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person Bluefishie
schedule January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I almost never review, at least as much as I should, but this story has kept me reading for so long (seeings as how I almost never ready anything more than 10 chapters long) that I just had to. It's amazing, and I can't wait for more. This is also the only reason I go to this site at all. Thanks so much for writing!
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i am thrilled that you found a new place. i wish you much luck and hope you are soon able to get back to writing. i have really enjoyed this story and want to see what happens. take care of yourself!! :)
person xXkissofdeath89Xx
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on finding a new place to live~ Living with friends is fun. I'm hoping to move into an apartment with my best friend a little closer to school soon, so we don't have to commute so far, but we haven't had any luck on agreeing on anything. xDD But I;m glad everything worked out for you. Take your time, there's no use rushing, because then stuff usually winds up being sloppy. Have fun in your new place, hope you love it!
<3 Kissy
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow an amazing chapter and a sad note all in one go... But I'm glad to hear you found a place. Can I just say that the whole little part where he was hugging felix was so sweet... then you typed the whole "and they never spoke of it again" thing... I cant put my finger on it but it left me feeling chilled. Like the whole story is set and its not gonna be a happy ending... Damnit >,
person anniea
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED THAT CHAPTER! how are the clan and the fairbrookes going to do to explain this to Nicoli's parents? blood loss, that creepy collar, the fact that Nicoli looks as Felix put it .......well...... LIKE SHIT! i loved that whole moment of Felix and Nicoli hugging! please update tomorrow or something. *kisses*
person cmj101087
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on your place. I understand the craziness. I myself am actually moving into a new place right now as well. It's a pain in the butt. Good luck with everything and can't wait for more.
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on your new place!!!!
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YES! Rescue mission a success! I love it. Now let's get our boy to safety so he can begin to heal and feel safe. His quietness worries me a little but I'm excited to see you explore that as a writer. I truly enjoy this story and I have such a great time reading it. As for the relationship between Meier and Faith, I'm thinking 2 things...One they fell in love or Two, he's her real father. Not sure but I'm interested to see where this turn takes us. Conrad has to give Nicoli some respect, after all he now knows that Nicoli kept his mouth closed...he underestimated him and now he should admit he was wrong. I never thought Preston was going to betray the vampires. I knew he was talking about the "bad" ones. So I'm not really sure how others came to that conclusion...but oh well. All in all great chapter and so worth the wait. I do look forward to the next chapter especially now that Ethan and Nicoli are reunited. Oh by the way the Nicoli and Felix embracing scene was perfect. I teared up when I read it. Felix was definitely his life line at that moment in time. It was wonderful! And of course everything about Amelia ROCKS!!!!!
schedule January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was pretty awesome. My favorite part was Andre sticking his tongue out at the bad vamp chicks. I heart Andre. For some reason, everytime I picture Faith, I see Kirsten Dunst from Interview with a Vampire. I guess, because they were both little when they were turned. Anyhoo... please update again soon!
person Malachi2223
schedule January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the great chapter! I can't get as excited as I normally do since I have the flu, but I at least wanted to tell you that I read and enjoyed it very much.

I was impressed with Faith's show of power and Amelia's powerful ass-kicking of Ven. I'm glad that they got out alive and relatively unharmed. I was snickering *between bouts of coughing* as Dimitri was just holding the sphere. When he finally realized it was dangerous, I was like...DUH!

Even though I don't care for the bad guys I'm glad Amelia didn't kill them with the sphere, I think I would have lost respect for her if she had, not that I like her much anyway, but still!