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April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I've been gone for so long. But no matter how nice and.. human for the lack of a better word... I still hate Conrad with every fiber of my being. And I'm starting to wonder which deamon it is that is connected to Nicoli so tightly. As well as why the Fairbrook's didn't notice that the "touch" has grown darker/more recent.
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April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I love this story. I was just wondering though, did something happen to it, when ever I try and read it it says it has been hidden.
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March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* I've been neglecting my reviews again. :( Sorry!
(and I don't remember if I've reviewed Ch. 60 yet, but I think my last review was for 59... so...)
It's good to see Nicoli working through the trauma and I was, like, weirdly exstatic to see Conrad showing some heart. I mean, if any of my friends had heard the disgustingly 'bitch-like' noise I made... Oh the pain. lol
I KNEW he wouldn't be able to be mean anymore. Who could? Especially after hearing about the whole almost-raped-by-a-seven-foot-tall-psychotic-serial-murdering-vampire thing.
And is Amelia going to tell Nicoli about his dark/evil aura thing? Does that mean we'll be getting back to whatever made him go crazy, and the song that freaks his mom out, and whatever happened with the voice and the funeral home thing again? Because I've been pretty much dying to figure that shit out! lol
(and I don't remember if I've reviewed Ch. 60 yet, but I think my last review was for 59... so...)
It's good to see Nicoli working through the trauma and I was, like, weirdly exstatic to see Conrad showing some heart. I mean, if any of my friends had heard the disgustingly 'bitch-like' noise I made... Oh the pain. lol
I KNEW he wouldn't be able to be mean anymore. Who could? Especially after hearing about the whole almost-raped-by-a-seven-foot-tall-psychotic-serial-murdering-vampire thing.
And is Amelia going to tell Nicoli about his dark/evil aura thing? Does that mean we'll be getting back to whatever made him go crazy, and the song that freaks his mom out, and whatever happened with the voice and the funeral home thing again? Because I've been pretty much dying to figure that shit out! lol
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March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey Darkness! *glomps* It's been a LONG WHILE! I don't know if you remember me but I'm that girl that (for some UNKNOWN reason) constantly read your story when midterms and finals come along. Ring any bells? xD I'm not surprised if it doesn't since I think I stopped keeping up aff.net since chapter 22! :O I KNOW right?! So loooon ago! Anyways, it's me M i l k x ness xD but under different pen ;) Just felt like I needed a change ^___^
ANYWAYS! Once again... midterm is upon us all! NOOOO But the good news is... SPRING BREAK! YESS So i dedicated two full days to reading all the chapters instead of hw that's due in 2 days... ;^; n-nuuu D-darkness! >__< I promise to do them *clings* Now that I finished to the latest chapter I can take a breather and get some hw done xD Every time I wanted to stop reading, it gets more intense and so much drama and past conflicts keep popping up making me glued to the screen! Yea, you have that affect on me... not that I mind of course ;)
Anyways I can't for more and I really want to know what they're going to do about the Book! And if the Guardian is actually in Amelia's family! *gasp*
~milky
p.s. DUDE i think I remember telling you that there was a manga called Demon's Diary that has something like Crystals Hearts right? A LOOONG time ago? ANYWAYS! There's a manga (that i read recently ;P) that revolves around a scary bird past thing kinda like the Cock Robin thing! It's about a woodpecker though! xD It's called Deadman Wonderland! The main character is the woodpecker and... well I don't really want to describe the entire story and ruin it for u ;) so you'll just have to read it yourself. You can read it at www dot thespectrum dot net
ANYWAYS! Once again... midterm is upon us all! NOOOO But the good news is... SPRING BREAK! YESS So i dedicated two full days to reading all the chapters instead of hw that's due in 2 days... ;^; n-nuuu D-darkness! >__< I promise to do them *clings* Now that I finished to the latest chapter I can take a breather and get some hw done xD Every time I wanted to stop reading, it gets more intense and so much drama and past conflicts keep popping up making me glued to the screen! Yea, you have that affect on me... not that I mind of course ;)
Anyways I can't for more and I really want to know what they're going to do about the Book! And if the Guardian is actually in Amelia's family! *gasp*
~milky
p.s. DUDE i think I remember telling you that there was a manga called Demon's Diary that has something like Crystals Hearts right? A LOOONG time ago? ANYWAYS! There's a manga (that i read recently ;P) that revolves around a scary bird past thing kinda like the Cock Robin thing! It's about a woodpecker though! xD It's called Deadman Wonderland! The main character is the woodpecker and... well I don't really want to describe the entire story and ruin it for u ;) so you'll just have to read it yourself. You can read it at www dot thespectrum dot net
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March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Usually I'm not one to review...Mostly because I usually have no idea what to say lol...
