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Tough Love? Oh dear o.o

Whatever that is I don't think I like the sound of it....or do I...hard to tell.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!1111oneoneone~~~ >.< (I think that every time MD's chapter ends)

I love this story to death *snickers* death = Vampires teehee. (I know it's a bad joke but I can't help but laugh at it)

Go little Nickie! Though I don't think it's wise to piss off a vampire...I bet he's thinking 'If I didn't need that little brat he'd soooo be dead' LOL I love Nicoli to death, just the right amount of sarcastic wit, gawd. He's a spitfire that one. Sounds like Ethan's falling in lurv too ^^ Course it's hard not to like Nicoli, if you can get passed his sharp tongue. Gawd I just wanna hug him!

Gavin is such a sweetie, I wouldn't mind huggin' him all day long too (I bet he's a cuddle bug ^^)

Happy Birthday Moonlight Denial! (even if its a few days belated XD)

I'll be waiting for the next chapter while trying not to fidget too much. ^^'

Congratulations! XD Sorry I didn't review on your chapters lately. I will, I promise I'll give you a proper review on all those chapters! Just be patient with me!
The only thing I'll say now is that I can't imagine what Nicoli will think if Seth is Conrads child... I though of that after reading chapter 50. I can't also think what Van (or whatever the new vampire's name in Dimitri's family is) will do with a house full of peolp when the rescue team comes.
That al for now. Sorry again!

YAY!!! Happy 2nd birthday!

I really enjoyed this chapter. I'm glad that Nicoli was able to see Gavin and regain his hope again.

Gavin is such a softie behind that hard exterior, what he did for Ethan was wonderful!

More please!

Yippee *also throws confetti* happy B-day Moonlight Denial, i think that this story is awesome, now i have got to say something. ETHAN HAS GOT TO GET HIS BUTT IN GEAR FOR SOME QUICK TRAINING. oh and the creepy flashbacks of Nicoli's. Could that possibly help him? it seems to me like a possible possession, with the fairbrooks being so apprehensive and even Ethan feeling that gap of time in Nicoli's memories. i don't know! just throwing out possible ideas. update soon *Kisses*

damn let me say I can NOT believe I have been reading this 4 2 freaking years lol. But I remember reading the first little chappy thing and being a little lost but still LOVING IT. I do read each chapter as u post it, if not a day or so behind :P but well I feel so bad just leaving a review saying the old update soon thing that I tend to not leave a review since I feel like I have nothing to tell u needs to be fixed really. I tend to only see 1 typo per chapter :P... Man and its over 50 chapters already. I wonder how long it will be in the end. ANd if there will b a need for a second book lol. Have u ever thought of taking this book and seeing if it would get published? Its really good, I know i would buy a copy :) lol. But yes well written chapter! Gavin is so cute lol... and WHY do u feel the need to make me fall 4 the bad guy lol. Making me feel all bad for enjoying little nicky getting molested lol. Well I look forward for another great chapter! Well I think I've wasted enough of ur time ;) keep up the good work! <3

HAPPY BIRTHDAY MD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *BAKES A CAKE*.......*EATS IT*
AND HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!

Found some (mostly) spelling errors:
"With that Ira leapt out of the window and as she hurtled to the she could hear Lillian and Van calling after her"
"Cars or on foot just won’t due and I doubt we"
There's also a part where you type 'crud' when I think you meant 'crude'

Anyway, AWESOME chapter!
Ethan kissing Gavin made me kinda chuckle. A nervous chuckle, that is. XD

I can't wait to see how and in what ways shit will hit the fan when Ira returns to the house with her findings. Poor Nicoli is in for another ride, perhaps? Buckle up chap, buckle up. It was so satisfying reading Nicoli's thought processes about Dimitri and that no-nonsense bullshit attitude he's decided to act upon. I hope he really grates on Dimitri's nevers. Mwahahaha. Eat Nicoli, eat, gather your strength so that when the time comes you can mouth off passionately at that two faced charmer. Ooooo...

And more new character perspectives! yay! Van IS interesting! Since he's so urban and new I bet it'd be pretty fun writing things from his perspective.

Anyway, happy anniversary!!! Congraduations Darkness! WOOOOHOOO!!

Happy Birthday MD!!!!!! Almost there Nicoli. Can't wait for the next update. I follow this story almost religiously.

CONGRATULATIONS!!!! 2 years, that's impressive. I'm glad I'm along for this ride. It's a great story and I plan to stay aboard as long as you are writing it. I have to admit that I love every character in this story, rather they are good, bad or a little bit of both. I can't wait to read about this plan of how they are going to get Nicoli out. I can only hope that they get to him before the others realize that the calvary is on the way...although I fear upon sensing Gavin, that it maybe to late. So glad that Nicoli has a little hope back. Gavin is a sweetheart for doing this for Ethan. He claims it was for Ethan but I think it was for himself too, he wanted to know that Nicoli was all right too. Great work and of course I await your next chapters!

Holy crap, this story just gets better and better. I absoultly love Nicoli, he's got more guts than most people to stand that shit out. I can't wait to see how they rescue him ^^ Sorry I haven't reviewed lately,I've been up to my neck in bullshit, but I haven't yet forsaken MD yet!