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January 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Go team!
A brilliant chappie, happy new year!
A brilliant chappie, happy new year!
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January 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You don’t have to worry about this one. The chapter was full smacked goodness. And I’m relieved that Nic FINALY got out of there. At a second there, I thought you were going to kill Cora off. ^^; A wonder what Andre would do if she had? Nothing good I imagine.
You know, I just can’t help but liking Dimi and Meier. I seem to have this fascination of guys in gray tones. Those two are the ones I think are the most interesting of all your vampires. I want to know more of them as quickly as possible. Connecting the little hints you’ve given, in my brain that melts together building a picture where Meier and Faith was lovers. The I think about the fact that Faith has the body of a little girl, and I must admit, get totally creped out. Usually, I want to be right in everything, but with this I wouldn’t mind being wrong ^^; E he he hee…
You know, one thing I haven’t been able to let go of since you said it is about Gavin and his stubborn silence. Everyone has a time of blood fever (I think the name was) but Gavin won’t say for how long he had his. I must know! My theory is that he had such a short time that he is ashamed of it. Why else wouldn’t he say it? And if that was true, one must wonder what kind of horrible person he was to have such a short time with the madness. Or, it could be the opposite. He had an insanely long time so he won’t talk about it because he doesn’t want their pity or whatever. I still think it’s more of number one. I’m really curious. I also wonder what kind of human he was, cause you’ve said Gavin has an ability normal vampires doesn’t have. Something, if I remember correctly, he had from back when he was human. Laugh. Don’t you go and think I’ve forgotten these things. Nope not me. xD
Great chapter, D, very nice :3 You did good >D
You know, I just can’t help but liking Dimi and Meier. I seem to have this fascination of guys in gray tones. Those two are the ones I think are the most interesting of all your vampires. I want to know more of them as quickly as possible. Connecting the little hints you’ve given, in my brain that melts together building a picture where Meier and Faith was lovers. The I think about the fact that Faith has the body of a little girl, and I must admit, get totally creped out. Usually, I want to be right in everything, but with this I wouldn’t mind being wrong ^^; E he he hee…
You know, one thing I haven’t been able to let go of since you said it is about Gavin and his stubborn silence. Everyone has a time of blood fever (I think the name was) but Gavin won’t say for how long he had his. I must know! My theory is that he had such a short time that he is ashamed of it. Why else wouldn’t he say it? And if that was true, one must wonder what kind of horrible person he was to have such a short time with the madness. Or, it could be the opposite. He had an insanely long time so he won’t talk about it because he doesn’t want their pity or whatever. I still think it’s more of number one. I’m really curious. I also wonder what kind of human he was, cause you’ve said Gavin has an ability normal vampires doesn’t have. Something, if I remember correctly, he had from back when he was human. Laugh. Don’t you go and think I’ve forgotten these things. Nope not me. xD
Great chapter, D, very nice :3 You did good >D
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January 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. Bunches. You met and exceeded my expectations. I have missed you while you were gone! My email provider probably got sick of me checking my messages for updates every half hour. :D Glad to have you back and can't wait for more.
