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Ooooh!! The Evil-Twin plot twist!! I definitely didn't see that one coming! lol (I was one of the ones who was leaning towards Stephen) I totally pictured Ethan with an eye patch for my image of Evan, but you can't have two eyepatches in the same story and Andre's already got a handle on that one.

:( Poor Nicoli! Things have unfolded for him just as badly as I expected, except for the whole 'raise-his-hopes-then-crush-his-spirit-with-the-evil-twin' thing. That was a surprise. (just out of curiosity, how many reviews do you think feature the phrase 'Poor Nicoli'?)

So... assuming Nicoli, Ethan, and Conrad all make it throught the next couple of chapters I'm thinking Conrad's opinion and treatment of Nicoli should improve dramatically. The kid took a hell of a beating, speaking of which, can't wait to see Amelia's reaction to his less-than-healthy state. She'll just blame Ethan. lol

:D Thanks for another chapter!!!!
~taedium

btw- I just realized how angry everyone is about Nicoli's treatment, am I a sadist for not feeling like Seth and Dimitri should fed through a wood-chipper feet first? I kind of like Seth, he's weird, obsessive, psychopathic, horny, and a vampire. What's NOT to love?

wow that was quite a grate chapter and i mean you know i am a rabid fanboy of your work it is one of the best i have ever read... and yeah sope-opera much? +snickers+ lol i cant wait for the nsxt chapter like i cant wait for any of your chapter thought i seems like you updateted faster then normal but im not one to lift a gidt horse in the mouth lol but i rely like this one thought i kinda want to know more about that "taint" of evil that is around Nicole and more of the history of all the vamps also i love faith and amile they seem like a pair that could paint the town red hehe i liked this chapter a lot and yeah i think i runnging out of things to say *gasp* so i bake you this cake *hands over cake* so yeah eat the cake lol

ok ok i admit you got me on that one i didnt see it coming at all. i love the interaction between Amelia and Preston lol. as for the hetro stuff fine by melol the more the merrier.(by that i mean all of it XD) cant wait to see what happens between Ethan and Evan. but just for a second just think Ethan and Evan for one night(...hell with that give me the whole week-end)think of the fun Nicoli could have with that!

O_O HOLY SHIT. I so didn't see that coming... Ethan has a brother?! Oh jebus, I gotta know what happened there! You'd better get the next chapter out pronto! (pretty please with a cherry on top?). lol. Wow... Awesome, awesome, awesome chapter. lol, I would love to see Nicoli try to give Conrad a hug.

MORE! GIVE ME MORE! Please let the next one be longer, i always want to cry when a chapter ends.

I hope Nicoli suddenly sprouts wings and mnagical powers. I mean, there's only so much arrogant vampirism he (and I) can take. At least he's not being too feeble. Is this going to be a torture scene where the other characters rush in at the last second before any real damage can be done? ;) I don't want Nicoli hurt. I hope his evil dream-creature orc thing appears soon.
You have my blessing and love and so forth.
Love,
Marsel

such a grate chapter i mean this is one of the best of your chapters to date i rely cant wait for the next chapter thought i mean i want the "EVIL" vamps to get whats comeing to them and i rely cant wait for you to expand on their history as well something makes me think that their not as evil as they seem to be oh well i cant wait for the next chapter oh well have a good one comeing come up wihth the next chapter.

Great chapter as always, Darky. The imagery created by the magic sparkles was... magical. xD No better word for it. And I'm glad Amelia seems to be getting along with Cora and Faith. Girls need to stick together! I'm still a little surprised by Amelia's hostility toqwards Ethan, though I think it's perfectly understandable. I just didn't think she could be so vicious. I mean, she's so cute! But you know what they say, you have to watch out for the cute ones. xD At least they came to a sort of understanding. That's always the first step to getting over one's differences. Maybe, eventually, they'll be friends? *laughs* Go Nicky! You got Seth good! And then he... got you right back. Poor Nicoli. Falling/being drug down the stairs isn't pleasant, especially if they knock right into your spine or tail bone. Owchies~ Congrats, Darky! You actually pulled a fast one on me! I totally wasn't expecting a whipping. In all reality, I was preparing myself to endure a torture chamber or something medievel like that. I'm relieved it's only a whipping, though I still feel great pity for Nicoli having to go through that. I'm not entirely sure if I'm looking forward to the next chapter or not. On one side, poor Nicky is going to be whipped! And on the other, it might be the chapter where he's rescued! So, I guess I have mixed feelings. xD

I'm immensely sorry for not keeping up on my reviews. I HAVE been reading every chapter as they come out, but it's usually super late at night and I'm too tired to review, or I'm reading the chapter while taking a break from homework and just don't have the time to. Either way, I'm really sorry. I'll try to be more faithful. ^_^

P.S. I just want to say a quick word about your previous chapters, the ones I missed reviewing. They were all WONDERFUL!! And my friend and I agree that Ethan looks just like one of her drawings on DeviantArt, minus coloring. I'll have to show you sometime. It's really good. It's a drawing of how she imagines Remus Lupin as a teen. Lollercaust. I'll send you the link on DA. Till then, Darky! <333s you and MD!

oh what an evil way to leave a chapter...but it's ok because i know you will be back with a new chapter...i have to say i think i always knew nicoli had it in him...maybe im just alway routing for him and amelia...the way she ate her waffle, who the heck needs coffee...lol. ethan was right...after all of this, the last thing nicoli is going to need is those two fighting around him. i'm thinking he is going to need all the love and kindness in the world for what that asshole dimitri is doing...i tried to give dimitri the benefit of doubt but after this, i don't think i can...i'm starting to wish horrible things on him and his clan...great chapter and i can't wait to read the next one...the one that you can't wait to write...happy writing to you!

Wow, all I can say about that is; OUCH, that has to hurt. I've never been whipped with anything but a horse riding whip, don't you hate sisters, but that whip sounds even more painful x.x
I hope that someone will rush in and save Nicoli quickly!