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schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh thank you for the hug i am much better and i cant belive how fast that update was i mean it felt like just yesterday i was reading this story, oh well... good chapter and you taunt me so with the shadow and the cock robin pome thing i rely like it for some reason even though it kinda creepy oh well the vist to the past was nice i can see why felix is such a hard ass and nice at the same time lol when you make this a book your dedication page you should list all of us revierws cuz that would be cool well cant wait for the next chapter
person Lyra
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really happy to see this chapter, I love reading MD and am really curious about what happened to Nicoli in his past and what is gonna happening. The suspense is killing!
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! The felix saga begins! But who is that cock robin guy? A vampire? A diety? A demon? Or something else? Is he something from myth like vampires and werewolves or is he your own little myth creation? Something tells me he will make dimitri regret hurting nicoli
person kylee
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter. I love the story.
person Audrik
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I keep forgetting to review this for you, hunny,I'm so sorry. But I've been reading it, and loving it. This Cock Robin shits tripping me out, who is this guy? And why can't Nicoli remember the dreams when he wakes up? And poor Felix, thats seriously messed up. I never pictured him coming from a place like that.
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more about Felix's past. You're right, that is one of the chapters I have been dying to read. This whole mysterious dream of the evil guy Nicoli's keeps having is getting creepy. It seems this guy has some kind of past with Nicoli. I was presently surprised to see that you had updated today. Great chapter as usual and I look forward to reading the next chapter. Thanks!
person mystic
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh nice little look back into the past. i do feel bad for Felix why do i get the feeling Felix will play a major part in taking down Meier. as for the dream i just have one question, how the hell did Nic get mixed up with a demon?(its the eye isn't?) As always great chap,love the story,and look forward to the next chap!!!!!!!!
person trissy
schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it's been a while since I've reviewed. Sorry, I lost my computer up until now. So, anyways. I liked this chapter, It was good to see Nicoli dealing with his family a little. Can't wait for the next one.
schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OK were to start? hmmm i like the chapter as a whole and your right i was a feel good chapter amd i like connard not being a ass for once in his life but other then that i just was not into the chapter and trust me it has nothing to do with you, im sick and all the talking gave me a headace... god u update and im sick and i cant find this good chapter to be great but dont worry i love this story and ill read it again when i not sick i want to ask when are you going to get to his shadow aura or the thing that lives in nicols mind? oh i have to say that i do super love the ending of the chapter made me fell all warm and fuzzy inside and yeah when this becomes a book i will be buying it!
schedule March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh this chapter was so full of love. This is exactly what Nicoli needed. I got to see how many people actually care for him. Conrad really surprised me. Ethan was right, it was a rare moment for him. I love big family affairs like this Thanksgiving. I bet it made Nicoli feel even safer. When Beethoven showed up I nearly cried, that was my breaking point for Nicoli. It was beautiful. Great chapter! I love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter. Oh BTW: So I was remembering past chapters and I remember Nicoli use to have episodes from whatever happened to him in the past, just another mystery of Nicoli that popped into my head.