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schedule December 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm wondering when the little darkling living inside of Nicoli will appear...? Hmm...and Meier is the one who pretty much caused all the grief in Conrad's clan. Dimitri didn't do any of the dirty work himself. That's messed up right there. Anyway, please update again soon!
person anniea
schedule December 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what did eathan do to his mom that made mierer hate him with the firey passion of a thousand suns? and i know that he'll hate me for the pity but poor felix. that dickhead mierer must have repeated that phrase to felix as he died. i feel sowwy for felix, update soon *kisses*
person smint45
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chappie was so great!!!! Evan killed Felix??? AW I really start to NOT LIKE HIM!!!!! Thats so mean killing poor Felix to hurt Eathen !!!! I really hope history is not going to repeat itself!!! Hope that all are going to come out of this alive!!! Hope to see tne next chappie before the new jear!!! See you!!!
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't make up my mind... In one chapter I think that maybe Dimitri is only nuts and that's why he's doing all those things. That maybe he didn't kill his brother or he killed him in selfdefense and in the next chapter I think that he is a twisted and evil as he can get. Right now I'm having this opinion on him: evil, evil, evil.
Okay. I think I can imagine where Ethan's brother hatered comes from, but to actually feeling happy about your twins pain? And I thought that Seth was twisted... Once more... poor Felix. And Ethan. :(
Now I'm indulging myself with imagining Ethan and Meier fighting and Nicoli coming in between and giving the final blow to Ethatn's brother and killing him. Although I also think that it really should be Ethan who kills him since he killed Felix, his lover. Hm... You know, earlier I thought (before I known who the traitor was) that Felix was killed by his lover and that that person was the traitor. XD That would explain why he wanted him dead so much. I wonder if ethan will find the will and strength to do it.
You aren't planing on killing somebody from the clan, right? Hmm... Thhe only one I would be willing to kill is Cora. Although it would be intersting to see Owen's reaction on the news that Andre was dead and not by his hands.
I also hope that Preston won't use what they were planing to use and leave the vampires behind. I thought a ot about that posibility and imagined what would Nicoli do if that happened. I don't think he would ever forgive them....
I kind of combined a review for few latest chapters here I think....
One more thing. I'll skip some fragments that I won't like, not because they're bad or something. I just don't want to get irritated to much. I've done it a few times already. Sorry. When I'll know that everything will be alright with everybody and Nicoli will be safe I'll return to those parts and read them without frustrating mysef.
Ehehe... this is the last thing. this time really. XD I'm sensing some sort of climax here. You're nearing it more and more with every new chapter. At least that's how I feel reading the few latest chapters. I'm curious what will happen next. And Nicoli was right: he is in a house full of madmen.
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was like -tear- no, you can't just end there, is the rest hiding somewhere? XD
Poor confused and naive Nicoli, you would think he would learn not to anger the powerful vampires by now. Someone needs to film the boy and play it back so he can see what an idiot he is. Yet adorable and loyal. -sigh-
He has his work cut out for him enduring whatever else you decide to throw at him, you evil author you ^-^
I can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omgomgomgomgomg lame... just kidding so i like the chapter it just was way too short and yeah i figured he killed him as soon as you made him so i can't wait for the next chapter and yeah i cant wait for a good fight but i kinda want to see faith fight but none the less great chapter
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay I was number 500!!!! WOOHOO!!!!! Congratulations! Evan sounds really evil and in that 'I'm not sure what to expect kind of way', alot like Dimitri. At least with Seth you know what you are getting, but with these two they seem to get off on playing mind games. I can' wait until the rescue party comes. I wonder what Dimitri has up next for Nicoli if they don't arrive in time. More torture for Nicoli? It seems like the "good" guys have some explaining to do to Nicoli. They owe him a lot, especially with-holding all this other information. I can't wait to see how this plays out!
person kylee
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. I have just started reading it and I am enjoying it so far. I am so happy that I get to read 57 chapters!
person Malachi2223
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...so you like getting me riled up huh? Well, I do my best to please! LOL!

Now! On to the griping!

I do not like Evan! He is a cold heartless asshole. I won't even go into the torture I want to rain down on him for Killing Felix as well as Stephen, who's death caused so much pain for the girl whose name has escaped me at the moment. LOL!

YAY! Way to tell him Nicoli! You go boy...though I fear your strength and moral fortitude have gone right over that asinine excuse for a vampire's head. You have more strength and courage in your pinky than he has in his whole vampy body! That goes to the rest of those excuses for the undead as well!

So you like the way I write torture? Well...*blushes*...I do write some myself and I have stories posted here as well as aarinfantasy.com. Thanks for the compliment, but if you like my torture you should see my sex!!!!! LMAO!

TA TA for now love! *waves as I stuff my face with celebration cake* More soon please...chappys of course, though cake is appreciated too!
person mystic
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter !! to tell you the truth i dont think ethan has it in him to do it ether. but i dont think Faithb has that problem lol. and as for the hetro stuff i had a boyfriend and i have a wife(she points guys out for me lol!) oh and by the way i dont read it for the slash i read it becuase its a fuck awesopme story and i truly do think your one of the best writers out there!(outside of my wife that is lol)this story has so much going for it from the characters in it to the way you have them interact with each other.
mystic