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January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!(stop and catch breath) OMG OMG OMG OMG! Your Back!!! Im so happy!! This has to be the greatest part of my new year weekend. Okay let's get to it. Wonderful, Amazing, mind-blowing chapter. You really came threw on this one. I wasn't dissapointed in the least. So part 1, yay they made it to the mansion, the rescue is on! I must say I'm a little annoyed with Ethan and Faith. They're both so 'oh i want to kill them, yet i don't'. MAKE UP YOUR MIND!(sorry, it just really annoyes me when characters are so contradicting). Okay part 2, Go Conrad! knock that door down. hahaha! I must say I kind of started to like Conrad in this chapter, he was just so badass with his temper, and hitting Dimitri in the face with his own cane. hahaha(poor Dimitri,XD). OOOH! Another good part with Dimitri, pretending he didn't know what Conrad was talking about, then provoking Ethan about Nicoli. Yay go Dimitri! Part 3, UGH! This was the part i would have skiped over. For some reason both Ethan and Meier annoy the hell out of me. I don't know why, they just do. Maybe it's because i don't know there whole story yet(coughHINTcough) so i'm getting fed up with the beat around the bush mentions of there past. Okay part 4. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! GO SETH, GO SETH! UH WAIT! GO GAVIN, GO GAVIN, no wait...crap who do i cheer for? This was one of the best parts of the chapter. Gavin was so cool and sexy with his 'i won't lower to his level' attitude and kicking Seth around. Crap!!! Gavin's power is that strong? geez, no wonder everybody fears him. OH Seth! How i adore you! I loved his taunting of Gavin, and now we know why he's so feared, super speed! hahaha! for some reason that's really funny to me. Seth was so adorable when he talked about having Gavin's head as a trophy. Which is pretty funny cause Gavin doesn't want the honor of being Seth's obsession ( though i wouldn't mind being it)hahaha...(awkard silence) okay moving on, part 5. hmmmm....Go Andre beat those bithches, hahahahahaha! part 6. For some reason i love the Preston, Amelia, Faith, Felix combo. they're very funny together. poor Faith! crap how did Meier know she was there! creepy. WOW! Faith is strong!(her power strangely reminds me of Storm from X-men.) GOOOOOOO Amelia! She rocks during this chapter. i loved it when she told Van she was his worst nightmare! i'd believe it to if a flaming Amelia was comimg at me.(runs and hides under bed while continuing to type) part 7, yay nicoli is rescued! go team rescue! haha nicoli and felix hugged(that's so adorable). YES, Nicoli knows the truth know. That's going to be an interesting conversation for later(coughNextChaptercough). part 8, whoo, escape time. haha Amelia and Preston are so devious! Go pissed of Amelia show those vamps what ya got!!! though figuring out what the orb was, was kinda easy, i'd figured with Amelia's destructiveness and Preston's brain they do something that would blind the vamps. part 9, poor, poor, dimitri's coven, they have no idea until the bomb goes off! part 10, For some reason Ethan really annoyed me in this part to, and i honestly don't know why, maybe it was the whole reunnion that off kiltered me. I guess i didn't expect them to unite in this chapter. Hahahaha run, run for your lives! Amelia and Preston are so funny together. i loved it when they fought about how much magic she put into the bomb. hehehe oh also go Preston you can be a man, i loved it when he stood up to Conrad. part 11, yay Dimitri survived. omg omg omg omg!!! i laughed so hard at this part. Just imagining Seth walking around blind trying to hit things made me loose my breath i was laughing so hard. poor Van, i kinda feel sorry for the guy.(by the way, i been wondering this since he showed up, but how do you say his name? is it like van the the vehicle or is pronounced different? sorry it's just been bothering me)NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Dimitri and Seth don't go!!! i can't go threw withdrawls so soon(starts sobbing in a corner thinking of not seeing dimitri or seth for awhile)......(slowly crawls out of corner to finish review) Well i guess i've taken up enough of your time, so i'll finish this with my NEW MD FAVORITE CHARACTERS LIST:
10-Faith-even though a little annoying in the beginnig, her uber powers put her on the list, plus we get to see evil and cold Faith
9-Mystery man- ya im still obsessed with him
8-Nicoli-well the only reason he went down was because there wasn't much interaction with him. he'll be back up in the next chapter most likely
7-Andre-hot,cool, develish, smoking, all around hotness. plus childish, yay!
6-Conrad-we see more than coldness from conrad. we now have sexy anger and cool confidence
5-Dimitri-sadly he fell a few spots, but fear not he won't be off the list that soon. he's still evily sexy to disappear.
4-Preston-yay, you really are a man preston! go Preston! get more angry it makes you even cuter!
3-Amelia-whoo! go badass pissed off female witch! you officialy are my idol. destructive Amelia is awesome.
