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person malachi2223
schedule March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm not in a talkative/typing mood today, but I wanted to let you know that I read the chapter and I thought it was a feel good chappy as well...and that I seriously appreciated the light atmosphere.

I was really happy with Conrad's actions in this chappy. He really impressed me a great deal. It was like he just knew what Nicoli needed to hear at that moment and put Nicoli's peace of mind over his own pride and image. Well done Conrad!

Next I want to see some NicolixEthan action (Nicoli as top since he'll have the need to feel in control after being helpless.). It would be strange if they didn't have sex after a near death experience. Everyone wants to reaffirm life after something like that and I'm surprised that they didn't do it as soon as Nicoli was healed!
person smint45
schedule March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was so great!!!! Conrad can be so sweet!!!! I love it that he complinmented Nicoli he really needed that!!!! And I think he needs some sex with Eathan too!!!! Hope to see that soon!!!! I cna't wait for the next chappie and I'm quite happie that the angsty part is over for now!!! But probably not for long but anyways!!! Wonderful chappie!!! See you again soon!!!
person mystic
schedule March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
other great chap!i really look forward to the next chater.
schedule March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh yay! It's about time Ethan and Amelia started getting along, lol. And yeah, she was being kind of a bitch for a while there haha. I love the poofy-haired ginger look! lol Okay I don't really, but it is funny to picture Amelia sporting it.

And I was surprised by how much I like the Conrad angst and the Conrad/Ethan hook-up. I guess his character's just growing on me. Or maybe it's the fact that he's not being a douche to Nicoli anymore and not planning on killing him as of this moment. :D

OH! And poor, poor Faith! I can't really elaborate on that phrase, it kinda says it all.

Now: On to the next chapter! :D

~taedium
schedule March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awww, i just want to give Nicole a hug. I hope Felix is okay.
person anniea
schedule March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
reading this off of an emergency computer, mine broke tonight and i feel like getting drunk, maybe nicoli can join me and we could drown our sorrows away? i chose to read this story to lift my spirits out of all of my choices bc i knew that this one would make me feel better! no nicoli(well a passed out Nicoli) in this chap or felix, talk of felix but no actual felix:( Sire/Childe sex actually happens a lot it's normally used for the newly turned childe to create the mindlink and the bond. well outside of the realm of the "Glittery Vamps and Emo Chick" those vamps mate for life. not sure which style i like better. alright instead of repeating my questions over and over i'm gonna shut up now
person cmj101087
schedule March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm sure by now you have figured out that I am going to say what I always say. Loved it, can't wait for more, you are wonderful and I am building a shrine to you in my house. :D Still enjoyed the sex, even if it wasnt between my two favorite people. Poor Nicoli. He's been put through the ringer. He needs TLC now. And poor Ethan, and Felix, and everyone. They've all been hurt by the past. I want to hug them all. Alright, now that I'm done rambling...Great as always. Cant wait till the next chapter. Later.
person BlueFishie
schedule February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved Amelia's and Ethan's interaction in the beginning.

Faith at the end was very good, even though it was sad. It's hard to make your feelings change, even if the people they are about have already.

Conrad all through the middle...I can't say as I've ever been fond of Conrad. Most of the time I wanna punch him in the face for being cold and mostly emotionless. Especially at the first meeting...and every subsequent time that he's talked about killing Nicoli. This chapter made him a little more real though.

...Conrad sex is weird. Throughout all the the chapters I've read and I never expected to read it. It wasn't like horribly out of the blue, I just never thought about him related to sex.

You're an awesome writer. You make me babble about characters that I don't even like.

Is there a way for me to subscribe for updates? Checking almost every other day kind of makes me sad when there's not one...God I'm impatient.
schedule February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
poor faith...my heart hurts for her. conrad and ethan yummy! definitely caught me off guard but let's just say it was a very pleasant surprise. nicoli finally gets to reunite with his family, this should be really interesting. it's funny how characters get a life of their own and before you know it, you have no choice but to write what they are telling you to write. they begin to speak and you are just the vessel they are communicating through. loved the chapter and i have even more respect for amelia and the way she apologized to ethan. girls rule! lol. looking forward to the next chapter! great job!
person smint45
schedule February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was just wonderful as always!!!! I really like the smutt betweet Conrad and Eathen. And you are totally right he really had to get laid!!! And I really hope FAth is going to be alright!!! I this chappie we see a whole new side of Conrad!!! I Kind of like this tender side of him!!!! Hope to hear from you soon!!!