I really want to know what triggers the pain!!! Is it memorys or something else!!! And what the hell is the pain all about!!! Well anyway thank you so much for the fast update!!! See you next time!!!

Wow, another great chapter!! I like Nicoli because he is so stubborn. I know it's not in his nature to give up easily so him showing resolve to escape and still being defiant to Dimitri made me cheer. I was also glad that he is staying loyal to Ethan's clan by refusing to say anything. Finally, I think my favorite witch (other than Ameila) has to be her mother (Cecile)... she's just too darn cool.

That was a great update. I felt a tiny bit sad for Amelia and how hurt she was over Nicoli keeping his knowledge from her. I didn't like how she was treating Ethan,though. I felt that she was being unfair to him.

Dimitri is creepy in his "niceness" and Seth is just plain creepy. Since Dimitri and Seth have caused the deaths of Ethan's clan siblings I hope that Seth is killed since he seems to be a favorite of Dimitri.

Please update fast.

Yes, yes, more more. Are we going to see more creepy funeral home guy? And is Dimitri bad or good or something grey?

I couldn't read fast enough when I was reading just after Nicholi got kidnapped. I found myself skipping sentences and had to go back and read parts again. T_T Here's another picture. http://s3r3n17y.deviantart.com/art/Amelia-Fairbrooke-POed-138806409

it was great seeing the clan and the fairbrookes work together to find nicoli. i hope they do soon. i wonder how nicoli is coping. congrats on the new job! great update and i look forward to the next one, when you get a chance.

Once again, a wonderful chapter. Poor Ethan, poor Nicoli, poor everyone. They better not hurt Nicoli. I'll damage them. And the others need to get their rears in gear and go find him. Okay, now that my rant is over and I am once again calm. Can't wait for the next chapter. Congrats on the job. Til next time, later.