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great chapter! i loved how nic was able to find the courage to stand up to dimitri at the end. i still say stephen is the one1 love this story cant wait for the next chapter
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Ohhh, poor Nicoli! Ethan and the rest better get their soon! Poor Nicoli! I understand why Dimitri's two-facedness is so annoying. I would much rather deal with a complete jackass like Conrad who tells it like it is instead of pretending. Better to be a true sinner than a false saint, right? This story just gets better and better the more I read it.

Noo, not Nicoli, not the whip! Please hurry and update i can't wait i have to know what happens next, Ethan will probbably go apeshit when he see's Nicoli has been whipped.

okay so basically this is my first time actually writing a rewiew for MD, though i have been reading it from the very beginning. First off i wanted to just say your an amazing writer. Your story flows so well and its easy to read, with so little errors. Which can often be hard to accomplish. from the begining MD was a twisting turning rollercoaster that has kept me hooked this entire time. the updating of this story is one of the highlights of my life.(sucking up has now ended!jk) Let me just say that Nicoli is an amazing main character. He's so diverse and unique in his own ways that it makes you want to unravel his mysteries even more(cough mysterious past cough.)Also you've created an interesting twist to age old creatures like the vampire and werewolves, revamping (hehe) them for a modern time. On to MD though. you love creating mysteries and constant questiones about your charachters don't you??? Not that its a bad thing, for you at least. Nicoli has enough mystery about himself that it could be an entirely seperate story altogether! Then there's other's like Gavins rare power and what truly happened between Dimitri and Isaac. Which i do not believe dimitri killed isaac. plus we don't know if dimitri could be covering for someone else.there's just to much unknown in order to believe that. the way you have your characters interact is very well written. you can almost feel the same way your character is feeling when in different situations. there's a few chapters i just wanted to comment on. Deep in the Woods chapter > hottest sex scene ever. i just kept reading over and over. Sweet Nightmares chapter > omg omg omg omg!!! i want to know who mystery mad is!! please please please reveal him soon!!! Family Roots chapter > omg omg omg nooooo! WHY? (cries bc dimitri and nicoli couln't finish make out scene thatnks to nicoli) i seriously would love to see nicoli and dimitri have sex. it would totally make my day. and it seems from what faith has said, dimitri would probably be a wonderful lover. (though we still haven't scene what Andre can do yet). Survival chapter > yes back to dimitri ( no offense) i just love Dimitri, he's my next favorite character next to Nicoli. He's just full of awesomeness. the whip scene sounds like it'll be painful yet hot at the same time. it would be great if Dimitri discovered Nicoli has FLS. hehe! all the things he could do to nicoli. ugh you love teasing us don't you. saying something special will happen in the next chapter.will dream demon( or whatever he was) come back? i would be forever thankful if he does finally come into the story more and knowing what he looks like would be helpful. though im guessing we won't find out till later in the story. okay done with my first review( it just might be the longest one you've ever gotten. please please update soon and if possible write back. (on the floor worshipping you, hoping you will write back) alright bye!!!

ch 53: i thought i had reviewed for this chapter, but i guess i hadn't. anyway, andre and owen....jeez kiss and make up! you guys are so hot for each other. do it do it. XD

i hope nicoli's personality can pull him through whatever shit Dimitri's planning on making. And that child...does it have to do with Felix?? (I haven't read ch 54 yet)? XD. oh my if it does...

anyway just thinking about it's got me itching to read the next chapter, so i will...great chapter!

ch 54: the dungeon torture begins....actually, the whipping doesn't seem as bad as all the other scenarios i was going through in my mind as nicoli was being dragged around by seth like a doll. it's better than mutilation (i imagined nicoli having his eyes plucked out, maybe his face disfigured or his toes/ears chopped off, or seth slicing/carving into nicoli's skin or skinning nicoli alive...TMI TMI...lol). XD. well it is mutiliation, but still...hopefully nicoli will be able to get through the pain! poor boy.

it must hurt especially with the staircase thing. anyway the scene with van was interesting! i thought for a moment van would start licking up the carpet blood, but instead seth beat him into unconsciousness. heehee.

anyway another awesome chapter. i enjoyed reading this one too! i can't wait to see how the good gang will bust through the doors and be all 'yo yo nicoli where ya at?'

happy late thanksgiving too! hope your holiday was nice.

Okay...I love ice cream, so thanks! I'm still going to strangle you for that ending though!! How could you leave us there? You are so mean!

Dimitri is a monster, it's official now and Seth needs to be castrated, have his dick reattached and then castrated again...repeatedly for 24 hours!!! That bastard hurt Nicoli badly on the stairs when it was so unnecessary. After I see what Dimitri does I'll pass judgment and hand out punishment for him as well. Make sure Seth is taken care of by the next update please...and that will be when Nicoli is rescued...CORRECT???

I hope the next chapter will be up soon...I'll need it to take my mind off my RL for a short while!!!

Hey Shadowama here, you are such a meanie, i'm glad that to see that Nici is alive. and to see that he was in this chapter. please let them be alright, owen/omen said that there will be a bloodbath! bloodbaths are NOT good for bathing. it's all red! blood you see.....it's red, if we all took bloodbaths, we'd all look like ripe strawberries. that's not a good look for me. ok enough of my strange ramblings, i'm beginnning to sound like Amelia! update soon *kisses*

gods i love this fucking storyjust found it and i have read tough it in about 2 day just couldnt stop reading it

please put me on story alert have have to know how this will go.ps gods who wouldnt want to have a boytoy like nic?