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ch 50: OMG! Okay, I can see why Seth is so interesting now XD. He's still a little creepy to me, maybe it's because of his craziness. But i do like what he ads to the story and he's an awesome character! and dimitri, when i saw him rush into the room i couldn't but help to think of what a faker slash manipulator he is! His saving of the damsel in distress was so cheesy it made me smile. haha. and i like nicoli's reaction to just cry. maybe it will make dimitri more lenient towards him. heehee.
i think you captured ethan's feelings in the van perfectly, with the anxiety and all that. i'm glad you made him do the stupid thing (to go after nicoli) even though he got stopped, because it just seems so ethan.

anyway, great chapter! two years is a long time!! i'm glad to see you're still writing the story! it just keeps getting even more exciting with each new chapter!

One word that describes this chapter: wow. But I'm still craving for more. And Seth is awesome

My drawing was a bit failed, and before I could start from scratch again my classmate bribed me - I love briberies - into creating his alter-ego, Cinnamon boy, for a months worth of cookies. I'll try to draw again, and I will not give up! Maybe try something easier first... Seth is very inspiring...

You know… I don’t know what I thought was creepiest. Seth’s love for killing, or your love of thinking up ways that he kills. Laugh. you’re A/N totally creeped my out. I kept thinking “Now, now, Avernion. You know that this girl is a loving and reasonable person… who named herself Darkness… No, no, that doesn’t mean anything. She is perfectly nice and sane. But the twisted people often seems that way at first… Come now girl, surely, this only makes her a good author. A good author! That freaks you out just a little. No big deal. Nope. It’s good. She should give her character depths… And carving knives….” Ha ha. I must say the chapter got to me. Lol, or you did ;P
I also sympathise with Ethan. Isn’t it such a pain in the butt when people force their will on you, making you go about things the way they want. For better or for worse. I must say I’m a little worried about him. He totally ignored Conny. Does he know that? Is Ethan in for a ass-whopping?
You know, this chapter had me yelling at the screen. My dog came in and stared at me, tilting his head as I went along. They totally disgusted me. They, they, they tricked Nic in such an ugly way! I kept yelling “No! Nicoli, don’t fall for it. Don’t you believe that! This ain’t right. It was planned, I tell you! PLANNED! Nicoli, I told you to jump out the window! That is NOT the window! Can’t you even recognise a window when you see one? Dimitri, you lying piece of %&¤/&R7! No, no, Nic, don’t cry in front of him. Guuaaaahuuhuuurghuu….” Yes. It was painful. Very painful. Their little act made my stomach turn. And poor, poor Nic. He knows he’s screwed. I thought it was pretty funny that he decided that all of them were insane. That gave him extra points.
I also keep wondering. That evil entity that plays his tricks on little Nic, would he really let anyone else kill the boy? I mean, Nic is his little play thing right. He likes it when Nic suffers by his hands (if he got hands). Would he really let anyone else take the fun away from him? Hmmm…
Darkness. You are sick and twisted. I love you. :3
Oh, and my key-words today are "national grudges". Are they talking about Seth you think?

I heart Dimitri. Do I even go as far as to say that I like him more than Conrad...? Yes, yes I do. Poor Nickoli. I heart him too and I hope that things go his way soon. I hate this torturing...

This is how I picture things in my mind when Seth was about to go all crazy rapist on him...

In the midst of all of his screaming, Nickoli would be overcome by the demon(?) that possesses(?) him. He would go all kinds of crazy evil kick-ass on Seth, killing him with his bare hands. Then possessed Nickoli would burst through the wall and use his superspeed to run his ass back to safety where he will promptly pass out and be found by Ethan(!). They would proceed to make whoopee on the forest floor in celebration of Nickoli's escape and Ethan's undying love to Nickoli.

Yeah... it probably won't happen like that, but a girl can dream...

yea! more clues to the puzzle. i've started to look at this story as a puzzle just waiting to be solved. it's definitely captivating! the picture is still fuzz but im getting certain details on certain parts of the picture. great update as usually and i look forward to the next one. btw nicoli is holding his own, i have to say i am proud of him...although holding his own might cause him more harm in the long run but at least he won't go down without a fight. conrad better be happy that nicoli is protecting his family. maybe conrad will warm up to nicoli after this (lol or maybe not...he seems to be a hard ass 24/7)

I DEMAND MORE! RAWR! *throws stuff around*
Now even more questions hang around in my head D:

I might have a Faith fanart on it's way xD first time drawing a child, most of what I've drawn in my life has been.. 17-30 looking. Even my chibis look older than 16! But I'm struggling on, trying to get it finished. Expect it by the time you update next time :) (yes, I'm bribing you)

You know, things just aint working out form me. Here I wrote this long funny review, putting my heart into it, and my Internet screws me over and swallows the whole thing. Laugh, it came as such a blow I had to wait until today to try again. Ha ha.
Hmm... So what did I say..? Oh yes. Dimitri is very hard to figure out. He can be the dark evil twisted madman who understands emotions so well in his none-understanding, that he can play people to get them exactly where he wants them. Confusing the hell out of them. Or he could be a guy with a different take on the world, who think he is doing the right thing and sadly reflects on the facts that no one understands him. He still loves Conrad and think it's a pity things had to come to this, but come to this they must. Or he is both of these things. It's also difficult, cause not all evil people think they are the evil people. Hmmm... Yes, Dimitri is very interesting.
I also feel very sorry for Nicoli. Mr Big, Dark and Bony are going to attack him in his sleep. Ohh boy, I wouldn't want to share a room with him that night. *shudders*. Since the folks won’t come and rescue him in time for that, I have the solution. Be sure to pass this on to Nicoli. All he has to do is jump out the window and grow wings. Be sure to tell him it is not the spoon that bends and thus wings is not an impossibility. If he should fail to understand such a simple subject, he can always fall back to the simple fact that heroes always manages to save the day how ever many bones that are broken. He wants to be on TV right. Well then, he should start practising right now. All he needs to do is make a Stallone down the window, land like Arnold and run like the wind. It's actually very simple.
Now Darkness, be sure you pass this on. The fate of him now lies with you and your power to carry messages. I'm counting on you. If you fail, well, I'm pretty sure I can find an ogre who knows where your shoes park.
Lords... I need more sleep... Maybe I should have waited another day until I reviewed…

Yay! Good Chapter. Sadness we have to wait longer for your wonderful chapters though. T-T

Thanks for the great update! I'm glad Cora was able to show Amelia that all vampires are not bad. Yay for Tabitha and Preston for finding Nicoli's whereabouts. I hope they get to him in time. I really do not want to see what Seth has in store for Nicoli. I don't like him, someone please cut his head off and burn his body!

Well i was not expeting Faith to be his maker! And now i fell a little bad for Conrad. And now Nioli has to deal with Seth! Some how i don't think he's going to be as fun as Dimitri, i hope they get to him in time before he is too tramatised. And will he have any more interactions with any more of Dimitri's clan?