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i know who it is its stephen isnt it? and great job with how nic played dimitri lol. dimitri is making a big mistake he thinks its only the vamps coming not the conrads clan AND the fairbrooks . by the by is nic going to become a witch as well?(i must admit being a witch(wiccan) my self iam hoping).

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The traiter at the end...hmmm... somehow I have an inkling that Stephen is not as dead as you will have us believe. Or I could be totally wrong, but that's the feeling that I'm getting. We'll see if it's the right feeling.

Andrea and Owen/omem talking face to face! Awesome. Can't wait for the two clans to fight, talk about a family feud!

huh thats odd i have reviewed for this story but oh well that is all in the past know well i have to say goof chapter and i rely cant wait for the next chapter to come up hehe your write so amazingly it is one of the best story's i have ever read and i do read a loot of story's lol well i cant wait for the next update, so i made you a cake to get it out a little faster know ill i ask is that you give pieces out to all the fans lol

answer yes, but so many more questions. i can't wait to find out exactly what went down between these 2 clans. and what happened between ethan and this traitor. so much to look forward to...and i have to admit, i'll kind of interested in seeing exactly what dimitri does to nic,

That was a great chapter. I hated the way Omen gloated and was so mean to Andre. I felt bad for Andre, it seems that he really wants to grasp onto his past relationship with Omen, whatever it was, and Omen is so against it. I feel so bad for them.

Dimitri is finally showing his nastiness...not that we didn't all know it was there! I suppose that was Stephen, the one who broke everyone's heart and betrayed Cora to be with Dimitri. *shakes head* What a selfish asshole. I hope Ethan rips his heart out and shoves it up his ass! Then follows with Stephen's head after he cuts it off. GRRRR!!!! Betrayers suck rotten eggs!!!!

I hope the next chapter will be the confrontation! I'm really excited about that since Dimitri may be expecting the clan but he has no idea about the witches. What a surprise that will be and I think t will tip the scales in Conrad's favor. I can't wait to see the witches kick ass with their witchy power!!!

Thanks for the great chappy and I'll be looking forward to the next one!!!! *bear hugs and a chocolate ice cream cone for desert, just like me!*

Oh, I'm scared for Nicoli, I have this incessant feeling that the next chapter won't be any fun for him. No idea where I got that from! *eyeroll*

...hmm, I think I may have an idea of who the traitor is, just from a few things said here or there and reader's intuition, but if I'm right I need to go back and read about how Ethan fits into it... Unless you haven't said anything about that yet. idk

And wow. Dimitri has a knack for taking on evil little vamps doesn't he. At least, more so than other vampires. Seth, the psycho who was a serial killer before he ever needed to feed on people, and now this mysterious traitor with enough darkness in his heart that even Dimitri, a man who allegedly killed his own brother and 'niece', finds intimidating. And you trapped poor Nicoli in a house with these people?!? jk

Can't wait for the next piece!
~taedium

Grrrr, Nicoli's still in Dimitri's clutches?! Poor little dude! I love how brave he tries to be... I wanna know more about this traitor guy, who is he? And poor Cora, she's crying on the inside. =( At least Andre is there to help, with his ass slapping. lol. I love this story more everytime I read it!

no nicoli in this chap! update update update!!!!!!!!! btw update! *kisses*