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Hi there! Just found this story, and I really loved it so far.
Oh, and just a thought: with such a great story, I think you'll get whole lot more readers if you put it in the Original-misc-slash section. :-)

Can't wait for the next update!

Happy B-Day MD!!

Thanks for sticking with it and sharing such wonderful characters with us. Next few chapters should prove to be very interesting!!

*joins the party going on*

A celebration of a vampire fic on Halloween? *g* You do know how to plan things! Just wanted to say Happy Birthday!

*wonders just who is going to clean up when he party is over....*

I’m so proud of Nicoli. Even in the face of imminent fangs, he still takes his time to be bratty. Got to love that boy ^^ He is very brave in his own way, yep he sure is! In your face Dimi!

Laugh, from a kid’s show? Ha ha, really? That’s so funny. (When I saw the name of the vampire was Rudolf, I snorted so loud my family turned and stared at me). Not that I’m one to talk. The little mermaid inspires me A LOT! Two years is a very long time. Congrats to your devotion. We sure appreciate it!

The most heartbreaking part of the story was when Nicoli saw Gavin, smelled freedom, tasted safety, and was told to wait in the house of doom. I also think you pictured the scene when he was crying in the bathtub very well. Very sad.

I have a hard time with all of Dimi’s vampies. I just don’t know where to place them. Okay, so Seth is the Grim Reaper, the knife version. The rest are a mystery to me. I keep going “You good? Bad? Good? Bad..? Bratty or just insane? Or badish good? Goodish bad..? What? Huh?” I don’t think Van Hellsing would care though. Let’s give him a call. Or even better. Let’s call Omen. He would have a field-trip, having so many to hate and destroy. Yup. Let’s do that. *Starts flipping through the phonebook. D… Des… Destru… Destructive Dude…*

LOL! My cap-word is Thusday kidnap. Sure is ringing some bells...

Awww Gavin is a big softy, I can't wait till they rescue him it's going to be an awesome fight!

poor Nicoli, and Seth is a good bad guy in the way you got to love them for how evil they are. I hope Ethan gets there soon to save him. I have to wonder after Dimitri and Seth get done with him will Nicoli be the same? He has to get a little tramatized after this.

Totally and completely amazing! Your characters are so complex and yet so real, if they do defy logic. I can't wait for the next installment, I know that is lame, but it is still true. Where do you get your inspiration from? Your stories are so vivid, and captivating that just suck the reader in. I love Seth's character it is a real tension bringer. Love the story, keep it rocking.

hmmm seth...the little devil. i wonder if dimitri was actually mad, i doubt it. it's kinda sad how they are playing nicoli. at least he recognizes that they are both gearing up to probably kill him. really sad that he has lost hope but it adds another layer to the story and its interesting to see him lose hope even though there are people on there way to help (but he doesn't know that). wow i'm feeling for the poor guy, losing hope in this desperate situation is pretty much not caring what happens to you next. if that is the case i believe its just going to get worse for him because now he is resigned to die. i hope gavin tries to save him instead of doing intel and reporting back. someone needs to get him out of there especially now before there is more damage down to him. poor guy...but great chapter...btw if something really bad happens to nicoli, i believe the person they should be afraid of isn't ethan so much but amelia. she just might take down dimitri and his whole clan but her sheer will and anger. "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned (or pissed off)."

Yup! You're twisted all right! LOL! I like the baddies sometimes too, but not usually the serial killers...them I just want to see die.

I don't have time for a long comment tonight, but I just wanted to say...AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW, poor Nicoli! You're so mean for making him sob like that!

It was a great chapter and I hope you'll be able to update on the anniversary!

TTFN

Oh wow...Dimitri and Seth are very very good at this 'good cop, bad cop' thing!! And you are even better as you wrote it! Can't wait till the next chapter :)

I think I'll go off now and join the other readers/reviewers in a group hug with Nicoli.