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person sadistic624
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
........WHAT!OMG!!!!why do you do this to me???? maybe i should stop reviewing again. first you kill dimitri, then you end the story. AHHHHHH!!!! ok sorry had to get it out of me. well i try to be positive. ....O!!! first part of chapter you brought shadow dude back!!! yay something to be exited about! and he's almost there. does that mean we FINALLY get to see him in book 2? I really hope so! ya....still annoyed with Ethan, that probably wont change for a bit. AWW Amelia's 18 now! that was a cute birthday party. gotta love amelia. Deloris and condrad, standin on a deck, k-i-s-s-i-n-g, fist comes the vampire, then comes the ghost, then comes the final goodbye? anyways it was a cute scene. o i skipped andre and owen. im glad they made up, its seems a long time coming. damn i hopin for a steamy make-up kiss or a little groping. it would be so cute to see andre dominate owen. i am so messed up arent i? o well :D! so then you go and throw in in gavin and his bad/strange news. which is kinda weird for meier to be leader. he was the last one i would think they would want. but then again i guess no one hates the family like he does.....hang on in the painting wasn't meier and ethan fighting, so does that mean somethings gonna happen to conrad to? i hope not. you already KILLED MY FAVORITE CHARACTER OFF:=(! so book 2 huh? well it would make sense since your story is bout 2x longer than most stories on aff. quick question thou how long till they graduate anyway, its a little difficult keeping up on how long they've been in school. wow has it really been 3 years. doesn't feel like it. i remember when i first clicked on this story, deciding to give it a try. i had read one of you other stories that you didn't finish. i was hesitant cause if i liked this and you stopped it again i was gonna be pissed. you have some of the best writing ability I've seen here and i was disappointed you didn't finish your stories. but i can really see how they helped you develop the characters for moonlight denial. I'm so happy you stuck all the way through the whole story. "The Shades of Moonlight Trilogy" huh...interesting title? not trying to mean or anything here just when i hear trilogy makes me think of lord of the rings. weird huh? o i do have a request thou if ya don't mind. please let the shadow dude show up in book 2 and could we get dragons to? sorry I'm obsessed with dragons, and they would add such character to the story. not saying it doesn't have it now, just that their dragons! i mean how can you not love them? so i guess this is the end to my review, sorry for wasting so much of your time. i do try my best to be a good reviewer and supportive of you. i can't wait for book 2, bye-bye!
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
for a moment i thought it was going to be Seth. Oh well, so sad with Doloris and Conrad, i used to think he was a huge D-bag but now i feel sorry for him. I am glad Andre and Owen settled some of their issues. Can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg.. OMGOMGOMGOMG! NO WAY! GAH! That's really the end?! Noooo... When is the next part coming out?!!!! Doesn't matter.. I'll be looking out for it anyways... I would have signed up for email notification... but I check anyway, so it kinda doesn't matter... It's funny.. I was talking to a different friend when I noticed the update this time. He laughed at me for being so excited... But after the last chapter, how couldn't I be? The little scene with Owen was adorable, and seeing Nicoli okay made me happy... But the dream.. Oh my goood... I wanna know what is trying to get him!! Then again, I always have been obsessed about the eye thing.. I was actually re-reading this story when I noticed the new chapter as well.. I am also writing a few chapters to add onto mine. ^-^ But taking breaks helps... And re-reading good stuff makes me smile... Gah! I wanna know what happens next though! Lol. I know.. I'm impatient.. But it's an amazing story. I can't wait for the next part. Anyway, enough of my ramblings. Good luck writing the next part!
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY! congrats on completeing book one! I kinda guessed it though, about the sequil thing. Damn, I'm good and yes, I would like to be put on the mailing list for the next one.
didn't really surprise me about meier either... though I thought for a bit the psycho might take over, but nah, he'd be a bit lost without his boss. Glad Owen came around a bit, he's blown quite a bit of his life on the revenge schtick.
Once again, kudos and I very much enjoyed it.
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Holy crapola wow! The end? D: I've been lurking around reading MD since you started it, but only just finally decided to say something. Congrats on finishing! It was a total rollercoaster ride and I'll miss it, but can't wait for Moonlight Conviction to start! :D xxox much love~❤
person Mint
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Woohoo! Congrats on completin the first story EVER! You should feel damn proud since this story is so LONG. Really, it could be the equivalent of multiple completed stories due to its length! OMG! What a great chappie again. I was kinda in disbelief that Owen finally said the right things/realized that he was wrong in how he thought/handled stuff w/Andre. AWWWW can't they be togetha? I want them to hook up again. Maybay? Anyway AWESOME title of the trilogy. I was surprised there is a trilogy!!! Which is awesome. I'll be eagerly awaiting sneak peek!!!!
person smint45
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well this was not quite what I expected!!!! But I'm really happy that you continue and not just stop here (that was what I expected with your AN in the begining!!!) So I'm jumping with joy at the moment!!!And I can't wait for book 2!!!! See you again soon!!!!
person PaxNodoz
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, it's already done? The first book? Can't wait for the next one then ;) you leave us all in suspense, brutally letting us hang on that cliff. But it's going to be well worth the wait
person Malachi2223
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I can't believe this epic 1st part is finally finished! I bet you feel such a sense of accomplishment! :D

This final chapter was great. It was so well done that it was seamless. There was just one error that you made a few times that I feel duty bound to point out...

When you were talking about the clan possessing the heart you used 'there' which is for direction or place instead of 'their' which is for possession.

I really enjoyed taking this journey with you and I'm definitely looking forward to the next installment. ^^ Until then...<3
person v
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i can't even describe to you what an enjoyable read moonlight denial has been. a complex plot, well-rounded characters, humor as well as heartfelt emotion - this story has got everything. i felt like it would turn out to be a series of some sort, since finding one heart took so many chapters. and i'm really glad! each notification email i got brought a smile to my face, this story is that good.

looking forward to moonlight conviction!