But I also usually don't read originals...I was kinda browsing looking for shorter stories and I came across this, ended up loving it and read it all in about 2 days lol (clearly I have no life...also I have a horrible cold) but really pretty much awesome :D
but like I said...as good as I can be with words reviews aren't really my thing so I'll shut up now lol
But I also usually don't read originals...I was kinda browsing looking for shorter stories and I came across this, ended up loving it and read it all in about 2 days lol (clearly I have no life...also I have a horrible cold) but really pretty much awesome :D
but like I said...as good as I can be with words reviews aren't really my thing so I'll shut up now lol
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March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I wanna see Nicoli and Conrad get it on lol but alas that won't ever happen :)
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March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think your story could pretty well rival up to some of the best known vampire authors cus seriously im with all my being ABSOLUTLY HOOKED INTO YOUR STORY. you are absolute perfection in your story i can see every vivid detail every crisp scene or emotion it's all poetry in itself you are a MASTER of vampire slash BRAVO!!!!!! lol please keep it up Darkness absolutly your fan F.B.O.L.F
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March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! It was an interesting beginning to Felix's story. Before that though...please explain to me how the hell Nicoli's parents didn't wake up with him falling down the stairs and then knocking everything out of the medicine cabinet? No parent, especially a worry wart mother like Nicoli has, would sleep through all of that noise! *shakes head bewildered*
What is the deal with Nicoli's eye and what connection does it have to this bad guy? Is Nicoli supposed to be Cock Robin? That what it seems like from the dream with him having wings and suddenly getting shot with an arrow through the chest. It's kinda creepy that this guy can seemingly watch Nicoli. At least it seems like he can from what he said about the vamps marring Nicoli's flesh.
I feel really bad for Felix now after seeing what a terrible life he had with his mother. Who would sell their own child into prostitution? What a terrible terrible person she was! I hope she died a horrible and painful death!!!
Felix really makes it hard to care about him. I didn't see Nicoli's overture as pity, it was just compassion. Why does Felix try so hard to keep Nicoli at arm's length? Is he really that jealous of Nicoli that he can't be friends with him the way he is with the clan members? I really wish he'd get over it and himself and attempt to be friendly with Nicoli.
I'm very curious to see what you've got up your sleeve for the next part, I hope it's all of the rest of Felix's story. Oh BTW...just so you know, I think you have my email on your list twice cause I get 2 notifications every time you send them out. Just FYI!
What is the deal with Nicoli's eye and what connection does it have to this bad guy? Is Nicoli supposed to be Cock Robin? That what it seems like from the dream with him having wings and suddenly getting shot with an arrow through the chest. It's kinda creepy that this guy can seemingly watch Nicoli. At least it seems like he can from what he said about the vamps marring Nicoli's flesh.
I feel really bad for Felix now after seeing what a terrible life he had with his mother. Who would sell their own child into prostitution? What a terrible terrible person she was! I hope she died a horrible and painful death!!!
Felix really makes it hard to care about him. I didn't see Nicoli's overture as pity, it was just compassion. Why does Felix try so hard to keep Nicoli at arm's length? Is he really that jealous of Nicoli that he can't be friends with him the way he is with the clan members? I really wish he'd get over it and himself and attempt to be friendly with Nicoli.
I'm very curious to see what you've got up your sleeve for the next part, I hope it's all of the rest of Felix's story. Oh BTW...just so you know, I think you have my email on your list twice cause I get 2 notifications every time you send them out. Just FYI!
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March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
absoloutly wonderfull!!!! I really love it that you show us this strange guy from his dream again!!!! He is really scary!!!! And kind of protective of Nicoli!!! I really want to know who he is and what he has to do with his eye pain!!!! But well like allways you will probably keep me hanging with this stupid eye pain!!!! I think I'm going to ignore this whole thing till you explain or elese I will go nuts, speculating my head of^^ And then Felix past!!! It was so sad!!!! Hope the totalhappieness will weight it up!!!! I really don't want to know how he died!!!
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March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow, i missed two chapters!, i've missed Nicoli's dog, strangely! I still say it's a demon! update soon *kisses*