2-Gavin-yay go gavin go gavin. you rock! he's so sexy in a cool confidence sort of way(does that make sense?)plus he has really strong powers
AND THE NUMBER ONE SPOT GOES TO.....
1-SETH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! extremely cool, the perfect mix of sexy and crazy at the same time. plus he has a sense of humor(although it's a little strange)who cares! Seth is just too adorable not to love, (i wonder what he looked like as a kid?)i bet he's a wonderful lover too!!(coughHintcough) well at least to Dimitri.
And there you have it. I hope you enjoyed your new years weekend and see ya next time!!(goes back to sobbing, doesn't want to end the review)XD!
10-Faith-even though a little annoying in the beginnig, her uber powers put her on the list, plus we get to see evil and cold Faith
9-Mystery man- ya im still obsessed with him
8-Nicoli-well the only reason he went down was because there wasn't much interaction with him. he'll be back up in the next chapter most likely
7-Andre-hot,cool, develish, smoking, all around hotness. plus childish, yay!
6-Conrad-we see more than coldness from conrad. we now have sexy anger and cool confidence
5-Dimitri-sadly he fell a few spots, but fear not he won't be off the list that soon. he's still evily sexy to disappear.
4-Preston-yay, you really are a man preston! go Preston! get more angry it makes you even cuter!
3-Amelia-whoo! go badass pissed off female witch! you officialy are my idol. destructive Amelia is awesome.
2-Gavin-yay go gavin go gavin. you rock! he's so sexy in a cool confidence sort of way(does that make sense?)plus he has really strong powers
AND THE NUMBER ONE SPOT GOES TO.....
1-SETH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! extremely cool, the perfect mix of sexy and crazy at the same time. plus he has a sense of humor(although it's a little strange)who cares! Seth is just too adorable not to love, (i wonder what he looked like as a kid?)i bet he's a wonderful lover too!!(coughHintcough) well at least to Dimitri.
And there you have it. I hope you enjoyed your new years weekend and see ya next time!!(goes back to sobbing, doesn't want to end the review)XD!
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January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Preston ROCKS! i love the fairbrooks and the little bomb that got left behind that was priceless.the fight between the vamps was very nicely done and very well written . looking forward to the next chapter. oh i have to say Andre and Amelia are my favs!
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January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
angry witch and a bomb oh that just rich and i loved it! i like how you got to see a little bit of every one fight in this chapter and how well done it was too, not a lot of people wright fights very well so kudos to you! well cant wait for a new chapter.
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January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was again so great!!! I really liked Conrads reaction when he heard that Nicoli didn't tell a thing!!!! Now Eathan just needs to say told you so ^^ I found the diferent fighting styls absoloutly fantastic!!! And then finally the come out of Amelia!!! I can't blame Nicoli for beeing confiused!!! They really need a talk after he recovert!!! And Felix I really love him he can be so cute!!!! I can't wait fot Eathan nursing Nicoli back to health and Nicoli telling everyone what happend to him !!! Perhaps Conrad will evan lower himself to prais Nicoli for staying strong!!! I really would like that althoug with Conrads personality it doesn't seem likly!!!! I really loved this chappie and I can't wait for more!!!! See you soon!!!!
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January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm (rubs tummy) a nice healthy helping of moonlight denial. I loved the fighting! I loved the Conrad/dimitri/Ethan/Mier interactions! I loved Amelia and her super flash bomb of revenge and i can not wait to see Niolie and Ethan get some together time, he is going to spoil the hell out of him.
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January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
“Well, then next time don’t give the explosives to the pissed off witch!” I just about died laughing. I'm going to need a new laughbox after that, I think mines just burned out. =) I absouletly lovee Amelia.
