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NNNNNNNNNOOOOO i just found this story a couple of days ago, i need more of the story pwease? oh pweety pwease with BBQ-sauce-covered gummy bears on top? was Nicoli possessed? what was the reasoning behind the names
for the boys Nicoli-the teenage boy and Ethan-the 80 yr old vamp? kept getting me tripped up when i read it. oh funny fact: Twilight Forest is actually the name of the theme for my job this month, i have to laugh every time i read it your story. gosh i'm so happy to get my input in before the story was complete, wow 49 chapters and nowhere near finished. i love it. so update soon because i'll miss this story so so so much in the mean time.
do you give emails of when you've updated? if you can you email me when you get the naext chap up? my email is Shadowama5678@aol.com thank you *kisses*

wow I forgot I reviewed the prologue...has it been that long? LOL I'm even more surprised you knew who I was. I tend to change my name a lot but this is probably the last time. I can't change my name on Y-gallery so, I'm going to stick to CrimsonRain.

What's happening to Nicoli kinda reminds me of the kid in Descendants of Darkness with the Devil's Tril. I keep thinking this fucked up demon is going to come take Nickie away...or is he? *giggles evilly*

Though with the Descendants of Darkness the demon wanted his soul/him dead. He also used one of the good-guys as a vessel...meh me and my shoujo manga. update soon ^^

So, is it just me that is getting the super creepy vibe from Seth? Am I just a weenie? Now can I ask you a question? Do you make the story up as you go or do you have the whole thing planned out already? And if it is already planned out, just how much chocolate would I have to bribe with for info? :D Okay, until next time, patiently waiting and pretending to work while actually checking for updates. Later.

Ooooo~ Dimitri that was rather stupid of you, now he's going to be all closed up and shut down. You're not getting anything out of him for a while, or at all if the rescue shows up before Nicholi comes to. Oh, and thank you so much for the lovely comment, and I have gotten quite a few favs, and comments on my pic from some of your readers.

ch45: wholly moley!! at first i thought the van was from someone who had an attachment to the squirrel, or was trying to get him to not throw the acorn. and it turns out to be his kidnappers. XD

you have a way with getting us fixated on squirrels...

ch 46: aww poor nicoli. seth IS scary. i thought you'd make him into a hunky kind of creep, but no, he's just a creep.

and dimitri. well, i didn't have any expectations about how he'd show himself to nicoli, but now i'm just waiting for the monster to jump out. there's just gotta be one in him somewhere. his niceness is a veneer, right?

anyway awesome chapter! it was interesting meeting those 2 characters!

ch 46?: congrats on your job! woo!! money!!!!

nice to see the two clans interact. now, to get them to have thanksgiving dinner together...

ch 48: 0_0 THE BOOGEY MAN IS BACK!! or whatever it is that's haunting Nicoli. I can't wait to see Dimitri's reaction. Bet he wasn't suspecting it!!! What a cliffhanger! Awesome chapter.

I completed reading this yesterday, only to wake up and see another chapter. Do you know how happy you made me? Nicoli's badassness is an addiction.
Wow. Wrong thing for Dimitri to pick on, huh? I want to know who the other secret guy is. Why does he bother Nicoli? What does he want? Can't wait until the next chapter.

Yay ^-^

I loves this chapter [ >< ] <----Peanut! (it's like a heart but better)

Can't wait for the next chapter!