rate_review Reviews

First I have to wish your story a belated happy birthday. Sorry it didn't come sooner. Work has been absolutely crazy and I've been dragging myself to bed just about as soon as I get off. You know it really doesn't seem like it has already been two years. WOW! Second, despite my not so constant reviews, I will be one of the folks trailing behind you every step of the way for as long as this story continues. And I love where you got the inspiration for this story from. In fact I love everything about this story. :D And if you ever get it published I will have to camp out at a bookstore on release day. You'll have to let everyone know if you do, kay?! And finally, although I'm sure by now this is starting to sound repetitive...wonderful, amazing, great, you're an amazing writer, can't wait for more. Yep. That about sums up my past couple missed reviews. And once again, happy birthday MD! Yay. Kay, later.

Awe I forgot to give Ethan some huggin’lovin’. Poor bishie vamp *Huuuuuuuuuuuuugs* ^^

I don’t like the sound of the basement stuff whatever that’s going to be about…I hope they get to Nicoli in time….

*Imagines a St. Andrew’s Cross and a bunch of Bad BDSM gear* O_O

Speaking of Bishie Vamps…I just finished rereading Trinity Blood. *drools* sooo many bishie vamps……

Makes me want to write a bishie vamp fic now >_>

Which actually isn’t a half baked idea. ^^

Update soon. I’ll be watching. *evil stalkerish grin*…(long pause)…*snorts* me a stalker…riiiiiiight ROFL!!

I'm loving Faith more and more throughout this. She's so ittybitty and sweet and cute, but she's strong too. I can't wait to see how the teleportation spell'll work... I would never forsake MD! Its the total awesome-ness.

Great chapter! *hugs* I was snickering along with you when Seth got interrupted...again!!! Hehehe He so deserves to suffer greatly, so no wood relief is cool!

I was saddened by Faith's tale, but astounded by the things that were revealed. Did Dimitri really kill Issac? Will we ever find out the truth?

I'm very curious to find out what Dimitri has planned, he's so closed-mouthed about everything, it drives me nuts!

I was happy to see Amelia break down a bit, she annoys me to no end! lol It was nice to see a crack in that armor.

More please! *leaves cherry cheesecake as a bribe*

Oh no i hope dimirti doesn't use tough love on nicoli! It was fun to see faith and Amelia hang out.

grate chapter i cant wait to see how it all works out and "D's" tough love, god that sounds so delisosly evil hehe i rely cant wait, but i will say you make me sad you never replay to my review's *sniff* that makes me fell special when people do that *sigh* can you just say thank you? *hangs cookies over head* u will get you cookies if you do! hehe grate chapter thank you and have a good one

ohmyohmy....i get the feeling Nicoli isn't going to be happy in the next chapter. XD

yes it was..uh...german chocolate. this is an internet cake after all!!!

the kiss made me chuckle nervously because I had a moment there where i thought, "hm...competition for Nicoli? eh?" I appreciate threesomes and all...even foursomes (if you're counting felix), but nicoli x ethan are just too cute together!

anyway, i enjoyed reading this chapter! we find out more about the family conflict! it's a mystery a mystery!!! there are so many interesting mysteries...with the hearts, nicoli's demon thing, and now a questionable history-related-influencing-the-present agenda going on. makes me wonder what the heck Dimitri is doing, or what's motivating him.

"Faith would not. Shut. Up!" LOL. when characters keep chatting and chatting sometimes you just want to throw a rock at them, except you don't. haha. thankfully her piece is done right? it was nice to see that relationship develop between faith and amelia though. two girls just having some girl talk, some serious girl talk.

i like what you did with Ira about her fears. You develop your characters so well through description, even though they're "side characters" on the "bad side." it makes them much more interesting and adds such depth to the story.

anyway, good luck nicoli! you can hang in there! lol i just had a mental image of nicoli climbing out the window with a couple of blankets knotted together as his escape rope. classic. can't wait to see what happens next!

Hmm so what turned dimitri into such an ass? I wonder. i really enjoyed the seen between faith and amelia, i foresee a kind of possible friendship coming out of all of this. seth gives off so many bad vibes, but i wonder if we are getting half the story here. are dimitri and his crew really bad, wait yeah seth is but some of the other i don't know about. i do know that what they are doing to nicoli is wrong so even i they aren't all bad they are still bad enough and they need to be stopped. hmmm i wonder what is in the basement. i almost shudder to think of what else they can put nicoli through. the rescue mission better hurry or else this could spell the end for nicoli, because i know after all this he won't break and tell them anything...nicoli will fight to the end! great chapter...i can't wait for the next one...hmmm i'm already thinking about all the possibilities.

Thanks for the explanation. It sounds like the story is heading toward an even more interesting direction, so I'm looking forward it. Can't wait for the next chapter. :-)

So you're throwing in more confusion in this whole Dimitri-thing - I see, I see. That's pretty evil you know ;P Did he kill his brother because his brother didn't leave him any option? Like Andre and Omen's dad? Hmmm… Got to think about that one. Oh, and I have forgotten. Is Seth Dimi’s first child or who is it? Can’t remember ^^;

You know, I can’t wait until we get to see some kick-assing. >:3 I want to see it now. I’m so curious how you will pull it off. I’m guessing it won’t go too smooth? Moahahahahaa!! >x3 I have to admit I am a whole lot of curious as to how the different people will fight. What kind of different tricks they got, >:3

And poor, poor Seth. He never get’s to screw his dad cause his sister keeps interfering. Hmmm… Writing it like that makes it sound kind of disgusting… Damn. ‘Smexing his master‘, yes yes. Let’s go with that!