Yay! They got Nicoli back! Whoohoo! No more Dimitri to hurt him! (Although I think Conrad might actually be starting to like Nicoli a little bit). Jeez, this chapter was awesome... Thats all I can really say right now.. lol. I fucking love it
Yay! They got Nicoli back! Whoohoo! No more Dimitri to hurt him! (Although I think Conrad might actually be starting to like Nicoli a little bit). Jeez, this chapter was awesome... Thats all I can really say right now.. lol. I fucking love it
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December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi D. Wow, have I been missing some chapters. Xs Sorry, at lot in school. I still love your story. So, on to the chapters I've missed;
CHAPTER 54
I miss Omen. I'm always so glad when he pops up and makes things more difficult. Jepp, I like that weird guy. Such a sad creature. And I feel sorry for Andre too. Just when you thing things can't get any worse, more shit hits the fan. Now I wonder what's going to happen after the fight. But. I know Omen has been trained and all, and added to that has Andre's eye, but will he still be able to kill some of these vampires? Some of them are seriously old and cunning. They would have to be veeery messed up for him to be able to lay a hand on them, I think. I mostly just picture Gavin snorting at him before squishing him like a bug. Got to see where all that leads to. Sniff, I still think Owen is so sad. To me, he is more a sad broken creature than anything else. But on the other hand, the injured animals are the most dangerous ones. Lords, I just want him to get some good, healing Andre-loving T^T
CHAPTER 55
I really liked the way you described the magic well. Very beautiful, and a fun idea. Wish I had one of those in my basement. I can have a basement. I can. Some of the words you've used had me thinking of Charmed. Have you seen that show? It's great ^^ Well, whether you have or not, some of the things are similar but still you, he he ;P And like I said, the magic well was a pearl. I really liked that one. And could you be any meaner to Nicoli? Dragging him down the stairs like that. Slashing him open again and again. Smearing his blood across the house. You know, if Nicoli is alive and real in any sort of plain, I have strong believes that he won't like you ;P I liked that he spat on Dimi, hi hi hi. And again t´with the cruel stuff. Whipping him? Laugh. That is cruel. I don't think you intended it, but when I pictured Dimi with a whip in his hand, I thought he was kind of hot ^^ It was probably when you described him as a warrior using a whip that I fell. He he. Most people uses swords or such, so a whip is pretty cool >:3
CHAPTER 56
Preston is soo whipped. Lol, Not like Nicoli, but you get what I mean. In the beginning I thought it was kind of fun but now I feel like screaming at him every time he shows his spineless self. My dream is that he learns to stand up for himself, laugh. Some day, some distant day, my dream will come true. Maybe. Also, I think Amelia can be pretty mean to him. If one of my cousins treated me like that, I don't think I would like them. On the other hand, it is Preston. Maybe he gets his kicks out of people bossing him around. I know this guy who wants everyone else to decide his life for him. Because of that he always dates strong women how can boss him around. And that is also why he always gets dumped. I guess one only wants to date a wimp for so long huh...
CHAPTER 57
Damdadaam. The evil twin brother! I like that he isn't just evil without meaning. If I had lived for eighty years as my brother's shadow, not being allowed to exist like a person of my own, I would harbour some serious hatred. And I would stick like a crazy person to that one who saw me for me. That is a very precious thing. To be seen. I also like that he is so uncomfortable in helping the human his dady messed up. Snort. I think that's kind of funny ^^ As for Nicoli, I can understand he can't take much drama with how emotionally and physically messed up he is. If he could think about it a little, I don't think he should take it to hard that they didn't tell him about Meier. Some things take a long time to tell. I have stuff I haven't told people who I've known for years because they are so personal and painful. Even if I wanted to, I can't get the words out of my mouth. Now for such a thing as you're younger twin brother killing four lover, killed your friend and stabbed the whole family in the back, if that ain't hard to talk about, then I don't know what is. I seriously doubt Ethat will be able to kill him though. And I don't want him too. I also think it's interesting how Ethan suck at using his mental powers while Meier is like King on the Rock. Could that have something to do with Ethan being able to glide through life using his charm while Meier had to work hard for the things he got? Just a theory ^^ I do get the impression that Ethan suck at his power because he is to lazy to do anything about it. Didn't Gavin even say that?
Anyway, I can hardly wait for the next chapter and all its ass kicking Moahaha! >:3 Bring it on Girl, bring it ON! He he he he >:3
CHAPTER 54
I miss Omen. I'm always so glad when he pops up and makes things more difficult. Jepp, I like that weird guy. Such a sad creature. And I feel sorry for Andre too. Just when you thing things can't get any worse, more shit hits the fan. Now I wonder what's going to happen after the fight. But. I know Omen has been trained and all, and added to that has Andre's eye, but will he still be able to kill some of these vampires? Some of them are seriously old and cunning. They would have to be veeery messed up for him to be able to lay a hand on them, I think. I mostly just picture Gavin snorting at him before squishing him like a bug. Got to see where all that leads to. Sniff, I still think Owen is so sad. To me, he is more a sad broken creature than anything else. But on the other hand, the injured animals are the most dangerous ones. Lords, I just want him to get some good, healing Andre-loving T^T
CHAPTER 55
I really liked the way you described the magic well. Very beautiful, and a fun idea. Wish I had one of those in my basement. I can have a basement. I can. Some of the words you've used had me thinking of Charmed. Have you seen that show? It's great ^^ Well, whether you have or not, some of the things are similar but still you, he he ;P And like I said, the magic well was a pearl. I really liked that one. And could you be any meaner to Nicoli? Dragging him down the stairs like that. Slashing him open again and again. Smearing his blood across the house. You know, if Nicoli is alive and real in any sort of plain, I have strong believes that he won't like you ;P I liked that he spat on Dimi, hi hi hi. And again t´with the cruel stuff. Whipping him? Laugh. That is cruel. I don't think you intended it, but when I pictured Dimi with a whip in his hand, I thought he was kind of hot ^^ It was probably when you described him as a warrior using a whip that I fell. He he. Most people uses swords or such, so a whip is pretty cool >:3
CHAPTER 56
Preston is soo whipped. Lol, Not like Nicoli, but you get what I mean. In the beginning I thought it was kind of fun but now I feel like screaming at him every time he shows his spineless self. My dream is that he learns to stand up for himself, laugh. Some day, some distant day, my dream will come true. Maybe. Also, I think Amelia can be pretty mean to him. If one of my cousins treated me like that, I don't think I would like them. On the other hand, it is Preston. Maybe he gets his kicks out of people bossing him around. I know this guy who wants everyone else to decide his life for him. Because of that he always dates strong women how can boss him around. And that is also why he always gets dumped. I guess one only wants to date a wimp for so long huh...
CHAPTER 57
Damdadaam. The evil twin brother! I like that he isn't just evil without meaning. If I had lived for eighty years as my brother's shadow, not being allowed to exist like a person of my own, I would harbour some serious hatred. And I would stick like a crazy person to that one who saw me for me. That is a very precious thing. To be seen. I also like that he is so uncomfortable in helping the human his dady messed up. Snort. I think that's kind of funny ^^ As for Nicoli, I can understand he can't take much drama with how emotionally and physically messed up he is. If he could think about it a little, I don't think he should take it to hard that they didn't tell him about Meier. Some things take a long time to tell. I have stuff I haven't told people who I've known for years because they are so personal and painful. Even if I wanted to, I can't get the words out of my mouth. Now for such a thing as you're younger twin brother killing four lover, killed your friend and stabbed the whole family in the back, if that ain't hard to talk about, then I don't know what is. I seriously doubt Ethat will be able to kill him though. And I don't want him too. I also think it's interesting how Ethan suck at using his mental powers while Meier is like King on the Rock. Could that have something to do with Ethan being able to glide through life using his charm while Meier had to work hard for the things he got? Just a theory ^^ I do get the impression that Ethan suck at his power because he is to lazy to do anything about it. Didn't Gavin even say that?
Anyway, I can hardly wait for the next chapter and all its ass kicking Moahaha! >:3 Bring it on Girl, bring it ON! He he he he >:3